《Unlimited Wishes. (Re-write)》Chapter 5: Rescue, a potential friend? And a new world!
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I don’t know why I didn’t think of it before…
I am such a fucking idiot!!!
Well, here it goes.
“I wish for Alex and Ren to be right in front of me, and for all of the guards in the prison to have their legs broken, and for the prisoners other than us five, to be knocked out!” (Vincent)
I said, loudly…
There back… looking confused as all hell.
“What… what happened?!” (Alex)
Alex asked, confused.
“I wished for you guys to come back… oh, almost forgot something! I wish that all of the surveillance cameras were instantly destroyed, beyond repair. And that nothing from it is salvageable, even with the best repair skills” (Vincent)
As I said that, I heard a lot of BOOMS around us… damn, they would’ve instantly found us, if I didn’t do that…
“So… let’s go” (Mason)
Mason, who was itching for a fight, said… awkwardly.
...I ignored all of the pain, gritting my teeth… until they almost fell out… well, felt like almost falling out.
“Oh god, that fucking hurts!” (Vincent)
I shouted in pain… then we left.
“Are we really, just walking out of the prison?” (Ren)
Ren asked, curious and still in a daze.
“Yes.” (Vincent)
I said confidently, as I literally walked out the front door… after Ratel broke it after multiple… punches.
“Let’s move…” (Mason)
Mason suggested.
“Right… we’re probably known as psychos back there… yeah, let’s go to another country” (Vincent)
“Or another world, remember… you can take us to another one… whenever you feel like” (Mason)
He said, smiling.
-sigh-
“Fuck it, just because I’m bored… let’s go to another world for a few weeks, I wish that we were transported to an inhabitable world, with sentient life, and fruit… fuck it, make it a fantasy world too!” (Vincent)
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I said, as specific as I could be.
…
…
…
We’re in... Harus… from the book World’s Gatekeeper… oh, my god!
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In another… world… (Earth)
“WHAT!? YOU LOST HIM!!??” (Queen Reinhardt)
The Queen shouted, angrily at Drakeel
“He… he disappeared… into thin air, I couldn’t find him. My Queen… please forgive me, I have a wife and daughter...” (Drakeel)
Drakeel bowed, tears in his eyes.
“You know that I don’t tolerate failure, especially to this extent… I’m sorry, but you are not forgiven… and neither is your family” (Queen Reinhardt)
She said, coldly, as she pulled out a rapier and pierced his heart.
“You… will… rot… in… hell” (Drakeel)
He said, bleeding out on the ground.
“I know, that’s why I’m having fun before it ends… now I need to find where your precious family is at… and somebody should have cleaned this up YESTERDAY!!!” (Queen Reinhardt)
She said as she walked off.
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...Another world… again (Back to Haurus)
“I sense a disturbance… it seems like someone with a similar ability to mine, has appeared” (???)
Said a man in a skull mask, wielding a scythe, and wearing a black trenchcoat with katana on each side. To himself.
…
Then he disappeared into thin air.
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The REAL world (Our world, guys…)
And now, we cut off to the author's regular life… because he needs this chapter to be longer -_-
Hello there my name is [Yite] I was born on [*#^(#] the [@*)(] of [[email protected]*()], so I’m considered kind of young, for an author… but that won’t stop me! From doing my passion for writing books… then dropping them -_-
Shut up me!
You shut up!
Guys, both of you should be quiet.
SHUT UP
YEAH, DUDE SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!
-sigh- I hate you guys… so much
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Good, he’s gone…
I’m not!
GO!!! BEFORE I BRING OUT THE “OTHER”
You wouldn’t!!!
Bitch, you know me
…
…
…
You’re right, goodbye.
Good, now I’m alone…
Back on track…
Where was I?
Fuck it.
I was at [*#()#@] the other day.
Nothing happened.
I’m a totally normal person.
Well, except for us.
Yeah!
Well… not completely normal, I may have an angel and a demon on my shoulder…
I’m the demon
I’m the angel! Now [Yite] spread ‘em!
YOU PERVERT, WE’RE OF THE SAME GENDER!!!
What gender is that!?
MALE!
BOOM, MADE YOU REVEAL SOMETHING ABOUT YOURSELF, HAHAHA!!!
Pfft
Fuck you guys, I’m leaving!
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THE END XD
F.Y.I: This is what happens when Vincent is rational and uses his wishes, it gets a little boring, maybe funny… but, it makes the chapters WAY shorter… and Imagexbreaker and I have just started the multiverse :3 (Shouldn’t have said that, shouldn’t I have Image…?)
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