《Immortal Sovereign (Cancelled)》NOTE (Gone for to long... restarting the novel.)
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MELP
I've been gone for to long.....
I'm doing a restart on the series.... It will be called Sovereign Immortal instead.
Essentially everything will be the same, the only differences is that the grammar, sentences and maybe even character development will be far more polished....
As for why I'm restarting is because, the time I have been gone. I've been practicing on writing novels and now I've realised how bad of a job I did..... The grammar, world building, character development and even punctuation should be better but my sentence structures will remain horrific.
It will be made in a week or two because I have to slightly change the words of the characters making the words more meaningful for example
Original Chapter 1. The two faced each other seemingly as if they were to combat each other at any moment the heavenly king shouted out with the force as if it could break down the surrounding planets "Chen Ye! Do you dare block my path? Our forces have been at peace for millennia's of millennia's do you wish now to start a war!?."
New Chapter 1.
At the next moment, Zhen Mo shouted out in anger "Chen Ye? Why do you block my path now? Have our forces enjoyed peace for to long?" The last sentence said by Zhen Mo was intended to ridicule, Chen Ye was the Demonic Monarch and was known for starting countless wars on the other hand Zhen Mo was known as a peacekeeper.....
The new chapter 1 has more character development. nuf said
Also chapters will be slightly shorter, so that I can have the chapter lengths more simmilar and arcs will be spread out slightly longer.
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