《Unique Mahabharata✔》CHAPTER- 13
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So a new day as I woke Up I took bath and wore
With these earrings
And my hairs were left open and I left my room I went to dining hall for breakfast and ate the breakfast with mata.
And then I was free and I was thinking about what mamashree told me and I don't know when I reached to garden lost in my thoughts my thoughts broke when a arrow passed near my hairs and I panicked just then arya came to me and dragged me to the corner of garden and asked - ( in worried tone) W... What are you doing here what I.. If that arrow went through you. are you mad Khushi.
And he cupped my face I said - oh God arya I'm okk the arrow didn't go through me.
And he put his hand on my mouth to stop what I was saying.
And we shared an eye lock.
And we both separated we heard a some chariots coming when we saw there were duryodhan durshasn and shakuni they got of from chariot and he started staring me and I felt a hand on mine. arya was holding my hand very tightly for support and when I saw arya was giving deadly glares to duryodhan and I was looking at him.
And me - (in mind) I am lucky to have him as my husband
And three of them left from there and I know why they came here.
To talk to mamashree for the help and I knew what will happen mamashree will give the whole narayani Sena to duryodhan and he will support all pandava without using weapon.
And I was walking in corridor after sometime I heard that three of them have left.
Ohh God what do I do think Khushi think Khushi.
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And a plan came to my mind.
I went to pitashree room he was alone I was standing at door and he saw me and said
Khushi putri come in what happened do you want something.
K - pitashree I wanted to talk you about something that is very important.
P - say Khushi
I took a deep breath and started
K - pitashree do you remember that when arya was in mata's womb you taught him about the entrance of chakravyuh.
P - yes but what about that???
K - but arya didn't know the exit of chakravyuh if you will not tell him it could be really dangerous for him pitashree.
Then he realized
P - ohh God how can I forget this thanks putri. But how do you know about this.
K - pitashree I'm from kaliyug I know everything.
P - thank you so much Khushi.
K - no don't say thanks to me I am like your daughter pitashree.
He caressed my hairs.
K - pitashree I will tell arya to come and talk to you. I will be back
And I left from there
I thought - yes khushi you plan is working yes I can save arya yes
Then I went to my room I saw arya was there only and I think he was angry with me because of afternoon incident of that bloody arrow.
I went near him he was ignoring me and he was looking damn cute in that angry face.
I holded my ears and said - I'm sorry arya I will never come in garden when you all are practicing promise.
He melted seeing my puppy face and laughed at my antics and I also started laughing and we both shared a hug.
A - you know khushi you are a dramebaaz.
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We both separated and starting laughing.
K - arya pitashree wanted to talk to you about something very important.
A - about what Khushi.
K - arya go in his room and talk to him.
And he left for pitashree room
( in mind) hey bhagwan mera plan kamyaab ho Jaye please. (Oh god make my plan work)
And I also left for pitashree room
When I reached to his room I saw the father - son duo discussing about chakravyuh I was adoring them and after sometime there discussion was over and they both saw me looking at them and I ran from there
Me ( in mind) haye khushi what are you doing you were looking at them and they thought I was staring at them ohh. khushi was embarrassed
In room
P - she is wierd
A - I think so
And they started laughing
We all went for dinner there arya and pitashree were staring me and I saw them
K - what why you both are staring me
P - just like you were staring at us in my room.
And there I looked down embarrassed and all started laughing at me mata came and said - abhimanyu don't laugh at my daughter
And all stopped we all ate the food and went to their room
In my room
I was sitting on bed
Arya saw me sitting he came to me and
A - khushi thank you so much for that if you haven't told pitashree it could be really dangerous
K - arya you are my husband for you I can do anything
And he side hugged me and after sometime we both slept in each others arms.
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