《Avniel os ( real love )》Real love 1
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So , I am starting my first os
N : Avni Avnikahan ho yaar ( making hair )
P: Niel
N : Avni yaar ( he sees her and then realize that she is juhi )
N : j..j..juhi
J : vo Niel ( she was going starts something but Avni comes there )
A : juhi bebe tumhe bula rahi thi
J : what
A : haan bula toh rahi thi
J : (remembers) oh haan main aati hun
Juhi goes
A : kya hua ( anger )
N : kya ( confused )
A : tumhe pata hain na main bebe ke saath thi
N : toh
A ; what toh bulaya kyun
N : kya haan kya Maine kitni Baar bola hain ki mujhe bata ke jaya karo
A : Niel Maine bataya to tha
N : oh...w..o t..tu..mm... hmmm
A : kya hmmm (angry )
(Phone rings )
A : hello
P : hi
A : kaun
P : bhul Gayi yaad karo
A : ab tumhara naam agar mere mobile pe show nahi kar raha aur unknown diktata hain toh main kya antaryaami hun jo pata laga lungi kaun ho tum ( Avni was angry with Niel since morning and now by some cheapo on the phone made her red like anything with anger )
N : Avni calm down Laayo phone do
N: hello actually my wife is pregnant so side effects ok sorry
P : but he.. hello
Niel cut the phone and see Avni
A : Niel what you say to him
N : whattt ( he takes her and goes to bed)
N : Avni I am so sorry
A : not accepted
N : Avni pls
A : no
N : Avni
Avni was sleeping when Niel came near her and kissed her and she mistakenly kissed Niel on the lips and Avni and Niel get shocked
But there moment was broken by shweta who seen all this and teased so much that Avni got angry with Niel
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Avni turns her face in other side but our Niel slightly comes near her and kissed her . Avni was shocked and turn her face towards Niel and gets another 100volt shock he kissed her on her lips . Avni started blushing and ran from there .
N : arre Avni maaf kiya ki nahi
Avni slightly peek from the door and nodded in no and goes to the kitchen
N : avniiii ( laughing )
Niel decided to take juhi for an outing so juhi be relax .
Niel came back with juhi they both were carrying bags and talking . Bebe see them and think something the taught was broken by Niel .
N : bebe aap kya Soch rahe ho
B : kuch nahi puttar
J : Niel pls meri help kardona
N : haan chalo
They went to juhis room
N : juhi ab tum rest karo
J : Niel ( she act to be fall )
N : juhi sambhalo ( pick her up )
J : Niel tumhe pata main jab rangmahal mein thi tab meri koi raksha Karne nahi aata tha ( fake crying )
N : juhi par ab to tum safe hona ( Niel hugged juhi )
Juhi also hugged him and thumbs up someone and the person clicked the photo and send it to someone
Niel went to his room and saw Avni was nowhere he goes to bebe where he heard bebe and shweta talking about Avni's insecurities
B : Shweta aaj jab Niel aur juhi aaye tab Maine Avni ko Dekha wo tujhse kuch keh rahi thi
S : haan bebe usne kahan ki wo kahin bahar jaa rahi hain aur Niel juhi ke saath tha toh wo chali gai
B : kahin wo
S : haan bebe mujhe yahin lag raha hain ki wo insecure hain Niel aur apne relation se
Niel heard all this and felt bad he was going towards his room when he saw Avni
N : Avni ( he immediately hugged her ) are you ok
A : Niel kya hua main theek hun
N : kuch nahi chalo room mein
A : Niel ek minute
Everyone was seeing them including juhi and neela
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