《wrong number // p.m ♡》not an update
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hI this isnt an update please dont kill me ily all
but:
i want to know everyones HONEST opinion on this story. so please answer every question honestly ❤️
|| to answer the question: comment on the quote thingy line idk what its called lol, you get me?||
•what do you like about this story/favourite thing about it?
•least favourite thing about the story/something you don't like about it?
•what do you think about the characters i have in it/the friendships/the personalities?
•what should i change about it?
•should it be in more online formats (texting, instagram) or real life?
•add more or less drama?
•add smut?
•do you enjoy reading it?
•should i stop adding notes at the beginning/end of each chap?
•any other questions/criticisms?
thanks bbys, dont be afraid to be honest, i want to improve my writing and stories and this really helps. i wont get offended i promise hehe❤️
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