《The Pen Is Mightier》The rewrite has arrived!
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I've been receiving messages regarding this story's return for over a year. It's been flattering and I couldn't wait any longer!
At the time of this post, I have book 1 complete and parts of book 2 written. That's enough backlog for me to deal with my dislike of serialisation.
Over the next 1 week, I plan to drop a post every 6 hours until we have 200 pages on RR. Following that, there will be updates every 5-7 days (TBD).
This is a project close to my heart since the protagonist is named after my dear cousin and his dad after my father. There is a lot of me in the story and I can't wait for the world to read it.
Changes:
—The magic system had a complete overhaul. Its no longer a poorly thought out rip off of Doulu Dalu. I've done a few unique things with magical cards, runes, and kept some elements of the old system. You might still see some Doulu Dalu elements with the 'soul card'.
—MC's fighting style needed changing to match the new magic system. He still prefers axes and spears, and there is a greater focus on trapping whenever possible.
—Many of you expressed issue with how he parted ways with the Boleyn. I took your critique into consideration and pulled back on the incident, making significant changes to the entire bit.
There are a lot more minor tweaks and some story additions. Overall, the story is a LOT more fleshed out. The settings and characters are the same, but have experienced several improvements. I've changed a lot as a writer since I started the story and the prose should match that.
Hope you enjoy Tower of Cards and let this passion project continue!
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Rebirth: Rise of the Slave Master
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A financial analyst and manager died from a heart attack. But he found himself reincarnated in an alternate world where technology had surpassed his original world’s version of the early 20th Century. He found himself living peacefully together with his new family when a bomb is dropped on his beloved home. And as the world revolved around a cycle of chaos, all the nations released their best agents to spy on their enemies in an effort to get the upper hand in this new world’s pecking order. This is the story of the man who will be known as the greatest spy in this new world.
8 84D'Spayr: A Knight in the Withered Land
In a decayed and dying alien world that was once center of a vast planetary empire, an embittered rogue knight, soldier to the fallen empire, traverses a bizarre landscape discovering strange and sinister truths about the nature of the leaders he once served and about the mysterious warlords who have now carved the world into their private kingdoms.************************************************************************************************Wonderful cover art by Stefanie Saw: @seventhstar
8 209The Omega Saga
It was supposed to be a cure, instead it became a threat.
8 150Warrior ~*~ [ C A S T I E L {1} ]
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8 120Rilla Of Ingleside √ (Project K.)
***** ALL CREDITS TO L.M.MONTGOMERY****The eighth (and final) book in the 'Anne' series"Before this war is over,' [Walter] said - or something said through his lips - 'every man and woman and child in Canada will feel it - you, Mary, will feel it - feel it to your heart's core. [...] It will be years before the dance of death is over - years, Mary. And in those years millions of hearts will break."Rilla is a young girl when World War I breaks out. At first she doesn't realize what this means for herself, her family, Canada and all of the world. But the heartbreaking truth is soon evident to vain and easy going Rilla, and the ensuing four years change her life forever.Tragedy, love, and humor are mixed in one heart wrenching book, all by Montgomery's amazing style. GOODREADS RATED THIS 4.14 STARS. AMAZON RATED THIS 4.6 STARS #14 in Classics 25/9/17#21 in Classics 17/10/173rd in the New Author Awards Historical FictionPS Keep a box of tissues with you.
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