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There have been enough chapters now to ask what people like about the series and what you don't like. One of things I am trying to do is avoid the issue the the series The Gamer has: unable to keep count of skill points earned. Also trying to balance between powerful enough to be fun but also not to strong as to make must fights pointless. Making sure the MC thinks through problems and come up with solutions not just always saved by the plot. For me marking how how a quest is by a letter made it easier to understand how hard it was.
Healing will be hard to balance but I came up with the idea that when people get to a point in terms of how powerful they are there bodies change. Kind of like inside they create super muscle fibers that lower ranked healing is very ineffective. This way theirs a greater reason for primary healers in major armies. There will be no items that store mana or multi it like in wheel of time book series leading to broken MC's and dumb plot reasons they don't just go out and win.
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The Curse of the Baudelaire Manor
College student Carmen Vargas and her family decide to go on their famous family vacation which has been long overdue for two years. Her father takes the family to a historic manor, which the siblings learn is haunted. While learning how to break the curse and escape, the Vargas family learns an important lesson about their family.
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The Chill Monster Tamer (Take 2)
Welp, I died due to some mistakes being made. Sadly not mine but hey what can ya do when working with Gods. Trust me I don't resent them but Mort, he's on my shit list. My guy Rick, he's chill. Anyway, I'm in this new world with mana, monsters, and all that cool jazz. But I'm just kinda here doing my own thing pretty much ignoring important things. A lot of people are doing this "Getting stronger" thing but for me, I'm chilling with my new friends. If I'm restricted I just walk around them. I just like being here with my new friends. I'm getting tired so time for a nap. Catch ya later folks. *************************************************** Side note: I'm gonna try to give a chapter a week but to also avoid burn out and giving up I'm taking this time slow.
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I Need You - Klaroline Story
Everyone in Mystic Falls are trying to get over all the deaths that happen the last year. It's a new year of college, Bonnie and Caroline have a new rommate, Rebekah Mikaelson...With Rebekah in Whitemore College, the Originals will appear more often and Caroline will face Klaus and the possible feelings that still has for him.Will she deny? Is he over her? Are they going to be together?
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Unfair (Haikyuu X Male!Reader)
~ DISCONTINUED ~"You know what's unfair? How charming he is, how oblivious he is, how he can make anyone fall in love with him without even trying to and lastly.. how cute he can be."___________M/N, an American boy that debuted as a Japanese speaking idol at the age of 12, will now spend his first year of high school at Karasuno high thanks to his father.Sent there to take a pause from his idol career, he is now the assistant coach for the male volleyball team.The question is.. what will happen during this year?~→ Haikyuu!Various X Male!Reader ←//Not a OneShots Book//~Am I bad at grammar or what
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Always There || Greta Van Fleet
Jaime has lived next door to the Kiszka's her entire life but how quickly life can change when their band finally starts getting the recognition they deserve. A story of love, friendship, and appreciating the ones who were always there... before it's too late.-"When you've spent your whole life waiting for the love of your life, what happens when you discover they were always there?"
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The Cruel Tyrant
This is story is not mine. For offline purpose only. Forcefully snatching handsome men and imprisoning them into his harem is nothing out of the ordinary. Murder and arson is everyday life. Exterminating entire families and massacring whole cities are just recreational hobbies.The common people wish daily to rip his tendons and flay his skin. The court officials and chancellors desire strongly to see his death. His royal brothers itch to swallow him whole. Warding evil spirits during the day and expeling demons at night - he is the tyrant who strikes terror in the hearts of the common people.Creating the foundation of a thousand year dynasty, leaving behind accomplishments that change generations - he is the controversial Emperor of Qing debated over in history texts.Note: The Qing in this story is 青, which is made up and different from the existing Qing 清 dynasty of China's history.
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