《Spirits of Eternity(A cultivation story based on spirits)》Rewrite
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Okay, so there's going to be a massive rewrite.
Either way, this was like... a testing grounds, to see how writing on RRL would go.
I'm going to delete these fictions soon. Monsters and Spirits. I'll also be making new fictions, named Monsters as Men and The Forsaken Eternity.
Spirits of Eternity will become FE(Forsaken Eternity) and Monsters as Men, well, will become Monsters as Men(Monsters as Men).
This is where my commentary is story specific-everything above is going to be copy-pasted.
Spirits will become first-person, told from the eyes of Liv and Vivian. Vivian will have a much bigger place in the story, and will be much more important than she is now. There will be more struggle in the story, and it will be actually edited. The chapters may be a bit longer, I don't know. I also plan to change much of the storyline, so it'll be a different story overall. Less loose ends.
The prologue will also change, because of reasons I will not disclose, because spoilers. There will most likely be a city arc at the beginning, when Liv is in her home city. She will also have a reason to go after the altars, instead of just doing so to vaguely increase her powers. She will actually try to stay on the downlow, make smarter decisions.
In a couple words, the story will be much better. Chapters will take longer to release, by the way.
This was like a slight foray into the forest of writing, with a lot of breaks, walking out of the forest, and going in circles around trees a couple times.
The next one will be a serious attempt to get onto the RR leaderboards and possibly publish.
Thank you
-Destroyer
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Shikkaku Mon no Saikyou Kenja~ Sekai Saikyou no Kenja ga Sarani Tsuyoku Naru Tameni Tenseishimashita~
In a certain world, there was someone who excelled in magic combat, people called him 『Sage』. Seeking the strongest combat art, he devoted himself to research every magic and combat arts in existence. And the conclusion he arrived at was very cruel, 『My body is not fit for magic combat』. Yet he didn’t give up. He sealed his own soul with a magic art, and be reborn in a far-off future. And the magic theory in the completely changed world he saw there was of unbelievably low level.
8 1080The War of Two Kinds
Humanity was slowly dying out, resources scarce and only the reliance on technology and/or old primitive ways were the only choice to continue. Discovering old artefacts of yonder time, they found out the second being of life naming themselves as the Guardian species. With immense power in possibilities and their likeliness to humans, it was their only salvation as both kinds struggle their way to continue their desperate measure to keep the world alight. However, this wasn't all. A secret governmental team of operatives scouted from all around the world was trying to find a cure for *The Happening*. An endangering disaster that wiped out most of the male species, whether human, animal or any type of sexual reproduction in the other kingdoms. Most females too, once you scavenge more into the deeper truth. Equipped with weapons of bio-destruction made by both the species intelligence in weapons and nuclear scientists, they will mow down the terrorist groups, the hidden organizations, and any other party--that tries to stop their freedom and rights to a better tomorrow. However as much as they fight, Hell just needs to grasp them to a closer end, with worse corruption.
8 201Tiffany
Some demons yawn at human affairs and others are outright mischievous. And then there’s Tiffany. Out of goodness or maybe just when her interest is piqued, she occasionally interferes in the fate of some poor soul. She usually shows up as a dark-haired woman in her middle 30s. Her eyes are black and blazing and she radiates authority… The world is ours but the sky above has been mysteriously replaced by eye-bending Chaos. A storyteller stumbles onto a secret of the Planners and a fearless little girl named Jasmine explores secret tunnels that lead into the demon world.
8 174HAVEN ✔ ( UPDATED )
Sophie's future is planned out for her. Having just outgrown her studies and Job Placement in a few months, her path is straight and clear. But when her best friend is captured and taken over the wall that protects them from a wild, primitive people, Sophie makes the most uncharacteristic and dangerous decision of her life: follow her into the Outlands and face every fear she's ever known.Once in the Outlands, she realizes that things are not what they seem. There is a force even more sinister lurking on the outside, bigger than anyone had ever imagined. Seeking the help of seemingly one of the most savage Outlanders, with his handsome, brooding demeanor-not to mention his scary-accurate talent with a bow-they go on a mission that will challenge not just their survival, but that of the entire human race. As the two grow closer, Sophie realizes that no one is safe, and the scariest monsters are the ones inside of us.
8 121Love on First Spark | Boboiboy x Reader |
Disclaimer: Boboiboy is owned by Monsta. None of the story plots are from the series/episodes and movies. All are ideas of mine.~~~Y/n L/n was born with a different life. She was born with a power she can possess. A power to create storms. Thunderstorms. With this power, she lost her parents. People tried to kidnapped her just for money because of her abilities and her parents protected her. She kept her power from everyone. Not until she was asked by her grandpa's friend Tok Aba to stay at their home as long as she wants to.She went to their hometown and featured Boboiboy and his gang who also possess element and other kind of power even if it's just from their power watches. She go along side them,friends them, joined them in their journey throughout the galaxy.And most of all. Fall in love.They'll discover her abilities. Her power she's been keeping. Her first spark infront of the public. Infront of him.
8 95Tails X Reader
you're a new recruit to the Sonic Group. you meet Tails and get a crush on him.
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