《Building an army in another world》Chapter 17 – Guard commander
Advertisement
As we move further into the town the crowd surrounds us but moves out the way as we move towards them. Each of them looks as if they don’t want us to be here.
“Corporal once we have got medical treatment we will have to leave as soon as possible. It looks like we are not very welcome here anymore.”(E)
“I agree ma’am. It does not feel that we are welcome.”(V)
As we reach the centre of the town there are knights in front of us forming a shield wall with their commander in front of it. When we reach them our lorry stops. I dismount the vehicle following behind the corporal.
“Where is lord Wolfram?”(guard commander)
“You're not going to introduce yourself first? Never mind he’s in the back vehicle at the back.”(E)
“Bring him out immediately?”(Guard commander)
“Fine, corporal bring Wolfram here.”(E)
“Yes ma’am.”(V)
The corporal goes to get Wolfram from the ambulance.
“Now are you going to tell me who you are.”(E)
“I am guard commander sir Vulmar Helexidor.”(Vu)
“I will just call you Vulmar. What do you mean when you say Lord Wolfram?”(E)
“You do not know? Lord Wolfram is the supreme commander of the armed forces of the sand elves. That includes the army and the town guards.”(Vu)
“He is I didn’t expect that. Is that why he was in the desert?”(E)
“That is because Lord Wolfram does not like to talk about it. He is very humble about his position.”(Vu)
“ma’am.”(V)
turning around I see that the corporal is back with three other soldiers. Two are carrying the stretcher and the other is the one who stayed in the ambulance with him. They move between me and Vulmar and put Wolfram down on the ground. Upon seeing Wolfram's condition Vulmar runs over and kneels next to him.
Advertisement
“What happened to him, he’s one of the strongest fighters there is.”(Vu)
“We were fighting sand wolves and he went to find the leader. I don’t know what happened when he found and killed the sand wolf leader.”(E)
“If it was able to injure him this much it must be more than the usual sand wolf or it could be something stronger that is leading them.”(Vu)
Standing up Vulmar bows towards me.
“Even though you were the one who told him to find the sand wolf leader you did not know this would happen. Thank you for bringing him back and giving him the best medical treatment you could.”(Vu)
“Don’t worry about it he is a friend who has helped me multiple times of course I would help him when I can.”(E)
“I still want to thank you is there any way I can?”(Vu)
“At the moment all we need is medical care for our wounded and maybe supplies we plan to make out own base but we need materials.”(E)
“Medical treatment can easily be arranged. The materials might be harder as you and your men are not the most liked at the moment.”(Vu)
“That could be a problem. Shall we talk about this later and get the wounded treated first.”(E)
“Yes let's discuss this later.”(Vu)
Vulmar turns around and gives orders to his men who immediately split up to complete them. Half an hour later a group of medics arrive to tend to Wolfram and the wounded soldiers. No w we have to wait to find out what happened to Wolfram.
Advertisement
- In Serial10 Chapters
I Am King: Book One (fourth draft)
In the distant land of Hattan, 10-year-old Prince Beaumont remains in hiding awaiting the day he becomes a man to reclaim the crown stolen from his family. His father King Bohemond and his mother Queen Renata were killed by the usurper Rancine, who is the current ruler of his home in the Middle Islands. Beaumont left the Middle Islands as a baby and everything he knows of his home is from stories and books. All that changes when a stranger from the Middle Islands, a woman named Nasila, arrives to inform him that Rancince has learned of his location and he is no longer safe. In order to protect the home he has grown to love, Beau must travel out of Hattan and journey to the Middle Islands to seek safety among people loyal to his father that he has never met. He must put his trust in Nasila and a hired warrior named Gavin with questionable motivations. He is afraid and unprepared to take the crown, but at least his cousin Julius is with on this harrowing journey fraught with assassins, wild mythical beast, black magic, and demons. His cousin is the only person he can truly trust, but he must take a chance and put his life in the hands of others if he plans to survive. ***This is the first long-length writing I have ever undertaken, and I wish to get some critical feedback. I am not professionally trained as a writer but I have tried my best to teach myself and make the chapters as clean as possible. I believe I have reached a point where my limited skills cannot improve the work or make any more corrections. It is very difficult to show this work, but if I do not, I fear I will never improve and learn. So here it is. To anyone who lends the time to read all of this and any of my chapters. Thank you.
8 195 - In Serial7 Chapters
On Green Pastures
A century after the start of great migration when the second son of the Chief Mieshko took half the folk and moved east Yarosh is leading his 100 cavalrymen at the flank of Volynian army facing the imperial tagmata.The land beyond is green and crossed with rivers, should they gain victory it shall be theirs by right of conquest, should they be defeated on Volynian head will be the Thebasian yoke.Unseen by mortal eyes Hysminos God of war and his daughter Ahra Goddess of combat are planning to intervene. Little do they know who their actions will create. Hey guys this is my first attempt at writing something hopefully I will be able to keep somewhat stable releases.The story is not set in stone so if you have ideas or suggestions please comment them they would help a lot.Also comment if you have some critique about action scenes I'm trying to make them as realistic as possible.
8 105 - In Serial10 Chapters
Red Skies
Addison Duval begins his collegiate career, along with his friends, at the prestigious University of Steelport at the same time a period of social unrest begins in his home city. After a freak incident, Addison discovers he has been become an abnormal, a human with powers. Follow Addison on his journey to protect his city and fight for justice, all while trying to have a normal life. "He was the first, the impetus of the new dawn of heroes." Shout out to gda667 for the amazing artwork! If you need something done, go check out gda667! https://www.fiverr.com/gda667
8 149 - In Serial48 Chapters
Magic x Magic
Magic x Magic Countries, nations and kingdoms. In one world, no other land grew, flourished, and gained more glory than the Empire. In a century, half of the great continent was conquered by the Empire. Centuries after the death of its first Emperor, the Empire became a decaying place, full of misery and strife. The land of conspiracies. New countries, nations and kingdoms emerged. Everyone enjoys their moments of glory and growth. Power is spread across the continent, but is there still hope for a new dawn of the Empire? Will hidden powers make their moves? Everything follows as it is and as it has always been. The wealth, the poverty. The strong, the weak. The war, the peace. The life, the death. The perdition, the salvation. The beginning and the end. There is perfect order in the midst of all the disorder in the world. But what would happen if... ... A drop of chaos fell on this world? - - / - Book 01The Fall Through Chaos A new day has begun, a day like any other. An unusual group, made up of all kinds of characters and personalities, live another day in their own way. From the simplest and most humble, to the most distorted and irrational. An unusual mix, but actually a very common one. Such a group began a new day, a day like any other in their ordinary lives. At least it was supposed to be that way... ... An unknown phenomenon has brought chaos. Amidst the chaos, common and uncommon people fall into a new world, hailing from a world of modern society. A different world from the one they lived in, but still very similar. Who are these people? Who of them can survive amidst all this chaos? What kind of changes can these people bring to the world where magical and supernatural forces exist? What will be the future of each of them in this mysterious story? Come with me to travel and discover all this in... Magic x Magic... - - / - Hey, guys! I want to tell everyone that I managed to recreate a text structure that satisfied me. Finding this new structural formula, I proceeded to rewrite all the released chapters (0000~0048). Rewriting the chapters, I would like to make it clear that; 1 The basis of the story will not change. Only a few small details will be changed, so that those readers who do not want to re-read the chapters will not be harmed in following the story. 2 Those interested in starting over will be rewarded with the introduction of new POVs of some already established plots from the already released chapters. And as I said before, the entire story already developed will not change. Treat this as a way of enriching some plots and backstories for some characters. 3 I decided to bring some plots that would only appear after finishing the first arc. These storylines don't have a development in this arc, but they are storylines that are happening at the same time as the events of the first arc. So there are some more mysteries to reward those who will re-read the novel. Rewrite Update:New Reading Aid Rule: Incomplete.Prologue to Book 01 (Arc 01): Incomplete.Rewritten Chapters: 0000. I want to warn you that for now the chapters are being released gradually, don't give up on me... For more details visit my Patreon page, you can find details about me and the novel 'Magic x Magic' in public posts. A big hug to everyone!Cover art by me, ScanLi.
8 165 - In Serial20 Chapters
Fallen Miracles
The Generation of Miracles from Teiko Middle School. They were thought to be 5 unstoppable players who had been blessed gifts and skills unimaginable for the normal middle school basketball player. What would people say if they found out the old rumours about the 6th and 7th man were true? What will happen when two familiar faces bump into each other. Will they rise up the ranks again?----> This is a Haikyuu x KnB crossover----> I do not own Haikyuu or Kuroko no Basketball I only own the plot of this storySLOW UPDATES
8 154 - In Serial37 Chapters
Crazy Little Thing Called Mate
All Weres grow up knowing that one day they find their mates, someone hand selected for them buy the fates.But as most high ranking were families know, it's either find your mate by your 22nd birthday or be placed in an arranged marriage.Everest is no different, knowing fully well that her mate is out there somewhere, she is also up against the clock, as her 22nd birthday draws near. Will Everest be able to find her mate or will she be married off to someone she doesn't even know?
8 192

