Sorry however after a lot of thought on this story I decided the VR theme is not something I am even slightly good at writing. I have seen thousands of people do it better and some of them wrote themselves into oblivion. I had intentions for this to be much better and had even decided on a half decent plot however it is near impossible while using a VR character for my type of story preference.

If I learn to get better at VR I will attempt to re do this entire story however for now I do not think my work on the VR genre is up to a good enough standard to have people read it yet. I do give permission for anyone to use any ideas I have put forth should you wish and if you think you can do better then me on this story and have your own idea on where to take this story go ahead. I don't wish to take a concept to the grave so please feel free to add/improve the story without me should you miss it.

PS: If I ever do come back to the VR genre I think I will start simpler and not on such a large scale and serious as I was going for.