《Realize (PUBLISHED)》Realize (5)
Advertisement
Dedicated to Radiant67 because we have a very long conversation about the stuff that be both have the same views on. :)
The White party in Connectincut! :D
ENJOOOOOOY!
_________________________________________
The day of the White party finally arrived. The guests were supposed to dress formally in white. That was why Natalie shopped at Fifth Avenue with Maxine and Alex to buy some new clothes for them for the occasion.
The Samuels already went to the party in Connecticut before the Fergusons. The planned to go together, but Natalie insisted on using her own car. And so, Natalie, Maxine, and Alex used the Mercedes Benz for transportation.
Maxine didn't know how her mother knew which way to go and how she knew which house, but nevertheless they parked in front of a big green house with a humongous lawn. The parking space was good enough for twenty cars.
If truth be told, Maxine was used to going to parties. But the thing she wasn't used to was going to parties where she didn't know anyone. Plus, she was used to living an above average life. This, now . . . she was experiencing a way above average one.
She, her mother, and Alex went straight to the backyard where there was the main party. There was catering about twenty feet from the swimming pool. Looking around, all the people really did dressed in white. She half-expected that there was someone who would break the rule.
“Sweetie, your brother and I will be back shortly,” Natalie told Maxine. “I think I see Todd. Stay with him for the moment.”
Without another word, Natalie took Alex with her and left Maxine by the pool. Maxine didn't even have the chance to protest. It took all her will power not to stomp her feet in frustration. She would rather talk to a complete stranger than force a conversation with the guy who made her blood boil with just the sight of him.
When she looked around, she unintentionally saw Todd standing at a distance. He looked handsomely bored while wearing white pants and a polo shirt, with almost half of the buttons closed, showing a slight fraction of his chest. He looked like a younger version of Brad Pitt – the teen version, in fact.
Maxine wildly shook her head, pushing away the thought. Sometimes, Todd's looks made her forget how much she hated him. But she hated herself more for even thinking that.
Before she could hide, Todd already saw her. Without any expression on his face, he walked calmly towards her. She froze, until they were a feet apart. She composed herself then.
Advertisement
“Okay, you don't have to tell me,” started Maxine glumly, frowning. “I know I look awful,” she said it before he could.
She honestly didn’t like what Natalie bought for her. The skirt was just below the knee, the simple white blouse was also buttoned. What she didn't like about it was that it was colorlessly dull – except for the beautiful necklace her grandmother gave her.
“You're the one who said that,” he shrugged. “Besides,” he hesitated. He looked away and blushed the light shade of pink, then he scoffed, “You actually look human.”
Translation: Maxine looked nice.
She widened her eyes in utter shock. She understood what he meant and didn’t quite believe that she actually heard a compliment from him. She couldn’t say for sure if he was kidding because he looked and sounded serious, but the scoff made it complicated.
Janice and Natalie spotted them a moment later, and invited them to eat. They ate and laughed. Not long after, Todd and Maxine began to be bored. Eventually, she stood up and excused herself. She went to the food table and got herself sugar-free cookies, biting it bit by bit. A few minutes past, Todd saw her and chuckled.
He walked over to her and teased, “I didn't know you eat like a pig.”
“Gosh! That was really lame,” retorted Maxine in a mocking voice.
“If it was lame, you shouldn't have reacted like that.”
“Of course I’ll react! I’m the one being teased.”
“At least I –” Todd wasn’t able to continue what he was saying, because an irate Maxine shoved cookies in his mouth.
“You look better with that face,” she laughed.
He swallowed hard. “You're going to pay for that.”
Todd looked around and saw a cake. He put some icing on his hands and he spread it to both of Maxine's cheek. He was just too quick for her, so she wasn't able to dodge it.
“Oho, you just declared a food fight,” she said.
“Yeah, I did,” he nodded.
When she picked up a cup of chocolate dip, Todd knew it was his cue to run. So both of them ran around the pool, Maxine chasing Todd. She managed to catch him by his wrist, but she lost her balance and fell straight in to the pool – dragging Todd with her.
Of course, they caught everyone's attention.
“Mom, look!” beamed Alex, pointing at Todd and Maxine. “Can I swim with them?”
Advertisement
Natalie shook her head to Alex. Her eyes wandered to Janice, and they quickly exchanged meaningful looks.
“Why don't you go inside and play with your friends?” Natalie told Alex.
He frowned, but obeyed.
Both mothers went to their children, who were just climbing out of the pool.
“Can someone explain why both of you are dripping wet?” asked Janice, her voice with a tiny hint of amusement.
Just then, a waiter handed them towels. Natalie and Janice took them and gave them to Todd and Maxine.
“We decided to take a swim,” answered Todd nonchalantly.
Janice raised an eyebrow. “Fully clothed?”
“We couldn't wait.”
Maxine stared at Todd in disbelief. He was being Mr. Smartypants even to his own mother? But it looked like Janice was used to it. Maxine couldn't help but wonder where he got that personality from.
“It was an accident,” Maxine piped in. When the three of them looked at her, she explained, “We were being childish. Without meaning to, we slipped and fell to to the pool. I'm sorry.”
Todd rolled his eyes, while Janice and Natalie smiled.
“Thank you for answering properly, Maxine.”
“Why don't you kids go home?” suggested Natalie. “I couldn't help but notice that both of you were getting bored.”
“That's a brilliant idea,” agreed Janice.
After that, Todd and Maxine were sent home. Frankly, they were happy to go home instead of staying at that boring party full of old people.
A few hours later, Todd got dressed after having a quick shower. He was suddenly reminded of what his mother had said to him before he went home with Maxine.
“Maxine will be all alone in their home,” she had said, “so accompany her while you wait for us to arrive. Is that clear, Todd Zachary Samuels?”
He shuddered, remembering her mother call him by his full name.
After getting dressed, he went to the Ferguson's. Even if Janice hadn't ordered him, he would probably still check up on Maxine from time to time to see if she was doing all right. She was a girl, after all. For all he knew, she must be scared of being alone. And he didn't want that in his conscience. Yes, he had a conscience – no matter how hard that might be to believe.
Todd had to knock a couple of times before the door opened. Maxine was already wearing her pajamas. He didn't have to explain why he came because he knew that she was aware of Janice ordering Todd to stay with her.
“Thanks for coming here,” said Maxine quietly.
Todd merely nodded.
“So, what are we gonna do?” he asked, sitting on the couch.
“We could watch movies,” shrugged Maxine as she walked to the shelf of DVDs at the corner of the room. “Pearl Harbor?” she asked Todd.
“Go ahead.”
She got to her feet and set the player on. She reluctantly sat beside him, grabbing a pillow. They didn't speak as the movie started. They would occasionally laugh, for when Ben Affleck's character accidentally made the cork hit his injured nose. But when the Japanese air forces were attacking the ships at Pearl Harbor, tears fell down from Maxine’s eyes. Todd saw it, so he took out his handkerchief and gave it out to her.
“What's this?” she asked, taking the handkerchief from him.
“A hankie.”
“I know it's a hankie. What I meant was, why did you give me this?”
“You're crying, right?” He looked at the TV again, and added quietly, “I'll tease you tomorrow.”
When the movie finished, they fell asleep on the couch.
Later that night, Natalie arrived, carrying the sleeping Alex. She jumped at the sight of Todd and Maxine sleeping together. But then, she quietly laughed as she carried Alex to his room. She returned to the living room a few minutes later to wake up Maxine.
“Maxine, wake up,” whispered Natalie to Maxine's ear.
“Huh?” moaned Maxine. She slowly opened her eyes and saw Todd sleeping beside her. “Whoa.” She quickly backed away, resulting for her to fall off the couch. There was a loud bump, and she exclaimed, “I'm okay!”
Todd woke up from the noise. He rubbed his eyes and saw Natalie grinning at him. His eyes wandered to Maxine who was just standing up from the floor. He instantly understood what happened. He swiftly stood up and slightly bowed to Natalie.
“Good night, Aunt Natalie.”
With the last word, he hurried to the door and left.
_________________________________________
Won't be able to write a longer Author's Note because I'm dead bit from the hospital. I visited my best friend whom delivered twin baby girls! Woohoo! Yeah.. Holding an 8-hour old baby is really something. :)
So instead of me speaking, I wanna hear what YOU think about this chapter. Too cheesy? Or just right? :)
Upload: Saturday (Philippine time)
Please Comment and Vote -- if you like!! ^_^
Advertisement
- In Serial14 Chapters
Sonder
Set in the near future, Brad is a talented musician in high school, however he has extreme social disabilities and anxiety. He prefers to live life in virtual reality (VR) where he has an artificial intelligence assistant and therapy system called Sonder that helps give him social cues and coaching. He can also alter his appearance to one that he can be more confident in. He holds a virtual concert and finds out that Alice, his high school crush, is actually one of his fans. They get to know each other and become romantically involved, but have extreme trouble bridging the virtual and the real world. This is a wholesome, vanilla love story about overcoming your fears and learning how to live with your weaknesses.This is a short story with a new chapter released at least once a week on Wednesdays until finished.Book Cover art by Romi Lindenberg.
8 166 - In Serial391 Chapters
Atk 0 Crit All ~My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical hits to succeed!~
Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. ~2 chapters/week
8 171 - In Serial36 Chapters
YAOS 1 - Limitless Adventures - Yet Another OP Story Book 1
December 23rd 2018: Book 1 is now up at Smashwords and at Amazon. December 30th 2018: V1.1.2 of YAOS Book 1 is out, some content additions, fixed typos. Amazon's enhanced typesetting now displays tables properly. YAOS is shown through the eyes of some genius athlete getting OP inside a VR, ah wait, Full Immersion game, ?F.I.O?. Not a Hero, not a Nerd, just a driven individual paying for mistakes made, biding time until he can return to the Real World. He isn't defined like you'd normally do it, you can pick his looks and name all on your own, just like you do in video games. Believe it or not, keeping his looks undefined is harder than you think. His backstory isn't expounded in detail, but it drives his choices. Book 1 isn't about depressing sob stories but about fun and rushing forward, pursuing new horizons. Oh, and you'll end on a cliffhanger! Well, most serials do, so you will probably expect that without being told explicitly. But it isn't that bad, there's a lot of reveals and more to come once this book, that is the first in a planned three-part series, is finally ready for release on amazon et al. The published version will have: 1.) Godawful speaker tags, I hate them, they make you stop thinking and speed up editing so much. In hindsight they should have been in to begin with. But I stand by my goals proclaimed earlier. You guys should think while reading, that is the whole point of the exercise. Apply the knowledge and ideas, improve yourself, get creative! 2.) Pretty colored tables, the damned blue boxes, a lot of work, 69 in one book. Finally fixed amazon's centering issue. Can't say I liked the hours needed to debug that. 3.) The promised Mitara chapters. 4.) A cover! 5.) And lastly, updated polished versions of several chapters. MC shares more of his past, some terrible chapters (esp. 32) finally work. Some new scenes, minor rewrites in parts. Text flow and other issues. The current challenge is to maintain essential ambiguity while satisfying people wanting to know more without thinking three steps ahead. Balancing one with the other is tough. The smut which was in remains, but the story told is not to be superseded by it. A 15+ rating for the first book is also important, not to mention, YAOS wasn't meant to contain any smut to begin with. If the Author can turn to writing full time his output should increase, so please support YAOS #1 once it does finally release. ~Thank You~ No maps so far, that should be in, but is really hard to get done right. Again, tips are appreciated. Update September 2017: Stubbed chapters, sorry guys, currently don't have time to upload them elsewhere, polishing book 1 and 2, writing 3, takes precedence. Book 1 is in heavy editing, too much to keep synced and continuing editing. I'd need a site which offers JS-free rapid managing of chapters and comments. Coding one myself or setting a premade up is out of scope until I'm done with the books. RRL-old offered that, nuff said. This is only here because the author believes in fairies, nobody reads this, most likely. October to December 2017: Life threw some curveballs. February 2018: Book 2 draft 1 completed, at ~150K words. Book 2 is fairly epic in scope, requires 1 rewritten chapter, some editing. Tables and miscellanea are in, but needs at least a grammar pass. March 2018: Book 3 at 28k words, first arc, rest needs serious planning for spin-off and satisfying conclusion. July 2018: Yet another proofing/editing session of books 1-3, 101+ chapters, ~300k words. B3 at 48k, starts out great, but no ETA, no wordcount limit, in flux. But prioritizing my writing cannot be done, I hate the delays as much as you, but you will prefer the whole released in a timely fashion rather than wait. Knowing myself how excruciating waiting can be, at least you'll get significantly polished versions and an ETA on book 2 by release of book 1. December 23rd 2018: Book 1 is now up at Smashwords and in the process at Amazon et. al.. . To all who wait patiently, offered feedback, thanks again!
8 141 - In Serial33 Chapters
Sakuras In Ice (A Bleach Fan fiction)
While walking down a certain forest in the outskirts of the Rokun Distirct, Captain Commander Yamamoto stumbled upon a peculiar sakura tree. Why peculiar? Because the flowers it bear are all turned to ice.At the foot of the tree, a girl in white tattered clothes lay sleeping peacefully. What caught the captain's eyes is the butterfly clip she has on her hair and the ears and tails of a cat she has.Thinking that she is an abandoned girl, Captain Commander Yamamoto decided to bring her back to Seiretei and tend to her.Will this girl bring joy to the Gotei 13? And what about the massive amount of reatsu she is suppressing inside her?
8 119 - In Serial47 Chapters
Why Me(my story)
Harmonie is a 17 year old who is getting rape by her uncle. Her mom doesn't know . Read to find out what happens. Read
8 166 - In Serial10 Chapters
Three Wishes [TinCan]
Everyone is born with three wishes.Everyone usually wastes theirs as a baby/kid, with wishes like "I want to be fed, I want a toy, I want mommy" and things like that. You are special and are the only human on Earth with one wish left, what is it?Can is a simple person even as a kid and he still has one wish left.Based on prompt from ig:@writing.prompt.s
8 80

