《Kueng Ning》Book 2 Journey to London. Chapter 4: Coffin
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Kueng Ning, was currently sitting in a meditative position on top of his bed, concentrating on his mortal dantian. Once his mother told him to examine his body, he immediately went to a meditative trance, and was concentrating like no other.
A few hours already passed and he was still in a meditative position. Usually, to examine one’s body wouldn’t take so long. The reason for him taking so long, was for two very interesting reasons. One, is that he was being very meticulous about, checking his mortal dantian, veins, blood vessels, meridians, organs, in short, he was truly examining his entire body, making sure it was in top condition. However, that was not the reason he was taking, it was because he was fascinated about his mortal dantian.
In his sights was a golden ball, about the size of stress ball, and surrounding that golden ball, we’re smaller balls that have the color of red, blue, gold, green, black and white balls. He knew that the big golden ball was his mortal dantian, however he did not know what the smaller balls are.
At first he wanted to tell his mom about the things he saw and that his body is in top condition, but curiosity got the better of him, and took it upon himself to see what those small golden balls are. When he tried making his Qi touch the small colored balls, it only gave off a small light, before releasing a powerful barrier around itself, making the Qi, unable to touch it.
This shocked the child, but it mostly made him excited. Since, he could not examine the small colored balls, he turned his attention to his mortal dantian with the intention of starting the process of shedding. Gathering his Qi once more, he made it cover his mortal dantian, and slowly started to shed the outer layer of his dantian.
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Once the process started it cannot be stopped or interrupted, there will be only once chance for a person to shed their mortality. Knowing these risk fully well, he was fully concentrated on trying to enter the shedding realm.
Slowly, his mortal dantian started get smaller and brighter as more of the layer’s got shed. However, since he was concentrated on his dantian, he did not notice that the smaller balls started rotating around his dantian as well as getting smaller and brighter.
After a while, the shedding has stopped and he looked towards his new dantian and was surprised at what he saw. His dantian was now the size of a pebble, but was glowing brighter than any sun or star, and the smaller balls before we’re now gone.
Gone was not the word to describe it best, the smaller balls or now little stars with the same size as his dantian, was revolving slowly, and was equally bright with their respective colors. The star color white and red was going left to right, the star color black and blue was going right to left, the star color gold was above the dantian, and the star color green was below the dantian.
Seeing all of these, Kueng Ning was dumfounded. As far as he knows, no person, would have little stars within their body. He started to question it, what are those stars? Why are they inside his body? And why the hell can’t he touch it? These are the thoughts running in his mind.
Though, something inside him tells him that, further agitating this stars could lead to severe consequences, and listening to that feeling, he immediately got out of his meditative state and started to look for his mother, to tell her the good news.
As his excited got the better of him, he did not notice is that the shedding process was not done, though it was not as fast as before, his dantian as well as the stars are still shedding off more of their layers, getting smaller and smaller as time passes on.
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However, inside his mind, were seven coffins wrapped in black chain formations. As soon as Kueng Ning, started his shedding process, the dormant coffins started to shake and rattle. The things trapped in the coffin wanted to get out, but the formations were much stronger than them.
When he got out of his room, he saw his mother outside on the balcony in a meditative stance, having three colored red books in front of her. Wanting run towards her to tell her the good news, a figure of an old man suddenly appeared before him.
“Ning, it is best not to disturb your mother right now”
“Why, grandpa?”
“It’s because your mother is training”
“Why is she training? Isn’t she the strongest in the world?”
“That is true that she is the strongest in the world, but she still has to train, and do you know why?”
“Why?”
‘It’s because she wants to protect you. She is willingly to give up everything for you, even death is not an issue, as long as you stay alive”
“I don’t want to lose my mother!” he shouted in anger as he thought of his mother giving up her life for him.
“No one does. Have you already completed your shedding?”
“Yes, grandpa!”
“Then, for now go to sleep. Your body needs to adjust to the changes and sleeping is the best way for your body to adjust” the old man said as he patted his grandson’s head, his expression darkened for a second before returning to normal.
“Ok, grandpa!” Kueng Ning said as he returned to his room, to sleep.
As Kueng Ning entered his room, the old man’s expression changed as he remembered the feeling when he touched his young master’s head. It was the feeling that would send a shiver up one’s spine. He started to worry that the formation might be getting weaker, but that was impossible.
However, even the old man, May Phoenix, or the Royal Demon does not know the existence of these six coffins, the only one who truly know these coffins existence is his deceased father, and his real mother.
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