《Dio, Rise to the top [working title]》The beginning
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I pass the door and look around me 9 children of around 8 years old are looking at me with round eyes. They are all sitting around me in a half-circle.
"Good afternoon, everyone is present? Yes? Perfect!
So let's begin.
Today we'll talk about our world, it's a story that everyone in the village know, and today it's our turn to learn and maybe one of you will be on my seat like today to tell this story to the next generation.So...Let's start!
Humm...Our Creator, contrarily to the others story around the place isn't the Light God like they think, our Creator isn't even from this world it's logic when you know that He created this world, everything, and everyone on it or in it.
From an ancient text we know that our Creator is someone who had transcended the limit of limits of divinity.I don't know how to explain it without complicate words so let's just say he was more powerful than every gods here."
*a child rise his hand* "more powerful than the Light God?"
-"Yes, more powerful than each and every gods you can think of, no more interruption, i must finish to tell you this story quickly, I said looking the sun through the open window, so no more question until the end.
So our Creator was bored, and with nothing to do with his powers decided to try to create something. He began with little things, but little by little he began to enjoy what he was doing and increased the difficulty, creating things complicated and beautiful, or simply powerful. At first he was creating things from his his hometown, those are the artifacts powerful items that can be more powerful than our most powerful weapon or simply useful.
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So after creating quite a number of artifacts he begun a greater project : Creating a world!"
I stop a second to look at the eyes sparkling of interest of the children.
'Ah this is good job me'
" He begun by creating the elements that he joined together to form the landscape, the oceans, the volcano and others. He finished the world after a long time but it was empty, this world looked like a wasteland with no life. He threw his artifacts in the world hoping some change, some destroyed the land changing the geography some created trees and forest.
After some time the world now had plant and trees everywhere, and looked like a paradise, but it wasn't what he was looking for, it lacked living beings, so he created animals from snakes to dragons, from birds to phoenix. He evoked magic in this world giving affinities to the animals, giving some abilities and giving them the power to evolve, creating monsters. He was happy, but not totally this world was lacking intelligent beings.
So created us, the origins, looking human but with the potential of becoming anything literally, he created a number of us and told us to increase the population and evolve.
The ancestors of this time were living in a paradise no monster was allowed to hunt them, they were able to go anywhere. In the time he was gone the ancestors discovered the gift the ability to become anything, you will learn of it later so i will not explain it, but because of this ability tension started to appear, people begun to evolve and so their mentalities.
They became beast-men for some, human, vampire, elf, dryads, elemental and others... but because of their transformation they started to change for some to hate each other, to kill each other, committing crimes without getting retribution, separating themselves into tribes that were making war.
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When our Creator came back he went mad, seeing that his work was destroyed by the ancestors.
He linked our word to 2 others worlds that he created, a world of angels, called paradise and a world of demons called hell.One world was preaching goodness, virtues and order, the other sins and chaos.By the way this world is called Terra2, even if we don't know why.
He also unbind the monsters that were free to hunt the ancestors.
With the apparition of demons and angels the order was back.
But He was not happy, the order was back, but wars and monsters had decimated the population.The survivors needed strength to survive those disasters, he gave them The system, that helped them to unlock their potential while rewarding their efforts and achievements, the system that you will have to understand and use, later.
But with this power the strong were destroying the weak and the some population were going instinct, he destroyed the continent dividing it in a multitude of smaller islands, no being could go on the oceans, it was and it is.
Laws and Truths were another system He gave us there are laws that we cannot break or we will be punished by the gods that are looking at us, and there are Truths that me must find to be rewarded by those same gods,they are a residue of the power of our Creator.
The tribes were regrouped by race on the island, for example we, the origins, are alone on this island with the human.
By doing all of it our creator wanted a world that looked like what He had in mind, he put a cap on the system, the LEVEL 100, for that the strong may not stay on their island to terrorize the weak and to see again a place where a lot of different species could be seen together.
SO if you achieve LEVEL 100 you will ascend to the central island with each one of the other little island who had ascend like you.
After finishing the system, our Creator left, but it's said that on the central island there is a way to make him appear again."
Looking at the setting sun i knew i was late.
Let's end their first day in school here.
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