《MY INNOCENT BUTTERFLY✅》Reception❤️
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Reception
Hashim and Asmara greeted everyone with their smiles...
Asmara was a bit emotional after meeting her baba,her sister and her mama...
The elegant couple sitting on stage
"Hashim?"Asmara whispered.
Hashim hummed in response.
"Hashim...something is pricking behind my back!"Asmara told.
Hashim frowned looking at her.
"Its causing pain...what to do now?"Asmara asked.
"I'll call Ayesha,she will take you to restroom...you can check there."
Hashim replied.
Hashim gestured Ayesha to come to him.Ayesha came towards them.
"Yes Hashim...you want something??"Ayesha asked.
"Asmara needs to use restroom...go with her."Hashim said.
"Oh okay..lets go Asmara,be careful..."Ayesha said.
Sana and Sara also joined them.
"Come sit here let me check!"Ayesha said and Asmara sat on the couch.
"What happened?"Sara and Sana asked.
"Something is pricking in my back!"Asmara replied.
"Oh here is the safety pin,it got open and was pricking you nothing else!"Ayesha said adjusting the pin.
"Thank you api!"Asmara smiled and straightened her legs on the couch,back resting with head rest.
"I am so tired...I don't want to go outside!"Asmara said.
Sara and Sana giggled.
Ayesha smiled and said "ok but only for 5 minutes,otherwise your husband will come here searching for his lost butterfly!"
All of them laughed,Asmara smiled shyly.
"So mara what you got as wedding gift?"Sana asked chirply.
"Kangans...but I am not wearing,these were not matching to the dress na!"Asmara replied.
"Oh...okay!"Sana replied.
"Asmara your anklets are so beautiful btw!"Ayesha said.
"Yes api from where you got these...I haven't seen them before!"Sara said curiously.
"Oh these...umm Hashim gifted me these!"Asmara replied and blush crept on her face remembering the moment.
"Oh wow...these are so beautiful and simple also!"Sana and Sara cheered.
"Hashim is such a dark horse(chuppa rustam)...he never told me that he is going to gift you these...btw these are so pretty!"
Ayesha replied.
"So your actual wedding gift is this!"Sana said.
"Ayesha api...I haven't gifted Hashim anything!"Asmara said sadly.
"Oh Asmara...husband gives gift to wife...wedding gift,not wife,don't take stress now!"Ayesha said face palming herself.
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Sara and Sana laughed.
"Look...Mr.Hashim is texting me to bring you back!"Ayesha teased showing Hashim's text to Asmara.
"Let me tease my brother a little."Ayesha said with a huge grin on her face.
"How?"Sana and Sara asked in unison.
"Hashim actually there is a problem...Asmara can't walk,her feet got injured badly!"Ayesha voice messaged Hashim.
"Haw...api,I am.fine?"Asmara was surprised.
"Oh dear Asmara...I know,just enjoy!"Ayesha repiled.
Bing...Ayesha got Hashim's voice mail and played it:-
"How...what happened,did she fell anywhere,you should have been concious na,she was wearing a long dress...should I come there??"
All of them laughed and Asmara was also enjoying.
"Actually Hashim her foot got injured due to the anklets she was wearing...its not my mistake!"Ayesha sent the message.
Hashim:"oh...but how?The anklets were simple and smooth...I checked myself before buying!"
Ayesha was continuously laughing.Asmara's face was worth watching...she was enjoying but also worried for Hashim.
Ayesha mimicked Hashim
"Haw...you should have been concious na!."and at the end she laughed.
"Idiot...bring her here,I got everything now,you are just pulling my leg!"Hashim replied.
Ayesha:"hahaha...we are coming bro...your titli is absolutely fine!"
They went back to the hall...
"Good going Asmara...best way to thank your husband for the gift!"
Hashim said pretending to get hurt.
"Ha...Hashim,I didn't do this!"Asmara said holding his hand.
"It was Ayesha Api's wish to do so!"Asmara said.
"Don't make this puppy face now...this time I am not getting affected by this!"Hashim replied.
"Sorry please."Asmara squeezed his hand.
Hashim removed his hand from Asmara's grip but remained silent.
Asmara spoke up:"Hashim please...if you won't talk to me,I'll start crying!"
"I am talking to you!"Hashim replied.
"No...talk politely and nicely na!"Asmara whined.
"I am talking politely Asmara..."Hashim said politely.
"No you are not!"Asmara replied.
"How?"Hashim asked.
"You are calling me by my name!"Asmara complained.
Hashim smiled unnoticed by Asmara.
"So what...I should call you by your name...what's the problem in it??"Hashim asked.
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"You are not getting my point...why...Hashim please call me...umm"Asmara said.
"Umm..what??"Hashim asked.
"Hashimm!!"Asmara again whined.
"Yes meri pagal Jaan!"Hashim said and laughed.Asmara's face instantly glowed up,she wanted to listen this.
"You wanted to hear this na!"Hashim smirked.
"N no!!"Asmara lied stuttering.
"Oh really?"Hashim asked.
"I just wanted you to call me titli!"Asmara lied again.
"Smart move wifey!"Hashim said raising his eyebrow.
"I am not lying!"Asmara replied still smiling and having contentment on her face.
"So why are you smiling??Hashim asked.
"No...I am not smiling nor blushing!"Asmara replied.
"But I never said that you are blushing!"Hashim laughed.
Asmara bit her tounge on her stupidity.
"Ma sha Allah,both of them are looking happy beside each other!"
Shiza said to Ali.
"Yes they are...Alhmdolillah our titli is happy!"Ali replied.
"Ali...but how will she adjust herself in abroad?"
Ali:"she surely will...Her father and her husband would be with her!"
Shiza nodded.
On the other side Hashim's parents were also happy because of their children happiness.
It was the ritual to take bride and groom back to her parents house for a night...so Asmara went there but Hashim didn't because he didn't want to invade their privacy.
Ali house...
Asmara was continuosly talking to her mother about her in laws,she was enthusiatic while talking and it was showing how much happy she was.
They had a great time and then Asmara went to her late room for sleeping...firstly she performed her prayer and then went to bed Sara slept due to tiredness but Asmara was still wide awake...she was remembering all of the moments with Hashim...
Suddenly something clicked in her mind...she opened her phone's gallery and saw Hashim's picture which she captured last night...He was sleeping and head adnorned with the flower petals and leaves crumbles.She smiled widely seeing the picture and sent it to Hashim...on the picture she wrote mr.nestie spotted🤭
Hashim was online...he immediately opened the text of Asmara and saw his picture with that caption...He smiled but didn't reply back.
Asmara frowned when she got no response.Why is he not replying now...haw,he got angry again!Asmara concluded.
Asmara:"Hashim?"
Hashim:"hm"
Asmara:"you are angry?"
Hashim:"no"
Asmara:"then why you didn't text back?"
Hashim:"what should have I texted back?"
Asmara:"sent her own picture and wrote...look Hashim I am more of the nestie than you,now please talk to me.!"
Hashim:"Haye Allah meri Jaan...I am not angry with you,I was just admiring my wife's art!"
Asmara:"you are bad,very bad Hashim!"
Hashim:"what I did Titli?"
Asmara:"you know...you are not talking to me since we were in the hall and you also not come with us here!
Hashim:"so sorry wifey but you know I wanted to give you privacy with your parents...I didn't want to be a third wheel between you and now I am very happy...want to know the reason?
Asmara:"yes!"
Hashim:"you sent me your first ever picture today!"
Asmara:"so what...nothing to be happy for!"
Hashim:"so now we are playing fighting fighting...my wife got angry now?"
Asmara:"I am not feeling sleepy😔
Hashim:"don't joke...sleep is your best friend."
Asmara:"I am not joking around Hashim,why don't you understand me?"
Hashim:"I am understanding your every move my titli."
Asmara:"you are not...I hate you!
Hashim smiled and said:"I love you too meri pagal Jan...but I am missing my wife's snores"
Asmara:"Hashim baba was saying that we will go next week...He had already booked tickets...What about the university?"
Hashim:"don't take tension about that...you'll do good in the university...I'll help you out if there would be anything to understand!"
Asmara:"yes you teach good!"
Hashim:"yes yes I remember I have taught you something...you are a good learner too!"
Asmara:"I am not talking about the kiss!"
Hashim:"hahaha...silly girl I am talking about the topic I taught you of physics!"
Asmara kept quite biting her lips when she understood what she just said.
Hashim:"don't get embarrased...we are husband wife,its all normal!"
Asmara:"I am feeling sleepy!"
Hashim chuckled and said:ok my love,sleep or should I come there?"
Asmara:"no...Allah Hafiz!"
Hashim:"Allah Hafiz."
Dated 7 April,2020.
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