《God's Eye》Chapter 3: Castle
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This is not the MC POV's.
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I washed my hands and looked at the mirror. I saw a guy, with his messy brown hair and brown eyes that staring back at me. I looked away and wiped my hands with a towel. I walked out the restroom and noticed a guy walked past me, I think he was one of my classmates, I don't know why but he seems to be isolated in class since he never talks to anyone and no one ever talks to him.
I opened the door of our classroom and was greeted with emerald green eyes.
"Ken, will you think about it?" a girl asked me.
"How many times have I told you that I can't hang out with you since I will be busy this weekend, Ema." I replied to her request.
I really can't hang out this weekend since I promised Clarisse I would hangout with her, besides Clarisse asked me out first. I don't want to hang out with two girls at the same time, it will leave a bad taste in my mouth.
"Humph!!" She turned around behind me and stomped her feet while pouting.
"Haha, it seems fate is not with you this time Ema." a girl barged in to our conversation.
"Shut up, Clarisse." Ema glared at her.
A girl with long brown hair that touches her hips, blue eyes like the sky, pinkish lips, slender body, perfect curves, a true definition of goddess. She's shorter than me with a gap of 10 cm. And of course, Ema's beauty is on par with Clarisse with her ginger hair that ties up in a ponytail, big eyes that are green as an emerald, red glossy lips, also has curves like Clarisse. .
Clarisse walks up towards us. I notices some student stares at me with envy. I don't know why though, maybe its because of Ema and Clarisse. Both of them is pretty popular in this school. Good grades, Slender bodies and Gorgeous faces. They became famous the moment they entered the school grounds when we were still freshmen.
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"Sucks to be you." Clarisse said to Ema and looked at me with a huge grin showing her perfect white teeth.
Ema crossed her hands and pouted, which makes her childishly cute.
"Okay okay, that's enough for both of you." I let a small laugh, amuse of their cute fight.
"How about this Ema, next week we can hang out if I'm not busy." I told her to life her spirits.
She looked at me and her face beamed with happiness, while Clarisse besides me just clicked her tongue.
"Uhn!!" She nodded happily.
"Anyways let's go back to our seat, seems like teacher is almost here." I said.
I went to my seat which is located beside the window of the room that viewing outside. Clarisse's seat is beside me and Ema's in front. Both of them sat down and ready their this for the upcoming class.
I looked around and saw that everyone's already in their seat but some are still standing, I noticed an empty chair two chairs behind me and thought whose seat it is.
Ah right. That seat belong to the man who I met in the hallway earlier, Err--what was his name again? Its already second semester but I still can't remember everyone's name who don't stand out much. Ahh yeah, I think its Romanto? or is it Lomento? Ahh Lorenzo! silly me.
Speaking of that guy, I heard that he was quite popular back then, in a bad way, confessing to someone in public but ended up in a humiliating situation. I was curious about that guy, I turned towards to Clarisse..
"Hey Clarisse." I called her. She just finished preparing things and looked at me.
"Hmmm?"
"You know Lorenzo right?"
As I asked, I noticed Ema flinched in her seat.
"Oh him? Yeah."
"I heard that he was quite well-known when we were still freshmen." I told her.
"Yeah, that was 3 or 4 years ago? I remembered that he was humiliated in public yet now he looks so cold." at Clarisse's information I can see Ema being restless.
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"I'm quite curious about him but what exactly happened?" I asked. Seems 'like curiosity killed the cat' did me.
Clarisse glanced at Ema.
"How about you ask her?"
"Who?" I tilt my head.
"The one who humiliated him."
"Who?"
"Em--"
Suddenly everything turned white.
==Castle==
I expected white walls and black board when I open my eyes but instead I saw a statue, a big statue, A man wearing big armor that can be seen in game and holding a great sword that was pointing forward but that statue is not the one I'm surprised about but the people who was surrounding us. There were about 15 people in the vicinity and all of them are wearing purple cloaks with weird marks on it, its not just those people that are here, all of my classmates are here too looking confused as I am. In front of us stood a beautiful girl at my age wearing pink dress that looks like from medieval time, its not just the dress that stole my attention but his beauty, beauty that can rival Ema and Clarisse. I don't know why but the girl looked tired and ready to faint.
I heard a door opened and more people came in wearing armors and holding pointy dangerous swords.
"Hide behind me." I whispered to Ema and Clarisse who was standing beside me for the whole time. They just nodded, fear and confusion visible in their faces.
I noticed all the men wearing armor suddenly form a wall around us. I braced my self.
"What do you want?!" I shouted, looking for answers. Angry for making Ema and Clarisse scared.
I never noticed but there was a big chair, no more like a throne, behind the girl and there was a person sitting wearing royalty clothes that you can only see on TV. He stood up and looks at me and my classmate that were behind me.
"Please be at ease. We have no intention of harming you but instead we need you to help us."
"I don't care. Who are you and Where is this?!." I gritted my teeth.
"My apologies. I am King Art Doug the first, King of the Kingdom Mackta, currently the 435th king. And this is my Castle." The king gave a deep bow. I didn't noticed that around us, including the men in armor are now kneeling.
I'm flabbergasted of what I heard. I didn't know what to say, I just remained silent.
"I understand this is the first time you experienced this so I would like to apologize for summoning you here without you knowing."
"Summoning?" I asked.
"Yes, we summoned you here from your world together with your friends"
"So you mean we are in--"
"Yes, you are in another world."
When he said that, I heard some murmuring behind me, I almost forgot that all of the class are also here.
I can see some excitement, fear, woriness and confusion from all their faces. I looked at Ema and Clarisse, looks like they were able to calm down because of me.
"And, what's the reason you summon us here?" All the commotion behind me stopped and trying to know the answer of that I've asked. I surprised why all of us are so calm.
"As I've said earlier, we need your help."
"For what?" I asked.
"For the upcoming war of the 4 Great Kingdoms."
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I really don't know how to speak noble and I hope that the king there is speaking noble enough xD. I dont know what I'm sayin.
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