《What if? (Old write will be written! And better than ever!)》Chapter 8 (dungeon part 1 edited)
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"hey, gang listen up guys I know we just had a big fight asta got kidnapped and the wizard king had to go save her, but we got assigned a mission to go search and clear for a new Dungeon before our enemies the diamond kingdom. The ones who will be going are asta, Noelle, and luck" *Yami said in his normal sarcastic annoyed voice knowing why the wizard king sent asta because of her magic even though "he hadn't even seen it" before* "What's a Dungeon?" *asta said having no clue what so ever what a Dungeon was then the black bulls start to explain too her what a dungeon was and asta got really excited after that, finral then took them to the dungeon and then he left saying something about girls but asta wasn't listening because luck keep babbling about fighting and some other mess while noelle just looked at him, they said goodbye to luck and then luck asta and noelle headed off to the dungeon and it didn't take long to get there (you maybe asking why asta didn't teleport them right to the dungeon, well asta likes getting fresh air and exercise as if she doesn't do that enough so thats why they walked there after Finral dropped them off some what close) *they had arrived and walked in as soon they walked further into the dungeon noelle started to cling asta she was pretty scared but asta didn't complain as she considered all black bulls her family since day one, and even though noelle was older then her asta saw her as her younger sister, everything was going fine until noelle tripped and landed on asta which in return bumped into luck knocking him to the ground breaking the lantern "AHHHH" *noelle screamed as it was now pitch black* "don't worry I've got this" *asta said reaching for her elemental grimoire using light magic to make a ball of light( the spell is actually called ball of light lol it floated and followed asta everywhere she went and only she can destroy it) the ball light up almost everything because it was so bright but they kept walking as the quickly found the entrance to the dungeon almost getting blinded by the bright blue light glowing all around the dungeon, asta dispelled her spell as it was already bright enough to see in the Dungeon they stared at the dungeon and it looked beautiful.
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I'll upload/ update part two of this later ok today
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