《Unique Mahabharata✔》CHAPTER- 17
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I woke up, got ready and all did pooja and left for the war started and like this only the days were passing and many people, soldiers were dieing, killed and we all don't know what happened to pitamah he was killing all of the soldiers tatshree pitashree but I know coz of duryodhan he was fighting like this and the day mamashree was really angry with he came down from chariot and paused all the people and took a wheel and it flew in air and became a sudarshan chakra and pitashree also came down and sat in mama's feet
M - pitamah I don't have any weapons but I can kill you with this wheel only
Pitashree came running and sat on his feet
P - please madhav give me a chance I will kill pitamah
M - OK parth
P - vasudev if shikhandini will be here I will not use any weopen on her
And that day passed
On the other side
Shikandini was doing her tapasya and she started walking in fire and a bhagwan ( sorry but I don't know the name ) appeared and he gave a vardan that only for one day she will become a boy.
On our side
M - but govind jiji is doing her tapasya how can she come
M - sakhi if she will come she can only kill pitamah
And and sikhandini came there
She took off the cloth from her face and all were shocked
M - jiji you in these attire
S - draupadi I have got a vardan that only for one day I became a man.
And the time was passing and the time came mata put the tilak on shikandi forehead and all left for war
On that side
All know that shikand got a vardan so there plan was to protect pitamah and she started fighting and shakuni took a knife, stabbed in her waist and blood started coming from her waist
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And all veds were trying to save shikhandi but she was very critical
K - mata her pulse
V - we don't think that she will be alive coz she is really critical
M - no no jiji get up you have to get up you have to.
On that side
All pandavas were fighting with pitamah but not properly and shikhandi entered with full swag to kill pitamah she came and and as pitamah saw her he sacrificed his weopen and she targeted a arrow on him and shoot and all pandavas started shooting arrows on him and all were crying with heavy heart pitashree shooted so many of arrow on him
And he was on Shayya of arrow all came towards him and started crying and dury and his team also came
D - arjunnn..... I will kill you you killed pitamah
B - no you can't sunset has happened
And at that side all came all sat in one room
B - now pitamah he is not fighting I will kill that duryodhan
So the next day all were fighting and t bheem he was killing kaurav and dury can't do anything coz you all know arya he stopped dury and the day was over and t bheem killed 20 kauravs and they were planning of killing arya so the next day and karn also came and on that day also t bheem was killing kaurav and Karna was fighting with arya he shooted an arrow on arya and he got injured on his hand
On other side
All ladies were sitting in an room and suddenly I felt pain on my hand and I don't know how I got injury and I screamed coz of pain and all were looking at me
M - what happened why u screamed Khushi
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K - Mata see I don't know how I got a injury on my hand See and it is painful
And ved started checking
V - how she got a injury with arrow she is sitting here and no one shooted here
All were shocked that how I got a injury and ved applied a paste and with a bandage
And the day passed all came and went to their tents I was sitting on bed and arya came to me worried
A - khushi what happened how you got injured
K - don't know arya we all were sitting and suddenly I got injury
K - arya how you got injured see your hand
A - Khushi did you noticed that we both got injury on same hand and with arrow only
We both were shocked and I think this is only true love
And a smile appeared on our face I hugged him
K - arya that means if something happened to you I will also got injury and if you will die....
A - Khushi No nothing will happen to u okk you will not get a single cut believe me
K - I trust you arya
And we both slept.
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