《An overly OP MC in another world.》Chapter 12: Days of the past [3]
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------Random mercenaries P.O.V------
We were in the middle of a battle.
Captain Shira wasn't there.
We thought that we were, fucked.
Until the General came…
and fought their leader for a bit…
until he turned into a DRAGON!!!
------Carlos P.O.V------
There was a group of dragons and a Demi-god, his name was Igneel and he said that he was…
''I AM IGNEEL THE DEMI-GOD OF LIGHT AND I AM THE KING OF THE DRAGONS!!!, FACE ME DEMON SCUM!!! AND MEET YOUR DOOM!!!!'' (Igneel)
'He looks like he'll be a challenge, GREAT!!!' (Carlos' thoughts)
''BRING IT ON!!!'' (Carlos)
I shouted as I charged at Igneel with my sword Laura, and we… missed but we did kill several dragons in the process.
''HA!, YOU'RE TOO WEAK TO EVEN SCRATCH THE FLESH ON MY BODY!!!'' (Igneel)
'Okay, now he's just annoying me… ' (Carlos' thoughts)
''Die… '' (Lucas)
'Lucas… where did he come from?' (Carlos' thoughts)
Lucas said as he used necromancy on the previously dead dragons and the undead dragons held off the… living dragons while I fought Igneel.
''DIE!!!'' (Carlos)
I shouted as I… recklessly charged at Igneel again… and I actually hit him this time!
''You, YOU DARE TO HARM ME!!!???, TIME TO FUCKING PAY!!!'' (Igneel)
Igneel shouted as he flew towards me using the dragon wings on his back, and he took a slash at me using his sword.
But I dodged the slash and slashed back at him, causing him to fall out of the sky…
''YOU HARMED ME YET AGAIN!!! NOW I'M GETTING SERIOUS!!!'' (Igneel)
'... He's getting serious now?, what is this, fucking DBZ??? oooooh look out his power level is over 9000!!! HA Nice one inner Carlos!' (Carlos' thoughts)
''Bring it on!'' (Carlos)
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''Oh, I will… [Dragonification]!!!'' (Igneel)
He said as he started turning into a giant red dragon with black marks around his body.
''Oh, you cheeky dick waffle!... too bad for you, I can do that too!!! [Mimic: Dragon]'' (Carlos)
I turned into a large white and black dragon, I will admit that I terrify even myself…
''ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!!!!'' (Ingeel)
''ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOARRR!!!!!!!'' (Carlos)
Igneel roared at me, so I roared louder and then I said.
''LAURA, DRAGON FORM!!!'' (Carlos)
I felt a suppressing aura coming from Igneel… so I needed more support.
''YES, SIR!!!'' (Laura)
Laura, my sword said as she started turning into a large black dragon.
''ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRRRR!!!!'' (Carlos)
''ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAR!!!'' (Laura)
I and Laura roared at Igneel, then Igneel roared back.
''ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!!!!'' (Igneel)
'... Is this a dragon roaring contest?' (Carlos' thoughts)
''DIE!!! [FLAME BREATH]!!!'' (Igneel)
Igneel roared as he flew towards Laura and I, trying to burn us with his flames.
It wasn't very effective, he eventually noticed that we were basically unharmed and his reaction was…
''WHY WON'T YOU JUST DIE!!!???'' (Igneel)
I simply replied with.
''Well, it's because I don't want to die from a whiny little bitch… '' (Carlos)
He turned from red to… an even brighter red...
''GRRRR, YOU SON OF A BITCH, DIE!!!![FLAME BREATH]!!!'' (Igneel)
He tried to light us on fire, again…
''You do know that this doesn't work on us, right?'' (Laura)
Laura said with an amused tone in her voice.
''Oh, I know… '' (Igneel)
Igneel said as he was already behind Laura and he… got his ass kicked in mid-air.
''YOU. DO. NOT. SNEAK. ATTACK. A. BEAUTIFUL. MAIDEN!!!!'' (Laura)
She said as she beat him to a pulp.
'She's kind of scary when she's angry… ' (Carlos' thoughts)
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''AAAH!!!, PLEASE DON'T HURT ME ANYMORE!!!!'' (Igneel)
''...'' (Carlos)
''...'' (Laura)
Laura and I were almost completely stunned by his cowardice.
''Hehehehehehe… hahahaha… HAHAHAHAHA'' (Carlos)
''Huh?!'' (Igneel)
''HAHAHA… oh I'm sorry Igneel, but we're going to hurt you a lot more than just that!!!'' (Carlos)
''What, why!!??'' (Igneel)
''We were paid to… '' (Carlos)
''I, I'LL PAY YOU DOUBLE, NO! TRIPLE!!!... just don't hurt me!'' (Igneel)
''And betray the trust of our clients? I don't think that I'd be comfortable doing that, so no deal… sorry'' (Carlos)
I said as I flew towards him and began slashing at him using my claws.
''AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!'' (Igneel)
It took around an hour to finally kill Igneel, and I think that it was time well spent…
''HOORAH!!!'' (Mercenaries)
''THE BOSS KILLED THE DRAGON KING!!!!'' (Mercenary)
While the mercenaries were cheering, Lucas flew up to me on an undead dragon and said.
''Carlos, I've managed to acquire several undead dragons, what should I do with them?'' (Lucas)
He said with a smile on his face.
''You can keep them, thanks for holding the other dragons off buddy!'' (Carlos)
I said as I pat him on the back… I could swear that I saw him blush.
''Oh… Oh it was nothing… I'll go and show the others our new pets, BYE!!'' (Lucas)
He said as he flew away with around eight dragons behind him.
Soon, we'll go to war with the Holy kingdom...and I've got something to show them!!!
Title achieved: The second Dragon King
Unlocked secret class: Demon king of blood
Would you like to have this as your class? (Y/N)
''Yes.'' (Carlos)
I said with a smirk on my face.
ATTENTION ALL PLAYERS: Carlos Drake has achieved the secret class, Demon king of blood. kill him quickly before he rises to power!
I didn't know but that day, I made a lot of allies and enemies with that one announcement…
(END)
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