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Zack got up ewwwwwww he thought as he tried to get rid of some of the blood covering his whole body ''stupid rage and it's stupid trying to eat a got dam beast'' Zack said to himself as he choked on some blood in his mouth, he looked down and saw what beast was, or more accurately what was left of the beast, from what was left it looked like there used to be a human inside of the beast-like in the movies he thought as another bight light took him away FUCK YOU LIGHT
was the thought he had before he passed out. Zack woke up feeling well tried, and his back hurt like hell, wait for no his whole body hurt like it was pounded by 100 ponds of meat oh wait that did happen he thought as he got up from the ground looking around, nothing there was nothing just a door guess I'll go through the door he thought as walked towards the door, opening the door he saw tekhnopark. ''ah I see so you made it out alive'' tekhnopark said smiling at him, ''yea, and maybe NEXT TIME YOU TIME ME BEFORE YOU SHIP ME OFF TO A BATTE WHERE I ALMOST DIED'' Zack said
as he slumped down so tired he didn't even know it was possible, not only that but it seemed like he overworked his core and qi so now his soul was tired his mind was tired and his body was tired, all in all, he was just tired ''so what do I get form doing your inheritage?'' Zack asked as he looked at tekhnopark ''oh I almost forgot'' tekhnopark said ''your first reward is a mark by me, this can hide your class your level, and name ''tekhnopark said, but Zack was puzzled ''why would I need that I understand that I'm like a 1 in a trillion, but how would people know my level and classes if I am the only one that can let people see it?' Zack asked tekhnopark just looked at him then started to laugh ''HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH'' he laughed '' do, do you don't know do you '' tekhnopark said half speaking and laughing ''what'' Zack said frowning '' you have the skilled appraisal right'' tekhnopark said ''whats appraisal'' Zack asked ''you don't have or know what appraisal is'' tekhnopack said now with the frown ''didn't you get it to form the starter town?'' Technopark asked ''what starter town?'' Zack asked yet another question ''ok, wait you're telling me that you don't have or know about the skilled appraisal'' said teknopark ''yep'' said Zack
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''and you didn't start in a starter town'' said tehnopark suspiciously ''ok, ok so that's 3 checks'' tehnopark said quietly but before Zack could ask what 3 checks mean tehnppark asked him another question ''when did you start when you got reported and did you have to kill a beast, and with a kill that beast got you some goodies'' asked tehnopark now looked at him seriously ''I mean I guess I did get a few titles and a new skill..... and a snow place'' Zack said ''but what does that mean?'' Zack asked
''what that means is that your a progenitor'' said tehnopark smiling '' and before you ask me what a progenitor is I will just tell you, a progenitor is a blessing in disguise for one there is about only one progenitor per planet but that just makes you a Target or more people and other probably is that you will get teleported somewhere far far away from any other humans and that place will let you get a lot more titles and skills but that also means the beast here will be a lot more powerful than the other places and when you arrive you will get a unique opportunity'' said teknopark
''oh ok guess I'll put that on my list of things that will try to kill me '' Zack said sarcastically ''yep you will and if you continue on your path you're going to have to add more'' teknopark said, Zack just looked at him '' and now for the best part, your other prizes'' teknopark said
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