《Legends of Pandorus I: Song of A Crimson Angel》the end?
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Dear readers,
Secariel here. A few days back, I decided to look at this story which I'd spawned half a year ago. And I noticed one thing.
It was bad.
There were so many things I wish I could have done better. I realised that as an unexperienced, writer, I was unable to tackle something with the scope of Pandorus. The vision was there, but the execution was graceless, and sometimes downright distasteful.
It is with reluctance, then, that I announce the discontinuation of this story. There will no longer be any new chapters uploaded to this arc.
I expect that this won't matter to many people, because I've read my own story and seen with my own eyes how it fails to make an impact. But I'm writing this for myself as much as for anyone else. Pandorus was a pet project of mine, and right now I think it needs a fresh start.
I will now concentrate on garnering experience in writing. For now, I'm writing another sci-fi story title Abyssus. I'm more satisfied with that than this story, which, in my opinion, is a rushed mess. There is no future in this iteration of Axel, a graceless, growth-less character that I only advanced through his increasingly flashy displays of violence.
So that's it. I'm axing this story.
For now. Because vampires, especially Axel, don't stay dead for long.
When I feel that I'm truly experienced enough to write about something on such a scale as the vast, bleak world of Pandorus, I will revamp and re-write Axel's story, hopefully for the better.
The Crimson Angel will return. This I promise.
Post Tenebris Lux.
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