《Phoebe's Afterword》NOTE
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Hello there, it has been a while.
As you may have noticed for the few who followed this story, It has been a few months since I posted the last chapter. As to why I didn't, post anything, well, there are a few reasons. First, I'm lazy, it is one of the biggest reasons eh. Second, the university, and the third and last one is the story itself.
Indeed I'm quite dissatisfied with the story as it is now and the "magic'" system is not clear enough to my taste. Despite these months of thinking about it, I still didn't reach an answer as to how I want it to be but I have some clues. I will rewrite the story from the beginning and will change some stuff.
After thinking about it I noticed how I made Fyr, the world where the characters evolve, only as a fantastic Earth. Sure there is some change, magic and the world is bigger but in the end, it's just a magic Earth. This time I will give myself more freedom and try to think outside the box. I will not promise anything as to when I will post the new chapters but know that I am writing them.
The title will change too, maybe. I'm not sure, tell me what you think. If you have any advice based on the chapters posted so far (or not), don't hesitate to tell me.
Thanks, have a good day.
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