《Is this really luck?》Chapter 11 the God’s fear; true identity revealed
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Rin held Rachel in his arms as he stares at her as he walks.
“Have you heard of parallel worlds theory where there’s more than one world in one place.” (Rachel)
“Yea it was mentioned once in science.” (Rin)
“Well the thing is I have a feeling that so called God is lying about something. But I’m not sure what. Call it women’s intuition or me being paranoid.” (Rachel)
Instead Rin put her down and scratched his head as he stared at her. But she rolled her eyes at him.
“Status.”
Rachel Ever Rank N/A Age 1 Race Dragon/goddess Gender Female Status alignment n/a Class Goddess Subclass Flame Hero, spearman Fame: 0 Infamy 0 Level 2 Hp 30/30 Mp 500/500 Strength 22 Defense 26 Agility 38 Intelligence 40 Wisdom 8 Charm 50 Luck 999,999 Leadership 15 Divine aura 12 Titles Goddess of light’s Daughter Blessings God’s toy: you are at the mercy of a lazy God of this universe, entertain him and you shall be rewarded. Rebell against him and you shall feel his wrath. He has made all males Target you. Skill
Spear level 1 (locked by God)
Eidetic memory
Dragon eyes (locked) Max level
Goddess creation level 1 (locked by God himself)
Dragon transformation level 1 (locked by God)
Flame magic level 0 (0.0001%) (God has made this skill very hard to level)
identify (locked forever by God)
Goddess form (locked by God)
Goddess sight (locked by God)
Hero level 12 (12%)
I knew something was wrong with the lying bastard! I’m no one’s puppet I swear I’ll get revenge. You fear my advancement to godhood, I’ll just do just that you bastard God. I’m no one’s toy. Plus I’ll get you for this. No and I mean no one ever makes me a fool. Nor do they test my patience you made all the capture targets want to kill me very well I’ll turn into the carnage of hell since you asked for it. Also I know for a fact I have no level cap here unlike the people here who don’t take advantage of that.
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I stood there doing a fist pump into the air. Rin gave me a questioning look but I just glared at him. This idiotic boy was sent to me by that fool whom abused his power. I’ll get you for this you lazy God. I’m not playing hero but I’ll do the hero act to smite the evil God limiting me. No one and I mean it. Get some in the way of my life or fun. Rather I’m annoyed by it all.
“Hey Rin what if, just what if I did something like say slay a certain God.” (Rachel)
“I’m not sure but he can turn the world against you.” (Rin)
Max my luck my ass, the bastard needs to go if he’s making all the guys come after me.
A certain God’s domain:
“I wonder how that girl is doing. I at least helped her luck. But her abilities were kinda scary to read.” (God)
“You know you can’t tame a pure soul like hers nor can you chain down a Creator’s younger sister reborn. Especially this one whom created the Realms which is the upper worlds she dreamed about. Her memories maybe gone but her instincts and her knowledge are more than you think. Restrictions on Yu Mei’s sister is just going to come back to bite you.” (Kana)
“Shut it you goddess of death. As the other gods and goddesses demand of you just do your job of killing and guiding souls like your supposed to.” (God)
“Lying to her saying she was a mass murder in her last life was bad of you. Airi died unjustly being used by that ‘man’ her own sister Yu Mei had to kill her own two sisters. She a creator whom was born from life energy had to kill her own kind. Her blood siblings born of the same blood as she. She did what chao beasts did create worlds. To which they the chaos beast then make a God govern over said worlds. But say all God of the said sectors are all just lazy beings taking credit for it. Lying to a former creator will come back to bite you. If Yu Mei found out from the upper world she’d wreck havoc down here. Say what of a creator whom has a disaster class calamity for all worlds, upper to mid and lower level world would do. Hmmm, it’s interesting right. So if I kick you now I can get on her good side. Hmm, siding with the one whom separated our upper world the realms from the lowest the universes. Whom would I side with.” (Kana)
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(she finallly exploded after centuries of being suppressed.)
God broke into cold sweat as he eyed the goddess of death who was angered. Her black wavy hair stood out even more due to her silver kimono but what made him shut up was her glowing red scythe in her hand.
“Say sure I’m sympathetic towards almost all souls but yours just annoys me. Anyone else is fine but you tick me off. Yu Mei is much more disastrous than what you Gods heard. By that I mean each of your God of different sector meeting and discussing. Also don’t think I’m a fool like the rest, I know you bastards sealed the chaos beasts due to fear. Especially when they’re on top of the food chain for the race system you God are just below that and above all other races.” (Kana)
He felt like choking at her words, this damn goddess was more sharper than a human.
“Her not knowing is good thing right.” (God)
“Oh please stop before you screw yourself over. A creator is always a soul race. They have a system aligned to the Souls system which turn into points. You can’t deny her access to it even if you’re a God. The one who can is only a select few one of them being Yu Mei. I’d say do keep your mouth mmummm like shut up. You do know even if I’m known as kind even I have tolerance towards certain things.” (Kana) (translation of last sentence: I’m reaping your soul later for sure you know that and I don’t give a fuck what happens next because it’s my decision and I’m doing what I want with it you hear. Also if Yu Mei found out don’t think she won’t let things on the loose into the lowest world here that has the upper world’s leveling system)
“You wouldn’t right.” (God)
“Depends on if my thoughts are read since she’s older than the gods. And Luna is older than her... actually scratch that Luna has been there since we can remember. Airi will eventually remember it all.” (Kana)
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