** this is thinking

( ) if has mine or Jay's name in it, we're just giving our honest opinions at the time

Also if there are no names in it, it means they are the thoughts of that person's thoughts not mine

And.......I don’t exist in this story but merely doing a fourth wall commentary chatting with Jay and maybe a few others as I go along

First time doing battle scenes and I may have fucked it up, oh well read on folks. rejoice at my failure haha

Chapter 11 - Woman's Wrath

An ear piercing cry resounded in the Hall

“EEEEHHHHHH MMAA-MAAAHH BAAAAAWWWLLLSSSS”

That’s right; it’s the sound of a man screaming for his life all because someone is currently squeezing his balls. All the men in the hall who saw this display couldn’t help but winced at the sight before them as they cover their manhood shuffling away from the source of this scene. The scene showing a lady who is kneeled down holding a man’s balls who is standing up while smiling with veins plastered over her delicate face, the lady and man is none other than Sei and Jay

“Ple-please let go”

“No”

“Plea..ARGH”

I got interrupted as she tightened her hold on my balls. Please stop Sei, I don’t want to lose the only thing that is important to me

“I’m sure you’ll be fine~~” Sei giggles while holding my balls

*What part of holding my balls while giggling is fucking O-K Sei*

Of course I don’t want to dig my grave any further so I decided to enquire her version of ‘fine’, what she told me almost made me faint

“Oh you want to know? Well firstly I’ll rip your balls out, then I’ll feed it to you and finally heal it back. Isn’t it nice?” she smile radiantly which sent shivers down my spine

*THE FUCK, YOUR CRAZY BITCH*

“Oh I almost forgot, I’ll be doing that 7,892,154 times before I finish with you. I think there was a saying from the mortals, what was it again?” I watched as she started to think, I found a chance to get her to let go

“I-If you let me go, I ma-may be able to help you re-“

*Shit*

*Shit*

*Shit*

*Shit, why are you tightening your hold Sei. I feel like my balls are gonna come off*

“Hoh? Trying to sweet talk your way out hm?”

*Shit my plan backfired*

“Oh that’s it! Rinse and repeat! That’s the quote I was looking for”

*Her smile is so beautiful that freakin stars are sparkling around her. That’s scary as fuck because when a woman smile so beautifully, it means your fucked and I MEAN FUCKED*

As her face draw close to mine she whispers in my ears

*I’ll be sure to be gentle Jay*

I fainted…..

*******

Watching Jay faint, I couldn’t help but be happy

*HOW DARE YOU FUCKEN CALL ME BTICH, WHORE AND OTHER SUCH NAMES. EVEN IF WE ARE SISTERS, THAT DOESN’T MEAN I WILL SPARE YOU*

As I was thinking of how I should punish my sister, I let go his balls because he fainted on my arm and its annoying having him cuddling my arm

*INTRUDERS*

I was shocked, intruders? How can there be anyone strong enough to invade us. Granted we are weaker than in the past but we still are a force to be reckoned with. I just dismissed it until the next word sent anger in me

*INTRUDERS IN THE MAUSOLEUM*

*The mausoleum? How DARE THEY DEFILE MY SISTER’S RESTING PLACE*

So I flew my way towards the mausoleum, when I went outside I was shocked to see our school under attack. Giant Qilins barraging our school shield with attacks while attacking the Kirins who are trying their best to fend off the mythical beasts, only a mythical beast can fight evenly with another of its rank. My shock didn’t last long because I had a mission to do as I flew across the training field quickly as I could because I was worried that they might steal ‘it’. Half way there, I was blocked by 40 masked practitioners who, judging by their aura are part of the widely believed dead school ‘Sleeping Beast’.

What happen? Well they were small fries who managed to break into the crack made on the shield from the Beasts fight. As I noticed as more masked men congregating and spilling through the cracks, I cursed myself because I would have slaughtered them all but I don’t have time so I barked orders to lessen the damage of this sudden invasion

“BLOOD PRACTITIONERS! BLOCK THE CRACKS FORMED BY THE BEASTS NOW!

LIGHT PRACTITIONERS STAY BEHIND THE BLOODS AND HEAL!

WIELDERS SWAP WITH THE BLOODS AT INTERVALS!

CASTERS, USE AOE SPELLS WHENEVER THERE IS TOO MUCH!

DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR!”

Bloods = Close combat non-weapon users

Light = Healers

Wielders = Long and close combat range weapon users

Casters = Magicians (everyone can use magic but I’ll go into more detail as to why there is a separate category later on)

Everyone was in a state of anarchy before but hearing Sei’s order automatically reassured everyone as they secretly cursed themselves on why were they even panicking in the first place when they are part of a powerful school

As I watched everyone get to work, I nod how effective this school power has gotten but that doesn’t excuse the previous act of running away. I burned everyone’s faces in my mind for the punishment after this battle finish…….that is if they live through it

Slashing left and right the invaders who managed to squeeze past through the blockade while I flew my way. Arriving in front of the slightly opened gate with 4 of my clansmen laid dead around it, I activated my mana and energy at the same giving me a faint azure blue coating around myself to prepare for what may come as I slowly advance inside

Walking silently and slowly in the dark marbled corridor floor of the mausoleum, the corridor is 10 man wide, Greek styled pillars sprouting out of the ground to hold up the roof. The roof and walls display legendary and glorious stories of past clansmen who now join the cycle of reincarnation.

I stop and heighten my hearing and spread my senses out because I hear faint noises happening, walking closer I notice the noise get quieter as I get closer which baffles me until it clicked, without a doubt this is the sound of battle happening in one of the side tombs instead of the main tomb with our most precious treasures there under powerful protection. Without hesitation I flew around at the highest speed I can to close in on the source of this unknown battle, what comes into view is ‘Father’ standing in front of my sister’s tomb fending off 200 odd masked men.

How there is this much people in the tomb I didn’t care, all I cared about was making sure no one touches my sister’s tomb so I joined in with ‘Father’. I flew in rage screaming while materializing my sword slashing the two closes to me as I make my way inside

“YOU FUCKEN HAVE BALLS AIMING FOR MY SISTER’S TOMB PUNK”

Thrusting my sword into the head of one foolish idiot, as soon as I killed him two others turned around and tried to slash me from left and right. I smirked at their foolish attempt and spun my sword while embedded inside my prey, resulting in splattering all his remain towards the two men which distracted them long enough for me to lop both arms holding the sword in one swing without stopping my spinning movement. I didn’t stop there and used the “Desert Illusion” my sword slithering in the air like a snake exploding their heads the moment I touched it.

They all ignored me and charge my leader which angered me

*How dare you underestimate me*

In my rage I activated “Kiss of Blood” a move that involves infusing mana into your sword, change it to energy and using a special method that makes the combined mana and energy inside the sword when released will suck blood out of any living being that gets into contact with it. Good move against multiple people because the more blood it draws, the more powerful the strike is as it flies further away until the user gives the order to dissipate. Considering she doesn’t want to destroy her sister’s tomb and it is only effective against living being and nothing else, even if used against a metal it won’t do anything makes it a good idea at the moment.

I watched gleefully as the strike I unleashed devoured man after man, in turn increasing in size from a paper thin 3 metre long slash into a 30cm wide and 20 metre long slash after it devoured 60 men before impacting against the tomb wall resulting in the slash disintegrating

This display stunned the men. But I didn’t waste this chance as one after the other masked men get killed under my blade as I use the various sword style and moves tempered through countless battles, limbs flying and blood splashing my face giving me the appearance of the devil.

*AHH, THE JOY OF BLOOD HEHEHE. ARE YOU WATCHING ME SISTER?*

I think I killed 150 of them by now since there is only 10 or so left standing around which greatly disappointed me. I mean, I need more blood than that to avenge their act in defiling my sister’s place with their presence, oh well I will kill 300,000 of them when I go outside

As I looked to my sister’s tomb hoping for her to come out of the tomb and congratulate me hehe

I pouted when she didn’t come out of the tomb (she’s gone so nuts that she forgot that her sister is already dead) as I was standing there waiting two minutes for any signs while my leader was happily cleaning up the trashes

“WATCH OUT SEI”

Before I could turn to block whatever he warned me to watch out for. I was stunned for a moment trying to find out what happened, when suddenly my body stopped. I tried to stay standing which I couldn’t as I fell down racking my brain on what happened. Everything happened too fast that it confused and angered me at the same time. My face smacked against the bloody floor and I noticed that my power was slowly fading away, I attempted to speak but even speaking was impossible. I could hear which was great, so I concentrated on my hearing

*******

Daymon (aka ‘Father’)

*Damn it, this is impossible. I thought she was dead*

As I avoided her soul attacks one after the other, which unfortunately Sei was too slow to dodge. Not surprising when it took me and my 4 brothers to try and even subdue and finally kill during that war 8,000 years ago.

When she stopped I could finally relax but I didn’t lessen my awareness because the lady in front of me is none other than the Mistress of “Sleeping Beast” school before they were wiped out, which is wrong to say now that old faces are popping up from that school and I believe they alive now

“What do you think you are doing by attacking us Melody”

Melody – “Hohoho, you really need to ask me YOU THIEVING BASTARDS”

I prepared for her surprise attack when she yelled at me by raising my twin swords in a ‘X’ shape in front of me

Melody – “Hahaha, scared are we?” as I watch her flip her black silky hair back, if we weren’t in a battle I would have admired her beauty which is unparalleled in all 5 planes (trust me, I’ve been in all the planes except the God plane which I am aiming for). She stares at me with her delicate and soft (minus the veins haha) face wearing a purple silk robe decorated with a picture of a beautiful Qilin wrapped around her body, complimenting her curves that could give birth to a healthy baby and one of the biggest breasts I have ever seen (bigger than Hami’s breast, don’t tell her that or I’ll get killed by Sei)

Melody – “DON’T YOU FUCKEN STARE AT ME YOU FUCKING TRAITOR”

I snapped out of my horny state (I really need to get laid, haven’t had sex for the last 12,000 years *sigh*) and tensed myself up berating myself

“Shush please, let’s go somewhere else to talk hey?” as I sneak peeked at Sei telling myself that she doesn’t need to know this which didn’t go unnoticed by Melody

Melody – “Hoh, don’t want that fat bitch over there to know her ‘Oh so great and mighty Leader’

As she exasperatedly waves her hand out

WHO IS A FUCKING TRAITOR, LYING SON OF A BITCH WITH A 2 INCH FUCKING COCK”

“………hey” as I tried to protest about my dick size (it aint that small….) until she yelled over my protest

“SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU 2 INCH COCKSUCKING LOVING DICK PIECE OF SHIT”

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