《The Vanishing City》Chapter Two: First Steps
Advertisement
The next day and a half passed with a flurry of activity and no small amount of tension in the air. Things were just wrapping up, with everyone having stuffed into the city walls, when the remarkable happened. A giant milky white wall surrounded the entire city at the outer edges of the wall, and a voice spoke, coming from everywhere and nowhere. "Congratulations, people of Lodras! You have been chosen to Join the Plane, where your accomplishments are the only limit to your power! Will you spread your culture and way of life, or will you succumb to the pressures of the new world and fall? Will you come together as a people, or will you splinter and dissolve? Will you rise to the challenge, or will you flee? Everyone will learn the answers to these questions and more, as from this moment, your fate is truly your own!" The white walls that had surrounded the city grew inward, slowly blocking the city's view of the sky. Once the bubble completed itself, the whole city suddenly gained a weight. During discussions in the future, Every single citizen would describe the phenomenon as "everything gained A weight", like there wasn't something before, and then their was. A few elaborated by saying that everything seemed to be more real than before, but even that was subject to personal belief, as some thought that a good thing, and others found it a dangerous thing. Once this existential weight had settled, the voice spoke again. "From this moment, you have Five years' protection from competing citizens of the Plane, and a slightly increased ability to learn skills which utilize mana. Do not waste this time, and establish yourself as strongly as you can!" Before panic could even finish setting in at whatever madness had infected them, the citizens of Lodras watched as the bubble seemed to tremble, then burst all at once and revealed that the whole city had indeed been relocated.gone was the home and terrain they were used to, instead, the few militia standing on the wall itself saw that the city had come to rest in a large plain, with mountains wrapping the south and the west some distance away, while the north showed signs of a thick forest. In the center of the city, the lord was altogether less panicked than his citizens. "Ring the meeting bell and send runners, I want a meeting of state to begin immediately! Also, send reassurance throughout the city; We will prevail this strange event that has occurred. so do not lose hope or panic!" Lord Cillas received many views of admiration, and a sort of tense calmness, like the moment before fight or flight, quickly spread throughout the small city. Less than ten minutes later, the various heads of city - or state, now that they were separated from their mother country, supposed the lord- had gathered for the emergency meeting. "Senators, I feel that this is our opportunity. whatever power it was that moved our city here is, they spoke of both difficulty and power. Of effort and will. I know my people, and I know that we are a people who would not shirk responsibility, or run from the things which need doing!" "Now, there are several things that must be addressed quickly. First, we need to calm the citizenry, and to assess the damage that was caused by the panic. Once this is done, I want good men sent out in groups of five to scout our surroundings for notable landmarks and useful resources. It won't be long before our internal resources press in once again. Luckily, we were already preparing for a siege, so we have more time than we otherwise might. Lastly, I feel that this new presence that pervades everything will be the key to our success, so I want every resource we can spare to study it, even if it lowers the efficiency of our city's bureaucracy. Does anyone have any other considerations?" It was at this point that the scholar stepped forward. "Milord, I already did some rudimentary tests with this new 'mana', that was spoken of, as I believe that is what this new weight is. I suggest that we find a way to get everyone to experiment, since as far as I can tell, it worked exactly the way I hypothesized, but It's such a personal experience that I suspect each citizen will have their own, method." "Hrm", the lord considered," let it be known that we avoid things which might endanger others; We should first practice control over this new tool before we try to use it and further destabalize our situation. Any who injure themselves or others when testing this 'mana' will be considered as having deprived or damaged state assets, unless they are experimenting at the direction of the scholars. Punishment to be decided later. Our situation is simply to precarious to waste any resource, even ourselves." "It will be done, Milord!" chorused the senators, who then filed out of the room and began the work of the state. The lord himself decided it was time for his first attempts at handling mana, and so he left the newly designated throne room, speaking to the guard at the door, "I shall retire to my chambers, avoid disturbance unless it's something of import." Walking through a few hallways, Lord Cillas reached his rooms. Looking about, he reevaluated the current state of his rooms. To his left, a bed with simple, understated silks and two pillows, one as yet unused. a small drawer at the end of the bed, for out of season clothes. reaching the far left corner of the room, there was a reading nook with comfortable chair, and it was positioned perfectly so he could look out the nearby window at an angle. The window itself was large and open, rarely being shuttered outside of storms and the cold season. moving towards his right, there was two rooms; the bathing room, all tile and tub, was against the outside wall, while the closer room was one he'd never quite decided what to do with, often training or exercising there simply to avoid the trek to the grounds. 'looks like I'll have more use for this room in the future, if mana is as versatile as I suspect.' Grabbing a thick woolen cloak out of his drawer, he sat on it in the middle of the room in a position he had heard of during his travels as an heir, the lotus meditation position. He was skeptical of it's more supernatural benefits, but he found that it helped him center himself and, well, meditate. Quickly, Lord Cillas' meditation deepened and he reached a familiar state of trance, where the petty distinctions and labels and separations of mankind fell away, and there was only what information his senses gave him. It was at this point that something interesting happened.
Advertisement
Advertisement
- In Serial6 Chapters
Blood of an Inhuman Hitman (Rewrite)
In need of a synopsis. Quick rundown, however, would be that this contains supernatural creatures, assassins and a boy who was turned into a vampire. P.s. I'm aware that this is full of cliches and that may not be everyone's cup of tea, but it's definitely my kind. So, please, I'm really begging here, don't tell me that it's full of cliches, I A L R E A D Y know.
8 107 - In Serial11 Chapters
The Descent of a Star | Xing Xue Jiang Shi
Danmei // Xianxia The Descent of a Star || Xing Xue Jiang Shi Lai XingXue was the unfavored second prince of Laixu. He was considered a stain on the name of the prestigious royal family. Shoved into the darkness of the palace, he became a useless bastard synonymous with bad luck. But everything changed when he met his Master. Shen QuanLi had been a half step to immortality, lofty and frigid, but he was the only person in the entire world who would spare the second prince a shred of kindness. Lai XingXue was ready to give Shen QuanLi everything he could. He won martial competitions to win his Master the glory he deserved, he cleared his name and became a prince his Master could be proud of. As he cultivated closer to immortality, Lai XingXue believed: maybe one day, once he was powerful enough, competent enough, he could confess his unfilial thoughts to his Master. But then Shen QuanLi died. Lai XingXue had once decided to give his everything to his Master, the one person who had brought him out of the darkness. Thus, even if it meant cutting off his own future, Lai XingXue will defy the fates to bring Shen QuanLi back! Disclaimer: - This novel is a slow-burn original fiction, you're in for the long-haul if you're expecting proper romance... - This novel was written intended as a BL / Boy's Love / Danmei. (LXX is the top, don't get on the wrong boatヾ(_ _。)) - I actively take valid critique and criticism and to an extreme will even rewrite scenes if the draft posted was not up to standard! I would like to present a story that I'm proud of. * More tags will be added as the relevant chapters and plot points are included in the story * Gratefully thanking all my friends for proofreading, editing, and revision suggestions~ HIATUS
8 250 - In Serial20 Chapters
Finding Magic
[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] An archeologist raids an ancient tomb, hired by an eccentric billionaire, who has been searching far and wide for the last spark of magic left in the world. When the archeologist makes it inside, he finds no spark. Instead, he discovers why there's no magic left in the world anymore.
8 216 - In Serial36 Chapters
Recovery of a Life
The prince of a kingdom was erased from the world. His very existence an enigma. Follow Xopil as he forces his life into a world that refuses to acknowledge his presence. I tried to write a novel without including all the standard things you find in certain genres, or if it is included, I hope it's at least a fresh take on it, this includes me breaking the fourth wall, probably too much. I'm wondering if that helped with humor at all, and also reconsidering if that should be a part of the story. I'm going to be rewriting every chapter at this point... and that chapter I'm extremely disappointed with could likely be deleted if not redone entirely. Now that this story is marked 'completed', I'll be going through each chapter and fleshing out the story a bit, as I found it severely lacking, and I've been saying to myself "I could have done more with that." way more often than I should be. And that speaks to my own dissatisfaction with my writing. I make no warranty-express or implied-as to the quality of these chapters, or the story as a whole. Cover art by Roman Valeyev
8 103 - In Serial20 Chapters
Truth or Dare
Madi's slumber party is suddenly terrorized by a harmless dare.
8 141 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Asshole with a Motorcycle
He has a big mouth, is a pain in the ass and owns a motorcycle which just makes things worst. But I can't help falling for him and that was the stupidest decision I had ever made.
8 208

