《Dio, Rise to the top [working title]》Training
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Dan
I woke up in a familiar room, alone.
I looked around me, I'm on a bed, everything around me is familiar: I am at home?!
How did I come back here?
I try to remember what happened before I black out.
She is really a demon, Carl was on the ground, trying his best to not faint, and she came in front of him to taunt him"
Not an ounce of pity.
'I hope I will not be the next victim' I think to myself shivering.
As I stood up a piece of paper fell on the ground, a letter.
"To Dan,
So you should be the last one in this room when you wake up.
The parents of your little friends should've come to take them back at home,
but you kinda have nobody to take you home.Sorry to say that but it's a fact.
Well what matter is that I'm a generous and beautiful lady so I took you home
I cooked you something too!
Well, I did that not because I said I owed you something, but because you said that I'm beautiful! 
And maybe because I had nothing better to do... continue like that and you'll have success with women.
Continue like that and you'll have success with women.
That's it I hope you enjoy the food
-Whip "
Next to her nickname was a kiss mark.
Even if she is a demon to those she doesn't like, she is sweet to others.
This kindness I will remember it, I swear to myself.
Going to the kitchen I saw the food she made for me.
I sat on a chair the food in front of me and I began to eat.
The flavor was nothing special, but... I couldn't stop to eat (A.N: Is it good?)
It was the first food that I ate in 2 years that I didn't make myself.
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After finishing the dish I went to my bed, to sleep, promising myself to be the best in class to thanks her for today.
Tomorrow morning, after eating and washing myself, I went directly to the training grounds, to the cabin to go underground.
Carl was outside of a gravity room gasping for air.
I waved my hand to salute him.
He seemed to want to say me something, but said nothing, glaring at me, he entered the room next to him without giving me a second look.
'whatever'
I searched a free gravity room and entered it.
" 2 times"
I just finished my sentence that I was brought to my knee.
"1 times"
I almost cried.
Panting...How can she stay at 5 times the gravity as if it was nothing?!
"2 times" gaveI tried again
only to see the same result.
I tried the whole day and had given up to go home.
I can't achieve an objective of 3 months in just one day, I consoled myself.
The following week too only to see almost no result, following the same routine of trying and failing.
I was resting outside of the room, gasping for air, when an adult with a full barb and a mustache.
"You're a newbie right? I can see the young me in you!"He said smiling.
I didn't know how he could see himself in me, he was a head taller than me, so muscled that he was almost twice as big as me, but I didn't answer.
"As shy as I was, I see... You know what I like you I will tell you an advice"He begun smiling
"You should stop what you're doing now, it can help you bu it'll take time, and you're rewarded if you're first right?"
Not waiting for my answer.
"If you have the point you should exchange them for enchanted stuff that can add some weight on you by multiplying the gravity around you. It'll be like a portable gravity room.
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If the gravity around you is more important your body will end up adapting to it.
The only advantage of the gravity room, against this stuff, is that when you faint inside people will know, so you can test your limits.
That was my advice little one, it's up to you if you want to follow it."
Finishing with that he left.
I left and went to the shop of the school, where John was the shopkeeper.
His appearance was somehow scary, he was totally bandaged, even his tail.
When I asked him about the stuff the adult advised me about, his eyes lighted up and he tried to tell me something, but only muffled sounds escaped his bandaged mouth.
He went inside the shop and came back with a bracelet.
Looking at the price I hesitated a bit but finally bought it.
'He shouldn't have any reason to lie to me' I hoped.
It took a good 2/3 of my points.
I could use the bracelet to add gravity progressively, I learn that I could multiply the gravity by a decimal number.
From this day onward I was living constantly with more gravity than others around me.
At the end of the first month, I could support 1.23 time the gravity.
During this time, I didn't talk to anyone in the class, I didn't even go to the underground complex.
I just rested in the surface doing simple exercises like running or some push-up.
I took me only 2 months and 1 week to complete the first objective.
I from that point I began to go to the dodge challenge, from what I heard the girls already managed to complete it.
The first time I try it I god beaten black and blue, but after some time I remarked that I tried with the bracelet on.
Putting the gravity back to normal I felt freedom, I could go faster, react faster, I passed the challenge easily.
But it was not enough for me as I wasn't doing it as easily as her .(?)(A.N: help plz)
For the next 3 weeks, I challenged, again and again, the room, trying to feel the attack behind me like her, trying to use minimum movement to dodge like John.
During that time I even increased the gravity to 2.2 to force myself to use a minimum of movement.
The bracelet could make the gravity up to 3 times stronger, I will have to change for a better version if I want something that can add more.
As the time ran up I knew I improved, I was able to dodge everything, not like Whip that dodged everything like it was the most natural thing in the world, but it was better than in the beginning.
I was proud of myself, but I knew I could do better...Well times up!
Let's see How the others are doing.
A.N:
Well guy so here the chapter, since we are now tomorrow...I sorry for yesterday I couldn't update...
I hope you can forgive me.
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So in this chapter 3 months pass, our mc can't keep being a child right? so the story will speed up a little I think.
Training isn't really fun so I'll try to finish it quickly.
Also, I need you, in this chapter, there are points where I'm not sure what to write so if you can help me in the comment I'll appreciate.
Thanks Franbarra2011 for your comment and your review
parkle: , I hope you'll keep enjoying my story.
So that is it, so see you next time!
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I'm going
leeping:
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