《Vlad The Impaler (VAMPIRE-ELF)》Corrections
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Just a few things:
As you know, this is an ongoing rough draft so sometimes I will go back to change things. These are the changes I'll make this week. No need to go back and reread.
1) The scene where Vlad went swimming with the🦈🦈 and got ripped apart. Yeah, that wasn't supposed to happen 😬 I might have projected onto the book a little so it will be removed.
2) I said Terrence was turned directly by Vlad but now I see in my old drafts that is not so. He wasn't. The only living vampires turned by Vlad are Alexander, Alex and Shadow.
Thanks.
Sassy
We're almost done though, just tying some loose ends😂😂 When you see The Awakening, the story will be left with about 5 chapters.
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