first things first this poll is only about chapters one through three and the prologue.

what i want to know is how you experience my text or to be more exact my:

sentence building and grammar

does the text sound forced or juvenile.

do you think i have any writing disabilities from reading my texts

is the punctuation good

word choice

Is the text hard to read or understand

Is the structure ok paragraphs etc

how do you like the length of my chapters right now my chapters have been around a thousand

words each except the prologue should i aim to decrease the amount of chapters in favor of longer ones

or just continue releasing chapters as is and not bother with the length. since now I am just writing and

when i get to a point where I am either to tired to continue or just don't have any more ideas for the moment

and the text looks reasonable I just release it ( after some grunt work of course editing removing unnecessary words

restructuring sentences and fixing spelling and grammar(which i missed in the prologue thanks again for pointing it out AnalEvaporator)).

if you think I am worthy of your time and a bit of feedback feel free to answer these questions

almost any criticism is appreciated good or bad as long as it is constructive.

and now for some information about the future

and since I don't really know if this will spoil it for some people.

Spoiler : the next few chapters I think Vivo will stay in town so nothing really exciting will happen

nothing planed for that at-least but the story must somewhat dictate itself imo.

the reason behind this is because I want some more character development and

to develop the world around him

and feel free to point out any spelling mistakes i do so i can correct them.