《Wattpad India Awards 2021》Learn: Setup
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When you look back on some of your favorite stories, you'll often come up with a mind-bending moment that changed how you viewed everything. You thought the story was going one way and then suddenly it went another.
Or perhaps it was the time that everything came together. Finally, you got to see all of your favorite characters show up to defeat evil or the couple kissed, even though you knew all along it was going to happen.
These huge highs are so addicting that writers will want to pack their stories with them, sometimes without putting in the work for each one. Remember when we spoke about increasing tension? How the next goal always needs to be bigger, how the stakes need to keep rising?
Those 'stakes' come from set-ups. You can't have the conflict of the hero's family being in danger if the family was never introduced. You can't have a side character die heroically and expect it to be impactful if the emotional bond was never set up.
Let's talk about all the work that needs to be done in order to earn those moments.
All big moments need to be promised to the audience and they are going to be established in the opening chapters. Is there a villain? They'll need to be defeated. Is your character single and just bumped into a hottie? They're gonna get together.
As the reader, a promise has been made to you: you'll get the answer by the end.
This notion of set-up is present for all parts of a story. It works for the overall narrative, and it also applies to character arcs and even to smaller scenes. Everything you name or focus on in your story is a clue to your reader that something will happen. The more interesting or exciting that thing is, and the more time you spend on it, the more the reader expects something to happen with it.
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This manifests in the rule of Chekhov's Gun:
The principle that states every element in a dramatic work must be relevant. That whatever else we do as writers we must not hold "false promises" out to our readers.
Consciously or not, we're always loading Chekhov's Gun. Every sentence we write is a rifle hung on the wall. Sooner or later it will - and it must - go off. In this scenario, the gun is the set-up, a building block that adds context to your future pay-off.
Again, there are cases of misdirects which are used to make the reader think something is going to happen when something entirely different ends up happening. We'll get into that later.
The topic of set-up can be tricky. The simplest way to go about it is ensuring that your big future plot point doesn't appear out of nowhere, that it has some base and some foreshadowing.
Today, we're going to leave you with the winning stories from the previous editions of Wattpad India Awards. If you haven't read them yet, now's the time to do so!
Happy reading :)
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- In Serial251 Chapters
Humanity’s Next Steps
Stories about humanity transcending with VR, BCI, implants, uploading conciousness, cloning, genetics, and cybernetics, and more.
8 285 - In Serial80 Chapters
Living a Long Life as a Legend
Reincarnating into a game-like version of a medieval magical world was fine and all. A good blend of two enjoyable tropes. Lock wished he'd been born with a bunch of cheats sometimes, sure, but he could settle with being functionally immortal by abusing the system as well. All rights to the art belong to Stefan Koidl, you can find his works here
8 175 - In Serial35 Chapters
Secunda
A young woman becomes the unlikely host to a monstrous skull and now must adapt to her strange new partner. However, he doesn’t come without challenges as she soon finds out. On top of it all, an old friend comes back into her life with a new dangerous stranger stalking right behind.
8 98 - In Serial12 Chapters
Sleeper within
Struggle is a part of life but what if life is a part of a struggle. Inspired by berserk and claymore(only inspired me to make gore dark fantasy other than that story is different). First two chapter is character development chapter. The story is the life of nick balesto known as grey-man. Constantly figthing with himself so that the monster within him doesn't shallow every precious thing of his. A struggle of the past and to find his woman who he first thought was dead, be careful as it is going to be the darkest of the dark. Also striving towards vengeance against the mystery of the church who have marked him and his family (military orphanage) sacrifice. But soon he gives up on vengeance as he realized rather than giving satisfaction it was taking his humanity. only to find out it was all connected. Aided only by titanic strength due to harsh childhood in military, his blunt magic blade and SLEEPER WITHIN......... Find who is this sleeper within.
8 69 - In Serial13 Chapters
HoneyComb
Will our bee character survive? Will he find his way with horrible directional skills? Or will his sudden obsession with honey get him killed... most likely, time to find out! Every chapter will have 1000 words or more.
8 194 - In Serial25 Chapters
Dance Till I Die (gxg) ✓
"I was ordered to kill you." 21 year old Mavis Griffon is a stripper for the Inferno night club when one night, a woman in a silver dress walks in. Calm, deadly, and a knockout blonde. There is something alluring about her, something intoxicating in the way she pulls out her gun and aims it at Mavis with words that will change her life forever."I was ordered to kill you."Her eyes search mine, as though she is waiting for me to scream, to run, to fight. But I only let a smirk grace my lips, and I hide my trembling hands as I say, "Then what are you waiting for?"
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