《Wattpad India Awards 2021》Learn: Setup
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When you look back on some of your favorite stories, you'll often come up with a mind-bending moment that changed how you viewed everything. You thought the story was going one way and then suddenly it went another.
Or perhaps it was the time that everything came together. Finally, you got to see all of your favorite characters show up to defeat evil or the couple kissed, even though you knew all along it was going to happen.
These huge highs are so addicting that writers will want to pack their stories with them, sometimes without putting in the work for each one. Remember when we spoke about increasing tension? How the next goal always needs to be bigger, how the stakes need to keep rising?
Those 'stakes' come from set-ups. You can't have the conflict of the hero's family being in danger if the family was never introduced. You can't have a side character die heroically and expect it to be impactful if the emotional bond was never set up.
Let's talk about all the work that needs to be done in order to earn those moments.
All big moments need to be promised to the audience and they are going to be established in the opening chapters. Is there a villain? They'll need to be defeated. Is your character single and just bumped into a hottie? They're gonna get together.
As the reader, a promise has been made to you: you'll get the answer by the end.
This notion of set-up is present for all parts of a story. It works for the overall narrative, and it also applies to character arcs and even to smaller scenes. Everything you name or focus on in your story is a clue to your reader that something will happen. The more interesting or exciting that thing is, and the more time you spend on it, the more the reader expects something to happen with it.
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This manifests in the rule of Chekhov's Gun:
The principle that states every element in a dramatic work must be relevant. That whatever else we do as writers we must not hold "false promises" out to our readers.
Consciously or not, we're always loading Chekhov's Gun. Every sentence we write is a rifle hung on the wall. Sooner or later it will - and it must - go off. In this scenario, the gun is the set-up, a building block that adds context to your future pay-off.
Again, there are cases of misdirects which are used to make the reader think something is going to happen when something entirely different ends up happening. We'll get into that later.
The topic of set-up can be tricky. The simplest way to go about it is ensuring that your big future plot point doesn't appear out of nowhere, that it has some base and some foreshadowing.
Today, we're going to leave you with the winning stories from the previous editions of Wattpad India Awards. If you haven't read them yet, now's the time to do so!
Happy reading :)
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Artificial Mind[Old]
This story has been moved to a new page. It can be found here; https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/34948/artificial-mind 7 chapters/week as a minimum. First 3 books finished as of 04-05-2021. AI creation is something that has been on the minds of the people for decades. The concept of artificial minds learning just like us. Maybe even better than us. This idea is something people have strived to make more than conceptual. But, they have failed. Until now. This story will focus on the first few years after the first AI being born. We will see, from different perspectives, it growing up, and what adversaries it will face Fair warning: Slow pacing, bad language, way too many commas, and several mentions of France. Also, I need to warn you that you shouldn't take the content too seriously.
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A FORGEMASTER OF WAYLAND
William Drake, a modern day Illinois blacksmith, is no stranger to unusual orders, but the latest one is odder than most. He has been commissioned to create a sword of bizarre specifications, and the sword isn't the only thing that's strange. His customer, Markham, is definitely not a local, and balks at the bill. The sword is stolen by Markham, and William storms after him, finally retrieving the blade at the top of a rented Scottish tower. During the confrontation, William is transported, artifact in hand, to an alternate world called Wayland.Sly bartering demons, the Aos Si, wish to claim Wayland, as does a rival duke and his mage, Veddick. Meanwhile, a banished dieity, Credine, is seeking return to Wayland by using William as his unwilling avatar. Caught in a web between the three competing powers, William must unravel the mystery of the sword he has forged, stave off the encroaching god Credine and save the residents of Wayland from the god, the usurpation of the rival duke, and the Ao Si.
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Ascendance of a God
Julian Valera had risen to the status of a God in his past life. Little did he know that his lover would be the one who would betray him. On the brink of death, the God of Time sent Julian back to his past to regain his power and right his wrongs. Join Julian in his Fantasy/Reincarnation story where he will encounter many enemies and friends alike. Follow the action as he rises in power to regain what was taken from him, and along the way, find a little romance.
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Professional Killer's Death Was Temporarily Postponed
"Holiday,I have a bad news to you.After some trials,the officials decided to sentence you death penalty." "You don't need to provide me a team.I will gonna create my own team." "150 million real.That's the minimium amount of money we will rob." "You always like sacrificing your queen.Did you perhaps Mikhail Tal's daughter?." "I didn't expect I will like Korean idols.But the problem is I didn't know Korean language." "No matter how good you are,there will be always an Asian somewhere who is better than you huh." "Just like how switching to your pistol is better than reloading your gun,switching to your katana is also better than getting back your samurai." "Are we spies?assassins?agents?soldiers?contract killers?" "So what is our main goal here?.What is the purpose of this team?.Those are good questions.But let me answer that with another question.What if I tell you that right now,the fate of thousands of people is in our hands?.How about that?."
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Not Another Fantasy Story!
So my first time writing a story so bear with me . About a mage named Xare and give or take a few thousand years I'm a bit as old as the earth since I've almost literally been around since the world started forming and this is is my recollection of how I got dragged unto the most stupid adventure of all time. Guys ignore the first two chapter 5 the third one is the more or less finished project.
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