《Wattpad India Awards 2021》Learn: Setup
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When you look back on some of your favorite stories, you'll often come up with a mind-bending moment that changed how you viewed everything. You thought the story was going one way and then suddenly it went another.
Or perhaps it was the time that everything came together. Finally, you got to see all of your favorite characters show up to defeat evil or the couple kissed, even though you knew all along it was going to happen.
These huge highs are so addicting that writers will want to pack their stories with them, sometimes without putting in the work for each one. Remember when we spoke about increasing tension? How the next goal always needs to be bigger, how the stakes need to keep rising?
Those 'stakes' come from set-ups. You can't have the conflict of the hero's family being in danger if the family was never introduced. You can't have a side character die heroically and expect it to be impactful if the emotional bond was never set up.
Let's talk about all the work that needs to be done in order to earn those moments.
All big moments need to be promised to the audience and they are going to be established in the opening chapters. Is there a villain? They'll need to be defeated. Is your character single and just bumped into a hottie? They're gonna get together.
As the reader, a promise has been made to you: you'll get the answer by the end.
This notion of set-up is present for all parts of a story. It works for the overall narrative, and it also applies to character arcs and even to smaller scenes. Everything you name or focus on in your story is a clue to your reader that something will happen. The more interesting or exciting that thing is, and the more time you spend on it, the more the reader expects something to happen with it.
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This manifests in the rule of Chekhov's Gun:
The principle that states every element in a dramatic work must be relevant. That whatever else we do as writers we must not hold "false promises" out to our readers.
Consciously or not, we're always loading Chekhov's Gun. Every sentence we write is a rifle hung on the wall. Sooner or later it will - and it must - go off. In this scenario, the gun is the set-up, a building block that adds context to your future pay-off.
Again, there are cases of misdirects which are used to make the reader think something is going to happen when something entirely different ends up happening. We'll get into that later.
The topic of set-up can be tricky. The simplest way to go about it is ensuring that your big future plot point doesn't appear out of nowhere, that it has some base and some foreshadowing.
Today, we're going to leave you with the winning stories from the previous editions of Wattpad India Awards. If you haven't read them yet, now's the time to do so!
Happy reading :)
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- In Serial16 Chapters
Ensis Core
Karius Corvider, a youth with the unique ability to sense emotions, is the heir to the most prestigious knight family in Arthas. Despite being the son of a legendary knight, his horrible sword skill earns him the ridicule of his peers. One day, he falls in love with a silver-haired beauty named Hilde after witnessing her amazing display of fortitude.The only problem is she is a prisoner of war destined for endless torture and death.Karius unleashes his magic, an ability he kept secret his entire life, and helps her escape. He doesn't have much attachment to his home except for his sister Annabelle, but he is forced to leave even her behind.But that's okay because he gets the girl, right?…Not exactly.Hilde turns out to be a terrifyingly strong warrior who hates mages with a passion, and he is one of them. Exiled from his home, he travels the barren surface world together with his unwilling partner. Their adventure takes them to strange lands where they face deadly dangers and adversaries, from fantastical creatures to crafty mages… to Hilde's terrible sense of direction.Will Karius ever pierce Hilde's heart? Or will her short sword pierce his first?-------© Kanda Hikaru and ensiscore.wordpress.com, 2016. Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Kanda Hikaru and ensiscore.wordpress.com with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
8 214 - In Serial75 Chapters
Subordination system
Jason was just your average joe, until one day he received a job offer that came with a system and a world crossing mission. Now armed with a system and a very helpful soul, Jason left the world on a journey to the top, an adventure full of laughs, pain, and joy. A story of family, leaders, and armies. His first destination, a VRMMO. [release rate: ??? figuring stuff out, will get back to you on that]note: I do not own the cover, if it belongs to you, please contact me and I will take it down
8 70 - In Serial21 Chapters
The Hunter's Final Wish
Deceived before his final murderous deed. Vanemar, infamous bounty hunter and vigilante, is now the most wanted fugitive in his homeland. With nowhere to hide, his only saving grace is his necklace, an artifact given to him by the Duke whose blood he spilt many months ago. Informed of the identity of the necklace's inheritor. Giris, a renowned mage and scholar of the nation, is tasked with capturing the elusive killer. Unknown to him, this chase will prove to be much deadlier than he could imagine. Unwilling to give up his chance at a secluded life, Vanemar must aid a cultist with unknown intentions. This is the story of a man thrust into the mystery of an empire from a millennia ago, struggling against the many who would do anything to stop him.
8 134 - In Serial23 Chapters
Trials of the Seven - Dawn of a new age
The world as we know it full of smart devices and high tech gadgets. What would you do if suddenally the devices that gave us hope and joy all turned off? What would you do if you were given a list of skill points to choose from? What would you do if giant rifts apeared in the sky and creatures from other worlds started to invade earth? Helping me with feedback will make it so that you can help with the story. I hope to not end it for a long time.
8 151 - In Serial28 Chapters
Sincerely, Fanboy ~ Vkook
Jeon Jungkook is the ultimate fan of the famous model, Kim Taehyung. All his time is spent loving, supporting, and obsessing over the near perfect man. All it took was a bit of time before the 16-year-old fell for the 22-year-old beauty. The letters he writes in his diary become his only link to the celebrity, clinging to the idea of the man for dear life.
8 196 - In Serial33 Chapters
Flora
"She's dying, and nobody even knows it" ***©2015 TheHuntersBirdTrigger warning.
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