《Kueng Ning》Book 1 Meridians. Chapter 6: Mommy said......
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Chapter 6. Two more for the finale chapter of Book 1 Meridians!
Just a short update, i have already started writing Book 2, and about in chapter 6 already, so maybe in this pace, a chapter a day.
Enjoy reading~ Love KeepSmiling
The three cultivators obeyed and walked slowly with vigilance, ready for anything the child might pull off. They knew, this child might be his “descendant” as the Patriarch told them, they we’re unsure but, who are they to believe that the Patriarch is telling a lie.
However, the cultivator in front of the child suddenly froze in place, as the child started to stare at the cultivator. The other two, not knowing what happened looked over to their comrade and found out that he was sweating and shaking in fear.
But, it was not only their comrade that was shaking in fear, the scientist as well as a direct lineage of the Phoenix Clan, May Phoenix was shaking in fear. This caused the other two cultivators to stop in their tracks and looked at the child.
Total silence, no one made a move. They all looked at the child, who was staring at the male cultivator with lifeless eyes. The child then, started to murmur to himself, no one could hear them, even with their enhanced hearing, but they will soon find out what he was saying.
Slowly, the murmurs of the child was getting louder.
“Mommy said that I should be nice”
“Mommy said that I should stay low”
“Mommy said that there is no good or bad”
“Mommy said peace is the answer”
“But, they want blood”
“They want me to kill Humans”
“They want me to kill Demons”
“They want me to kill Beasts”
“But, daddy said I should my follow my own path, my own Dao”
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“They all have a goal for me, but I don’t know what to follow”
“What do you think mister, which voice should I listen to?” after a series of spine chilling words, the child stood up and grabbed the male cultivators arm in front of him and asked him a question.
“I think you should follow the voice that says kill the Demons and Beasts” the man answered with a bit of stuttering.
The child just looked up at the man before making him kneel to the ground and striking his chest with a massive force that made him throw up blood. However, the more devastating fact, is that the child destroyed the man’s cultivation, his dantian, in an instant.
“Mommy also said to NEVER listen to strangers” the child looked at the unconscious, bleeding mortal man with cold eyes, and redirected his gaze, at the two cultivators behind him.
“Do you agree with my mommy?”
“Trusting strangers. Is it good? Or is it bad?”
“What do you think Lady?” in a few seconds he was in front of the female cultivator to his left. Same with the man, he grabbed her hand, made her kneel, and sent her head flying by grabbing it and forcefully ripping it from her body.
As blood showered the child, he looked towards the male cultivator to his right and walk towards him.
“Which voice should I listen to mister?”
“Too many voices, it’s hurting my head”
“However, you are a stranger, that’s why….die” arriving in front of the male cultivator, grabbed his hand, making him kneel and ripped put his heart from his body, then throwing the heart to the side.
Now covered in blood and with the child outrageous and psychopathic tendencies, the other scientist except May Phoenix, all ran to the helicopter, hoping to get away before they die. As they were nearing the helicopter, a small figure appeared before them and kicked the helicopter to the sea.
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“Mother said it is very RUDE to ignore someone who’s talking” the child spoke in a very cold tone that made the five scientist to kneel and beg for forgiveness.
The child slowly walked to each one of them, and the massacre began. Ripping of head, ripping of heart, destroyed cultivation with very intense internal injuries, ripped in half and worse of all, one got torn apart. This is what the child did to each of the scientist, each having a cruel death.
After dealing with the rude scientist, he walk towards the last remaining person alive, walking up in front of the woman with his hands at his back accompanied with a bright smile, which only made him even scarier, he asked.
“What do you think lady, which voice should I listen to?”
“I don’t…” before she could finish a hand grabbed her neck and was now staring up at the child, while the child looked down on her with cold eyes. She did not know how such a fast changed could happen, but she knew if she did not do anything, she will die.
The child was slowly crushing the neck of the woman, all the while a smile forms on his face. May, was on the verge on collapsing, she tried to gather her Qi, but to her surprise, she found that her Qi was completely gone, as if something forcefully got it from her body.
As the child was planning to snap her neck, a hand suddenly grabbed his and threw him ten meters away from them. The woman feeling the pressure disappear began to cough and touch her neck. She looked up to see a demon with black hair and red eyes, with a handsome yet delicate face. This was the Royal Demon.
“You, Phoenix woman, when I hold my young master down, insert this into his sixty-four meridian points” the royal demon said, as he threw a small bag in front of the woman.
May grabbed the bag and looked into its contents and saw thirty-one white balls, thirty-one black balls, and two golden balls, all about the size of marbles.
“What is this, in all my years of studying and creating medicine, I haven’t seen anything like this”
“I will tell you, if we successfully save my master. Once I have him trapped in my formation, immediately insert the sixty-two medicinal balls into his meridian points and save the last two golden ones for his chest and head”
“I will, but you have to keep your promise”
“A Demon tells no lies, woman”
“It’s not woman! It’s May”
“Unnecessary name. Now, I will begin. Be vigilant”
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