《These tears i cry | PJM》F
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While walking to school ,
I felt the tears of the angels dropping down from the sky on my shoulders —
Students were running towards shelters together in a pair ,
But i was the only one standing in the middle of the road .
I looked left and right .
Then i saw you .
You ran towards me ,
This time with an umbrella in your hands .
I was hopeful for a moment ,
Thinking delusionally that you would hold my hand and shield me from the pouring rain .
But i see that you ran past me again ,
Shouting her name .
——
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