《legacy of the blade》i have redone prologue 1 to chapter 2 check them out
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After rereading a couple of the intro/prologue chapters I did a while a go I thought they weren't very well done so I'm redoing all the prologue/introduction chapter and chapter one. I've already redone prologue 1 - chapter 1 so if want you can go check that out. If you want to know which chapters have been redone go back this list because I'll update it each time I redo a chapter. Also removing the hiatus April fools because of how much of a bad joke I think it is. Next April fools I'm going to make a April fools chapter so be prepared muhahahhahah.
-prologue/introduction 1: redone type of change: quite major changes
-prologue/introduction 2: redone type of change: fairly major changes
-prologue/introduction 3: redone type of change: some grammar etc
-chapter 1: redone type of change: almost nothing....
-chapter 2:redone type of change grammar and style
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