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There have been enough chapters now to ask what people like about the series and what you don't like. One of things I am trying to do is avoid the issue the the series The Gamer has: unable to keep count of skill points earned. Also trying to balance between powerful enough to be fun but also not to strong as to make must fights pointless. Making sure the MC thinks through problems and come up with solutions not just always saved by the plot. For me marking how how a quest is by a letter made it easier to understand how hard it was.
Healing will be hard to balance but I came up with the idea that when people get to a point in terms of how powerful they are there bodies change. Kind of like inside they create super muscle fibers that lower ranked healing is very ineffective. This way theirs a greater reason for primary healers in major armies. There will be no items that store mana or multi it like in wheel of time book series leading to broken MC's and dumb plot reasons they don't just go out and win.
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Moran arranged marriage
so here monami and Karan is married, param is alive, monami joined academy as a doctor not as a cadet
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The red one | Sam U'ley
River swan. When her parents died she has no where to go; so she goes to her uncle Charlie house. What she didn't expect was to get imprinted on by none other than the possessive Alpha male; Sam U'ley. Nor did she expect the supernatural things that were going to happen to her and the people around her. Twilight fan fiction | Sam U'ley Started: Sunday July 25, 2021 at 10:27 pmI'll update probably once a week :)Or everyday. Whatever I'm feeling. If you have any question on the book feel free to send me a message and I'll answer :)*NO PREGNANCY TROPE!!!!! (I hate them so in case y'all were wondering, no the MC will not get pregnant :) )
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