《Falling for you》I don't know what to title this
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So if you all don't know I posted this story on a different website and someone sent me a message saying they didn't like the story because Dolittle doesn't end up with Lily at the end of the book because on some website they read that Lily doesn't actually die but survives and comes back to have a family with him.
Well I ended my story with John not ending up with Lily because I went off the movie where Lily dies in a ship wreck and in the end of my story he ends up with our leading female character Alli to have a family with her which is how I like how I wrote this story and I like my ending. But this person wants me to go through the whole story and change the name Alli to Lily instead because of a website online.
I told them that I am sorry that they didn't like the story and that I am not going to change Alli's name to Lily. Does that make me sound like a jerk or something? They said if I do change it to the proper that they would be my biggest fan if I would to do that.
I do not intend on changing any bit of this story because of one person saying they don't like how it ended. I love how it ended and am proud of how I wrote this story. When I was writing this I was going through a rough time and writing this story was my escape of the rough time and when I published this and I saw how many people were reading this it made me feel so happy and you all helped me get through that rough time. I am not going to say the profile's name and I will say if you do know which website I am talking about please don't go and be rude to this person it's their opinion.
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I want to thank all 15.6 K million of you for reading this story my mind is still blown at how many people have read this or are reading this. I hope you guys like how it ended and thank you so much for making this still be number one in Dolittle . It means so much to me and makes me have so much joy knowing you all like or loved reading this. You all are amazing and I love you guys so much.
Alli
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In Pursuit of Glory
I felt a huge physical force slam into my back. I didn't have any time to think as I rocketed into the wall and felt the drywall dent beneath my body. Eyes wide, I groaned and began to push off the wall when, unceasingly relentless, my assailant backstabbed me with a knife to my gut. I gasped; being stabbed there is no laughing matter. Even today, with all the advances of science, a wound like that can easily be mortal. Most likely would be. I gasped for air with a snarl, funneling the wind into my lungs to help them expand after being pancaked into the wall. Nobody f***ing backstabs me and gets away with it. If there’s one thing you should know about me, it’s that I love being alive. I love it more than anything else. It’s something only a dead person can understand, and I feel myself forgetting all the time. But there’s a secret to death, and I keep it with me. Always. It’s never permanent, it’s never peaceful, and it’s always filled with regrets. But death, despite all of its shortfalls, can give a short respite from life, like a comfy afternoon nap. Death is Respite. It’s a rest for the weary. And to all those people who wander in death lonesome and regretting their broken lives - always, without fail, cut too short - I beg them to take advantage of it. I tell everyone to take advantage of death, even when I can’t bring myself to do so. --- Ciaran travels the world in pursuit of Glories, unfathomable, power-bestowing balls of golden light sequestered in difficult-to-reach places. A fun fantasy romp with a character with an unorthodox narrative voice trying to find his purpose in the world.
8 70A Series Of School For Good And Evil One Shots
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8 189Tools of Slaughter: Story of a Human
In a world filled with war and horror, she was a tool of slaughter. She fought her way emotionlessly through the war for her masters' commands. But it isn't until they die that she realizes how much the people she killed meant to her. ... People say that being immortal would be an incredible dream come true, but they are liars. Immortality is a nightmare. People also say that they would rather have no feelings than to feel hurt. But she would rather feel something than to feel nothing at all; especially when people who care about her die right in front of her, under her own hands. She would do anything to become human. To live, to feel, to die. To be in control of her own fate. Even if it means losing everything.------------------------------------------------
8 158Brushing Bones
[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] Elisa's dream as a child was to always become a cop. She wanted to help people and make a change in her community. With the death of her mother, Elisa took in her younger sister Elizabeth, while still adjusting to her new life as a cop. Her life was good. She enjoyed her job. She was finally able to help the people in her community. However, that changes when she gets sent out on a welfare check just to find a family slaughtered. Now she has to hunt down the killer before anyone else can become a victim. Can she find the killer in time, or will she be to late?
8 145The Chiefess
!Moved from the old account! A world of savage barbarians, cannibalistic tribes, demi-humans, corrupt lords and monstrous creatures plague the Sothern Realm. This is now the world for a merchant. After being attacked by monsters, and saved by the mysterious but terrifying queen of one of the tribes, Charlie is thrust into a world he was not expecting. Can he help the realm, prove himself to his family, and above all survive the horrid horrors and brutal barbarians of the desert? Always editing and making the story more coherent, so if there are any grammar mistakes just know I'll get to them eventually. ps. also originally uploaded onto Scribble Hub: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/366916/the-chieftess/
8 83MY RANDOM POESIES
A series of my random poetic endeavours
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