《Falling for you》I don't know what to title this
Advertisement
So if you all don't know I posted this story on a different website and someone sent me a message saying they didn't like the story because Dolittle doesn't end up with Lily at the end of the book because on some website they read that Lily doesn't actually die but survives and comes back to have a family with him.
Well I ended my story with John not ending up with Lily because I went off the movie where Lily dies in a ship wreck and in the end of my story he ends up with our leading female character Alli to have a family with her which is how I like how I wrote this story and I like my ending. But this person wants me to go through the whole story and change the name Alli to Lily instead because of a website online.
I told them that I am sorry that they didn't like the story and that I am not going to change Alli's name to Lily. Does that make me sound like a jerk or something? They said if I do change it to the proper that they would be my biggest fan if I would to do that.
I do not intend on changing any bit of this story because of one person saying they don't like how it ended. I love how it ended and am proud of how I wrote this story. When I was writing this I was going through a rough time and writing this story was my escape of the rough time and when I published this and I saw how many people were reading this it made me feel so happy and you all helped me get through that rough time. I am not going to say the profile's name and I will say if you do know which website I am talking about please don't go and be rude to this person it's their opinion.
Advertisement
I want to thank all 15.6 K million of you for reading this story my mind is still blown at how many people have read this or are reading this. I hope you guys like how it ended and thank you so much for making this still be number one in Dolittle . It means so much to me and makes me have so much joy knowing you all like or loved reading this. You all are amazing and I love you guys so much.
Alli
Advertisement
- In Serial20 Chapters
Deity of carnage - Unholy Kingdom
Book 2 has started: Without body, withouth strenght. How do you fight the strong when you are nothing? Will Keeper survive the ordeals ahead of himself to finaly come out on the top? And become the greatest calamity Terra has ever seen! Authors note: Hello guys, some heads up. Not native in English and got dyslexia. Fret not I atleast have autocorrect. So, I hope its readable for you guys and girls out there. Hope you enjoy :) I will release ones a month optimally.
8 181 - In Serial13 Chapters
The Realm Reborn: Small Closed Demo (LitRPG)
One of the world’s top competitive gamers, Theo Robinson, has been invited to demo The Realm Online, Radical Interactive’s second attempt to delve into the VRMMORPG industry. Their first attempt had critics cringing at blocky graphics and less than realistic NPC interactions. Now, after over twenty years of marrying virtual reality and medical technology, Radical Interactive is ready to try again, and they have something really big in store.But Theo Robinson has no interest in The Realm Online. A MOBA player, RPGs have never been his thing. The only reason he accepted the invitation was because of another secret project that Radical Interactive has been working on. Word has it they have been trapping people with brain injuries inside of The Realm Online. When Nancy Shelton, YouTube's most famous female Let's Player (and Theo's best friend online), got into a car accident and ended up in a coma, it was suspected that her consciousness had been ported into the game. Theo's quest isn't to demo The Realm Online but to try to find his friend. But will he even be able to look for her when the immersion is so intense that he forgets who he is?
8 218 - In Serial10 Chapters
Hero's Journey
This is the story of three budding adventurers in a world of swords and sorcery. Follow Alder Col; a young swordsman of the Knight's Strong, Alys Merwen; a wizard apprentice extraordinaire; and Rolf; a wily street kid who has a need for coin. Updates infrequently.
8 119 - In Serial44 Chapters
Naruto: Beginning of Hatred
The action happens when Naruto and Sasuke fight in Valley of the End. Naruto lost and returns alone with hole in the chest to the village and see others Rookie 12, Hokage, Jiraya, Team7. When he was confronted with them, he was banished for not bringing Sasuke. It was not just an exile it was a sentence, a sentence to jail and more specifically Blood Prison. And here the story begins. How much Naruto change ? Will Naruto find love? Will someone save him from the hands of darkness? Will Naruto forgive his 'friends' and 'family' ? Will Naruto forgive the Leaf ? DOES NARUTO WANT TO GET REVENGE ?
8 446 - In Serial16 Chapters
Blackthorn
**Adult content* *-Tastefully written, yet graphic sexual situations-Violence-Adult themes Set in late Victorian LondonAdeline Moore, a kind, introspective and intelligent young woman. She is the wife of Thomas Moore, and together the pair live, what appears to be, a quiet, comfortable life; that is until Thomas is found dead, single gunshot wound to the temple. The burden of searching for the truth about Thomas' murder falls upon Adeline's shoulders after local law enforcement prove to be unavailing. She hires an elusive private investigator, an intimidating figure with a shrouded past to find the answers she so desperately seeks. In the process, however, Adeline is forced to reconcile that nothing about her old life was at all what it seemed. As the investigation makes headway, Adeline is thrust into the midst of something mysterious and otherworldly. She is stalked in her dreams by a man with no face, hungry for her and bold enough to take her as his own, but who, or what is this animalistic apparition? Does it exist outside of her dreams? Waking visions begin to haunt Adeline once more with an ominous warning she cannot decipher until it is already too late.In Adeline's ruthless search for the truth, she will unwittingly uncover far more than she bargained for.
8 184 - In Serial26 Chapters
"Love At First Flight" Technoblade X Reader
"Love At First Flight"Technoblade x ReaderA sweet short story of Phil's daughter return, only to capture the heart of a halfbreed Piglin.•°•°•This story is mainly a happy-happy story, it may come off as "flat" without the extreme rollercoaster and heart wrench, but honestly... I think Wattpad (Especially Technoblade x Reader) already has a lot of those, I just wanna write something I can smile at for the majority, life's enough to make me depressed, no need to add more by making a depressing story.°•°•°Dear Readers, I just wanted to make something clear. I am not the actual writer of this book. The orginal author is @ArcticGraysonFor more info, ask me or Arctic personally, I'm too lazy to write it :')
8 123

