《Dio, Rise to the top [working title]》"Fight"
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"something" discussion
'something' thought
*something* sfx
Dan
"Well, I said "fight' but we shouldn't forget that you're 9 years old brats that never had to fight anyone, so looking at you fighting each other would be pointless...And I think we're a little late" John
"As I feared 11:46 am, we must end it in 10 min." He said while looking at the sun.
I'm sure that 'How can he tell the hour with such precision, just by looking at the sun?' was what we were all thinking.
It was only much later that we learned that there was a clock in the system (A.N: reference anyone?)
"Yeah so in 10 min I have to see the 9 of you fight...Well let's do it like that: sideThe nine of you will together come against me!!" John said while smiling
"What?!" "No way!" "We can't" sounded all around me.
'But we don't even have any chance against you even in a 9 vs 1 fight"
"Well you still stand no chance, so you will have to just land one hit on me, and I will reduce my power to be at your level.I'm so generous, you can't refuse."John still smiling.
Since he begun talking about fighting he seemed to change little by little:
His normally calm tail was now moving back and forth excitedly, his smile has a bestial feel, he was now looking at us like a predator to its prey.
"Well so now I'm a Level 3, you can come.Damn It's been so long since I felt so weak!" He almost spat the last word.
"you can fight how you wish, just don't use magic, you don't know how to use it and you can hurt yourself.Well... not that it will change anything."
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Carl that didn't seem to support anymore the verbal abuses rushed at him and tried to swing a punch directed at his face.
John waited until the last moment to dodge, just by tilting his head to the side, while doing that he moved his hand, ground .gripped Carl's neck and lifted in a way that only his toes could touch the ground.
As Carl was beginning to suffocate he begun to whisper. As there were no other sounds on the training grounds except the wind and the suffocating Carl.
"In a death match, You would be dead" and he dropped Carl on the ground.
"Is that it? just one? I know you're weak but I didn't know you were cowards" He continued, taunting us.
The twins didn't support anymore and rushed at once, attacking, from beside once with a punch.
Carl that had recuperated during John's taunt had stood up and was trying to tackle John from behind.
In the time it took for the twins to prepare themselves to punch, he seized them by their necks abruptly, leaving them no chance to evade. As Carl was about to tackle John, He was slapped by something and had to stop his charge stunted.
John profited of this opening to slam the twins he was holding in Carl, throwing them all on the ground, ending the little fight.
'What was that?What stopped Carl?'The ...tail?
"What it is guys? I told you to use anything to land a hit, 'cause I will use anything to defeat you" He said grinning savagely at us.
I looked at those near me, the girls seeming engrossed in the fight, but showed no hint of wanting to join the fray.
I looked at the other boys, they looked at me a second but Ron didn't keep staring at me.It looked like he doesn't want to go. Seb kept staring and nodded, I nodded too and we rushed together.
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We were weary of his hands, careful to not be grabbed, but were caught off guard when he kicked us.
We were even able to come near him.
"Ok, you don't understand when I say I will use anything guys? Well, I can't see how you fight if you're down so quickly. Well I 'cause I'm a generous man, I will not use any kick from now on! Come at me!!"
We went all 5 together at him only to return on the ground when he used the other to protect himself from a hit.
This continued for 2 more minutes.
I was siting on the ground, thinking.
'When we are 3 or more, he grab us and swing us to the others to block them.On a duel he will dodge with a minimum of movement, I can use that'
As everyone was on the ground I stood up. John was eyeing me, trying to guess what I will do next.
I rush at him alone, dodge to the side his hands that were trying to grab me, after so much time, I had understood the timing, and I punched him the face...or I tried. He was already beginning to dodge on the side by tilting his head, and his hands were already coming to catch me.
'This is what I wanted !!'
As his head was tilting, I...opened my hand and threw sand in his eyes!
He closed his eyes and by reflect stop his hand.Just what I wanted so I punched him!
A.N: Writing fight scene is hard...it took me so long...
I hope it's good, tell me what you think in your comment plz, and of course any mistakes.
I forgot about it, but last chapter what did you think about the POV change? plz tell me that it.
So see you next time
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