《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》it's lunch time. 😍
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At mehta's mansion
In the morning,
Avni woke up slowly and got fresh up.and was thinking what to wear as Neil is coming for lunch.
Avni's pov
I don't know what to wear today...Neil is coming home for lunch...wait wait y am I behaving like this.why am i so much excited.why I need to think wt to Wear today.no Avni u r not gone a fall in love..no u can't trust someone this soon...no.noo...way!!
Riya enters Avni room
Riya: Di!! Kya huva?? Wt r u thinking about??
Avni: Kuch nahi Riya!!oh shit!! I forgot to ask about audition?? Wt happened?? Did u select?? She asked everything in single breathe.!!
Riya: ha..Di!! I selected...🥳🥳
Avni: when is party???
Riya: tonight..I'm gonna invite Ali and Neil and also DD
Avni: ok..fine!!good idea!!let's have fun!!.
At khanna's mansion.
Neil was getting ready in formals and after getting ready he went downstairs..!!her mom saw him n asked
Shweta: Neil's beta!! Where r u going?? U don't have work at p.s today??
Neil: I have mom ..but I need to attend lunch at Avni's home...so I'm in formals.
Shweta: Avni koun?? Thinks for 2secs and says ho vo ladki Ka Ghar..Jo tum kal save Kiya??
Neil: ha maa neela ma and Ashish uncle..I mean her parents insisted me to join lunch !!
Shweta: ok beta!! Have a nice time..
Neil: smiles and says thank u maa
...u too
Haves his lunch hugs his Bebe and mom and go police station.
At afternoon
Neil completes his work and goes to mehta's mansion
At mehta's mansion
Neela and Avni are bringing all the dishes to dining table.
Others along with Ali were sitting at Living room and talking some random things.then Neil comes there and they listen a door bell.and Avni immediately gets up and says.
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Avni: i think Neil had arrived.i will open door and check.
Neela: okay!! Beta
Avni immediately open door and smiles at Neil.
Avni: hi!! Neil..how r u ??
Neil: I am fine Avni!! Tum kaiso ho?? R u feeling good??
Avni: ha Neil! I'm absolutely fine..come in.
Neil nodes and both goes inside.
And immediately goes to dayavanthi and takes her blessings.and she blesses him then she go to Ashish n neela to take blessings neela stops him.and hugs him and caresses his cheeks.ashish also hugs him.then he goes to Ali gives hug to him.and gives a side hug to Riya.
Neela: kaiso ho beta??
Neil: meh teek Hu aun...and stops and say maaa app kaiso ho??
Riya: everybody are fine...and were eagerly waiting for you..
Neil: Acha and smiles..
Neela: aavo beta!! Let's have lunch?
Neil nodes in yes and everybody settles in dinning table.
Avni: today I will serve u all!!
Neela: tum??
Avni: haa maa! Y I should not serve or wt??
Neela: ok ok!! As u wish madam!!
Avni:smiles and says that's like my mom
Neil stares at her and smiles at her expressions and cute behaviour.
Everyone will finish their lunch..and settles down at living room.
Neil: lunch was so delicious neela ma! And it was a great dinner..I had a good time with u!!
Neela: yah!! It was like the family time...after so many days!!only Ur family is missing.!!.
Avni: ha..ma Ur right!! Next time we can invite them also!!
Neil: next time...u all should come to my home...my cooks delicious food!!
Ashish: ok fine!! Inform me before I will make some free time like today!!
Neil: next Sunday??.
Everyone nodes in yes!!
Neil: Ali Ur also coming don't forget okay??
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Ali:okay fine!!
Everyone were silent for sometime.avni thought to break it
Avni: come Neil!! I will show u our home!!
Neela: ha good idea show him..I will complete kitchen work!
Ashish and Daya(unison): yah ..i will take some rest!!
Neil: okay!! Riya and Ali join us
Aliya nodes in okay!!
Avni showed whole house to Neil..
And all for of them settled down in Avni's room and spoke some random things.after a while Ali and Neil went to their respective houses.
Khanna's mansion
N
eil came to home and he was extra energetic and happy.
Shweta: kya bath hey Bacha..bahut khush lag Raha ho??
Neil: Kuch nahi ma buss bahut enjoy Kiya tha lunch meh!! Avni Ka bahut acha hey ma ..I just loved them..!!
Shweta: loved her family or her!!
Neil blushes
Neil (stammers): isa.. Kuch nahi ma..we r just frnds..!!
Shweta:just friends??
Neil: ha maa!! And u will also love them..next Sunday t
Her family is coming to our home for lunch!!
Shweta: wow!! Acha uss din apka papa ki bhi Ghar par hi reheney keliye boldhati Hu!!
Neil: ok mom ..I will take some rest..and hugs her and goes to his room and thinks about his day and takes a nap.
Mehta's mansion
Living Room
Daya: Neil bahut acha ladhka hey naa!!
Neela: haa maa!! Next Sunday dikte hey uska parivar kaise hoye hey!!
Ashish: uska parivar bhi bahut acha Hoga isliye vo itina Acha aur simple hey!!
Riya: ha...maa I heard so many good things about their family....I forgot to say u papa...u used to say about khanna's na..Neil uska family hey!!
Ashish: u mean..vo khanna's jisse hum business partners bane keliye next month meeting raka tha???
Riya: exactly papa!!
Ashish: so everything is going so cool😇
Neela: Riya!! Avni kaha hey??
Riya: dhi so gayi thi...she was so tired.
Neela: teeke! Tum bhi soo jao!!
Riya: ok ma!! Good night and hugs Neela Ashish n daya.
Everyone goes to their favourite sleep land!!!
Thank you
Take care guys
Love💙
Vidhya
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