《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》super cop😍
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At police station
Neil enters into the police station..
Everyone salutes him..
Neil: DD come here
DD: yes sir...and salutes him
Neil:u said we got something new case???
DD: yes sir we got a murder case
Neil: oh...give me the case details!!
DD:ok sir!! And gives him a file... here is all the details about the case sir
Neil observes the case details for some time and calls DD
Neil: come let's go to crime scene
DD: ok sir!! And says driver to take the jeep..
Neil, DD with 2 constables goes to the crime scene.
Neil: who gave the complaint...???
DD:servant working at victims home gave the complaint sir..
Neil: call him I need to speak to him!!
DD: ok sir!!
DD calls the servant
Neil:tum a dead body ko kaab Dekha..? Us vakt tum kya Kar Raha tha??where were u???
Servant(confidently): Aaj Subha jab meh kaam keliye Ghar Aya tha tab mei sir ko bulaya tha par vo Kuch bath Nahi Kiya..isliye meh uske room lo jakar Dekha tho vo mar chuka tha...isliye meh immediately police ko call Kiya aur police station jakar compilant Kiya tha..aur meh kal work complete Kar Kar 6pm ko wapas mere Ghar ghaya...
Neil: ok...we will call u when ever we need to investigate...give Ur NUM and u should not go out of city without our permission...u can leave now..
Servant: ok sir!! Thank you
Neil:DD! once investigate his neighbours and family members about him..I need his complete details.
DD: ok sir..
Neil: did postmortem reports came..??
DD:no sir! Once I will call them n ask..
DD calls and asks
DD: sir.. reports had come sir...victim was murdered with knife..
Neil: at what time the murder might happen??
DD: around 11 o clock it seems sir..
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Neil nodes and ask officers to take fingerprints and send them to lab.and goes to station and thinks about a case
Victim is a successful business man... through investigate we got to know that he had no enemies and he is a cool man and he don't have a family ,he lives alone in the home.. servant was not at home...then who could have done this..he comes out of trance has he gets a call..he lifts the call
DD: sir forensic reports had come!we can find the finger prints only on his legs but the fingerprints on body
Doesn't match any of the employees of his office and home
Neil: it seems like it is a planned murder.but our criminal had given us a clue...find out whose finger prints are their on body..and cuts the call..
Neil calls the servant and asks him about the neighbours and behaviour of his owner..he says that he has no enemies and had no issues with his neighbours.
Neil thinks for a while and they might kill him for his money...wait let's find about his properties.and Calls someone and ask about victims properties and was shocked to listen it..and immediately calls DD
Neil: fingerprints keh bare Kuch pata Chala kyaa???
DD: nai sir..still processing
Neil: Acha jaldhi kardo...meh victim ki lawyer se bath Kiya...usne Bola tha ki all the properties of victim was transferred on the name of person..Vikram...!join hi sakta hey a Vikram??
DD: pata Nahi sir...mujhe tho investigate meh koyi iss key bare meh Nahi Bola
Neil: lawyer had said me that he will send information about him...wait a minute yes he had sent I will said u his details..
Trace every information about him..and always collect his fingerprints..it might match to the culprit..ok sir sure!
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Neil sends details to DD...after a while Neil gets a call and DD says that Vikram us not at his place and his neighbours had said that he went to some trip..
Neil..Acha teek hai...meh aa Raha Hu.. investigate karlo ki vo Kaisa admi our unka aur victim Ka kya connection hey. And end the call..and reaches Vikram's home
Neil searches around the house and he finds a window and finds it open...and slowly enters into the house...searches all around the house and finds some paper in which he found victims photos and was shocked..and thinks hey koun ho sakta hey...and he finds one of the photo...a tho servant aur Vikram Ka photo..a kaise ho sakta hey..it means the servant was also included in this murder...we should immediately catch the servant and call DD to take and come servant to the police station for some investigation.
And take all the pictures and goes to police station.
Neil investigates the servant in his style and shows the all the pictures and asks him the truth...and the servant says that he is the friend of vikram... Vikram's father was frnd and business partner of victim...but victim had got separated from business due to some personal issues and ego clashes b/w them victim had succeeded but his father had failed as a business and said that due to his had went to depression..so to take the revenge Vikram asked me help and act as a servant...and as he is my frnd i joined as servant to help him..Vikram force fully took
All the properties from victim and killed him 2 days.
He didn't know that police could would investigate about the properties and could find him this easily..
Neil: DD arrest him and also trace Vikram as soon as possible..
DD : ok sir..and salutes
after half an hour DD finds the Vikram location and arrests him.
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was watching news and was very happy as his child was so intelligent and caught the culprit very quickly...Prakash khanna was very proud as his son was coming in tv and everyone are praising him for his bravery..after a while Neil comes to him along with DD
Shweta:hey Tillu..tum agayi beta and hugs him and kisses him on forehead and says u did the great job..Tillu..
Niels gives her a smile...and
Neil:ma meh kitini bar Bola apko...mujhe Tillu mat bulavo and pouts...
Shweta: oo meri beta naraz hogay...and hugs him.
Prakash: Neil! I am proud of u beta..keep rocking and hugs him...Neil hugs him back and smiles..
Shweta: arey DD beta...meh bhol gayi...baiti beta Kuch lane keliye likar athi Hu..
DD: thank you aunty ji.par mujhe Kuch kaam hai...meh Ghar jaana Hai..says it and hugs Shweta ,Neil,Prakash and Bebe and goes
Bebe: arey Shweta baat badh meh karo aur abb merey Neil ko Kuch kane keliye tayar Karo (to Neil) tum jao aur fresh up hojao...aur kana kakar rest karlo..
Shweta: tekh hai..meh Kuch Karl
Lethi Hu..
Neil goes to her Bebe hugs her and goes to his room and gets freshen up
After at dinner time...all will have there dinner with lots of fun and jokes
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Hey guys..!! That's it for today's chapter...I hope u all liked it...plz ignore mistakes
And this is first time to write crime scene plz ignore if there are any mistakes or if it doesn't make any sense ...and I wrote this chapter only to say that how brave and intelligent Neil is comment n let me know if u have any ideas for further story....
Thank you guys..
Take care
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