《God's Eye》Chapter 8: To Kingdom Sung
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I really apologize for anyone cringing while reading this story, ill try to improve it though.
I'm so wet.
Like really wet right now.
And the fact that this can cause some misunderstanding doesn't help.
Yes, i'm wet but not that kind of wet. I am wet because of the blood. The Blood of the bear.
I didn't noticed that i was in my uniform until i look at my self and saw i was covered in blood. I can't even see even a white speck of spot in my uniform, I was literally covered with blood especially with my face, which is hindering my vision right now, and my hair is now red. Being covered in blood is really a problem and waiting for it to rot will just make it worse. I just want to at least wipe my face clean with a towel and fortunately i found one folded in my pocket, unfortunately it was also covered with blood but only on the outside. I unfolded it and seeing it still has some clean parts i began wiping my face.
I throw the towel away since its already full of blood but at least i cleaned my face a little bit and made my vision clearer.
I looked at my 'Info' and after leveling up I actually ended with additional 5 points of each stat. What the Hell? How am i supposed to survive in this case? I really need to study this class, I need to know all the thing about this class since it is essential for living in this world.
I suddenly heard a ding! sound.
"Game Master is now not usable for a day."
"..." Crap Crap Crap, the timer already ended?!
I immediately check my 'Character'
Character: Name: Lorenzo D. Valentino Title: God's Favorite Class: Game Master (-23:59) Level: 19 Strength 15 Agility 15 Endurance 15 Luck 15 Charm 15 Mana 15
Since my Class reached its time limit, i really need to get out of this place to avoid any more beast. Let's get real here, if i ever encounter some monstrous type of beast again, even if its just a dog, no even a wild cat ill probably lose and there is a possibility of getting killed by, of course, a cat.
I obsevered my surrounding and it seems like the plain is mostly empty, but what worries me is what if there is some wild small creature here? Since the grass is just around my knee, they can still probably hide if they are small, maybe there is a wild cat too!
Aside the plain grass, in some distance it seems like there are some trees, probably a forest. Technically, the plains is more safer than the forest, but i rather go in than try staying here for a whole day waiting to for my class to activate again. We don't know if that trees are really a forest or maybe beyond that trees there is a town. Let's take the risk and be positive about this.
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I started walking towards the trees but my pace is slow due to the thick grass surrounding my knee and my small AGI. It'll probably take more time for me to reach there.
=More time later=
I finally arrived. Luckily i didn't encounter anything besides a bluish-gelatin-thing hopping around, it didn't noticed me so I just ignored it. Seems like that was a Slime. This is really RPG like world.
Unbelievable but after finally reaching the forest, i hoped that it was just a boundary or border to some town but it really was a forest, a big thick forest but really silent. Since it was so silent i decided to move around to see if there is something I can use. I heard some kind of water flow, that meansa there is some river or something around here. I followed the sound and thank Mika, there really is a river around here. I decided to take a bath since i began to smell like a rotten corpse, i also decided to try and wash of the blood of my uniform.
Its really hard to wash of the blood but i did find a way and washed some of it, at least i got rid of the smell. I also tried to wash my uniform but the uniform is just so full of blood i cant even washed it all, but rhe white shirt that i wore underneath the uniform is still good so i decided to wear it temporarily. As for the pants, its still good enough.
After bathing and washing, i wore my clothes and started to move again, leaving my uniform behind since its now useless.
Walking around i found a very huge tree. Its trunk is very huge that it takes a minute to move around it. Since feeling a bit of tiredness i lay down in the trunk. But the moment i lay down i heard a deep and low growl.
'Gulp' is this what they call Deja vu?
I looked to my left side and saw nothing, and I looked at my righ-
"Shit" I unconsciously muttered as i saw a huge lion face a few inches in front of me. Baring its yellowish vampire like fangs that was tainted with a little bit of reddish color probably blood. I also noticed a scar that was lined from cheek to cheek.
Shit, i was busy describing this lion I didn't noticed its mouth getting wider and wider intending to chow me down. I immediately got up and tried to run but my foot was stuck in root. I can see already all of his teeth and saliva flowing down from his mouth.
The lion stopped like it was frozen in time then suddenly it was chopped. Yes, he was beheaded, red substance flying around all over me. butijusttookashower. And there revealed a person who chopped the lions head, a fiery crimson red hair, a wild full of killing intent red cat like eyes and the biggest sword i saw.
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"Nika"
===Nika's POV===
After sending Mika back home, I immediately teleported to where Lorenzo is Located. Seems like he was in the forest near the Kingdom Sung. After a thought, i instantly teleported to where he was, but all i saw is a huge tree. The tree that was the very center of this huge forest.
"The spell didn't worked?" I muttered to myself, I didn't see Lorenzo anywhere. Suddenly I heard someone cursed.
"Shit" Realizing it was Lore's voice, i immediately followed it. I ran around the trunk and i saw a lion opening his mouth intenting to chow down the victim. Realizing it was Lore, I immediately released my killing intent. How dare you attack the person that Mika hold dears to the point giving up one of her divine power.
I saw the Lion stopped, I opened my palm and I let my Mana gather around my hand, letting it form into a great sword, then swinging it down with the full intention of chopping its head off. I looked at Lore who has a stupefied look on his face and he mutters.
"Nika".
==Lorenzo's POV==
"Nika" I muttered as I saw her holding a great sword and staring at me.
She reach her arms toward me and asked "You alright.?"
I nodded, embarrassed at how cool she looked right now. Im starting to think that if this was a novel then Nika is probably the MC of this story.
I grabbed her hand and stood up.
"Yeah. Thanks" I just thanked her.
After a moment of silence.
"How can you not fight back when you even defended from my attack?" Nika asked suddenly.
"You didn't know?"
"What know?"
"About my Class. Look" I let her see my 'Character'.
"Wha-But earlier I thought-?"
"Yeah, that's how my class works and that's why why I didn't fought back since my stats is back to normal."
"Im amazed you even survived, I don't know what would happen if i came later." She was clearly amazed.
"Im just really lucky how i survived this long but where were you anyway?"
"Somethings concerning Mika came up." I was about to ask her why but i stopped.
"Where are we anyway?" I asked, changing topic.
"In some forest near the Kingdom Sung. Come on, we better reached there before sunset."
===3 Minutes later===
We arrived. As embarrassing as it sound, Mika gave me a piggyback ride and let her did all the work, running. Its terrifying how fast she can be yet not even shedding a single sweat and her pace is so fast that my face is now stiff from the speed. We traveled 10 or more kilometers in just a few moments but Blerfgg--
"From the speed we are going, its really obvious that i would get motion sic-Blerfgg"
"..kness." i finished, i vomited numerous time. Motion sickness really is a pain in the ass. My head and stomach is still aching from the travel.
"Yeah sorry, here" she extend her palm, i slowly got better until the head ache and stomach ache disappears. Its really a surprise why i wasn't surprised from all the things that happened, probably because of Nika.
"Now where are we?" After composing my self, I asked.
"We're here." She pointed, I followed where and saw a small line from the gate of the town.
"Wait!" I stopped her.
"??" She inclined her head as confusion visible on her face.
"Can you somehow change your charm stat?" I plead seriously. Since trouble will undoubtly follow me if ever they saw Nika, and recalling what happened in the past where everyone despised me when me and Ema were still "friends" my eyes flash a light with disdain.
"..uhn" Nika nod and open her palm as mana condenses around her arm then covered her body. I look at her Info panel and saw that her Charm are now from 9000 to 2000 but i am sure she will still attract attention but not more if she decides to stay the same before.
Nika started to walk towards and joined the line, I also followed.
After a few minutes it was finally our turn.
There are two knight like guarding the gate, both of them stared at Nika absorbing her beauty before asking us some questions.
"Hello there my lady. Are you new here? I'll never forget someone who lives in this town with that much beauty but I've never seen you anywhere." The guard on the left flirtatiously said.
Smiling Nika said "Yes, we are new here and we would like to come in."
"Are you an adventurer or normal?" The guard on the right ask who looks like much more serious than on the left.
"We are planning to register here as an adventurer." Nika just casually said.
"Oh I see. The entrance fee is 10 silver but there is a policy to discount adventurers and it seems like you are becoming one then its only 5 silver." The guard on the right said while giving an honest smile.
"Is 5 silver huge." I whispered to Nika but she just replied with later.
Nika handed some silver coins to the guard, after confirming the payment they opened the door as they yelled..
"Welcome to Kingdom Sung!"
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