《Mana Odyssey》Chapter 238:Crimson flame essence 05
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Narrator POV.
"Kuh..."(Riese's father)
"So this is hero?What a joke..."(Suzaku)
Suzaku said that as he look at hero in front of him. Then he kicked him in the stomach send him rolling on ground in pain.
"Father!!!'(Riese)
"So pathetic ,Is this the hero that called the "Magician"?I already waiting for fighting him so long...yet he was this pathetic.."(Suzaku)
In the end when Forvish don't come suzaku only hang in silent..after all he want to see how strong was this prince to made princess pursue him.At this rate he would be punished by disobeyed princess order,no one liked to be punished....but yet heaven gave him a chance as he found someone ...The lover that can't abandon her love after betray her own lover. Thought It was like that Suzaku hate betrayer the most...no you can say the guard and princess hate this kind of thing the most....That's why Suzaku plan to kill her.....but it will be problem after all even if she killed no one will believe him..after all she were the daughter of hero.... Which made her planned to kidnap her instead...
Suzaku knows the best he would fail.but he believe in his running away ability...beside..If he could fight a little and see prince battle strength it would be great even in the end he would be punished...as Long he can see the capability the person he would served in the future..But Suzaku ended up entirely disgusted by the hero.because the hero said..
"I will do anything,I will even kill Forvish for you that's why please release my daughter."(Riese's father)
Hearing this He become angry and started attacking without any thinking...What kind of hero is this?BULLSHIT!!!!IS what suzaku thought!!!!They already betrayed the prince and prince indeed forgive him and yet what?HE WANTED TO FUCKING KILL HIM!!!!!!THIS FU**ING TRASH!!!!!!!!Don't he know shame shame?But when he realized this maybe a trick...he was too late...Thanks god it wasn't it wasn't a trap he thought...as because the hero didn't retaliate....as now he was just kicked the hero after stomping at him....Hero?THIS IS CLEARLY A TRASH!!!!!!Or so he thought!!No wonder her daughter become good for nothing trash and abandon her own lover without second thought!!!!They only care themselves!!!!That's why he would kill them for the prince.But just as he draw his weapon...
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"Riese,are you hurt?"(Forvish)
Saw this Suzaku rub his eyes as he can believe it?How the fuck he come in without anyone noticing?Even thought it was like this he laid a threat trap that will notify him when any people come to save her...Yet this guy..he able to close in without him noticing?A monster?
"Forvish...why?"(Riese)
Riese was surprised the most....as she felt already wronged him so much. She would be lying if she didn't yearn him...but she knows she didn't deserve help.That's why..she was confused. She want to say doesn't need help and made Forvish forget about her completely..Yet his answer erase all of her thought..
"Sorry,Riese I am idiot after all.."(Forvish)
"Forvish!I am sorry !!!I For being weak...I am sorry!!!"(Riese)
Hearing that made her cry..she don't know why.,,,,It just her tear can't stop.
Forvish POV.
I know Riese was sorry all of this time just based on that book,I know she regretting how weak she was..the note book she give me tell everything...even without word. She must be crying every night she wrote it.Now matter how Idiot I am,I know which one was genuine which one was fake. I also know it was because how powerless is she...As she crying I immediately stand up and noticed the kidnapper was prepared to attack us..
"Let's see how you handle this prince!!"(Suzaku)
Prince ?as I thought what he mean,100 fire ball created in circle around us.Magic user huh...As I thought that I activated my crimson flame. Magic formulla written,creating Alteration flame...As I thought that I put my hand in the floor and then...at the same time the magic was fired ,I casted the magic...at the same time a magic hexagram appear on ground....and created made of crimson light...
"You think my fire ball was that weak?Let's see how much you can handle it!!!"(Suzaku)
As he said that he kept creating fireball..Everytime the fireball hit the barrier surface,it will explode..10 minutes Suzaku kept firing. What a childish adult...once he felt tired....he noticed the barrier was unscratched...
"Impossible!!!"(Suzaku)
That cost quite a lot...20%,But it's power really great.The reason why I can use it like this because in the flame there was contained experience of training. It was like my battle experience between that timeline and this time line was fused...thought...it took a time to absord all of it..but I believe 6 month was enought....Right now I only understand one thing...first magic activation was like program running in computer...they will do a run based on formula they were created with. It was impossible to know the formula and destroy it from innerside with normal flame...but my flame was different..it burn the formula..for example The fireball from kidnapper have basic like this.
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Gathering mana->transforming mana-> Shaping it->Moving->contact->Explode. What my flame used was activating explode by deleting the contact..because of that all of the magic...explode before touch us.Thought there was some weakness. It was indeed useful magic.Let's try the other magic first....Magic enchancher...Crimson flame attribute...Activating Crimson Extraction...creating Burning mana bullet. As I thought that 12 bullet was created.30% of mana was consumed......it was really expensive bullet...
Immediately I enter manarize state and take out my twin gunblade and loaded 1 bullet on each gunblade and then put the rest on my pocket.
"Now shall we start mr kidnapper?Or royal guard?May you tell me reason? why you kidnap her?"(Forvish)
I believe he was not an Idiot. maybe we can talk...
"You think I will tell you ?Defeat me fi-"(Suzaku)
I point my gunblade on him and then fired it to his right shoulder...As he immediately created a shield..But sorry my bullet ignores shield and defense...As It goes and dig to his shoulder made him speech less..
"Do you think I am joking with you?"(Forvish)
Shield was formulated to block incoming attack ,but I made bullet formulated not to be counted as attack..but instead a buff...that's why it was easily able to penetrates the shield . Thought first mark was completed....I fire another bullet.. This time he chose to dodge it...This proof that he wasn't an Idiot and certainly can be negotiated...
"Interesting Prince!!!CAN you handle this then!!!Gaia cube!!!"(Suzaku)
As I thought that I noticed,I immediately a wall appear beside me..no..Around me..Then as it finished..the roop was blocked...which made a complete darkness.Interesting...I Loaded 3 bullet to left gunblade..then I change the bullet formula...Write formula...Created Burning magic blade...Immediately the flame engulfed my left gunblade...slowly it become acrimson long sword. But it was like a real crimson sword made of metall...what a cheat ability I have right here....Once I do that I immediately cut apart the cube that imprison me...what waiting me there was the kidnapper already prepared a big gun and was ready to fire..
"Can you handle this prince!!!"(Suzaku)
Dodging wasn't an option because there was Riese behind me..As he doesn't let me prepared,he immediately fired..it...I loaded the rest of bullet to my right gunblade...And then both of my gunblade shine in crimson color...when It fired It forms a huge fireball.!As I swing my right gunblade and cut the fireball vertically...which made him shocked...but when it hit the wall and created a huge explosion...I know that fireball was no joke..
"This...is.."(Suzaku)
Sorry ,this was no time for you to be surprised..my right gunblade was shining in crimson color that grow crimson and crimson...slowly become bigger...
"Ignition break!!!"(Forvish)
I swing my right gunblade ,as he panicked he immediately created shield...Sorry this attack wasn't as it looked light...It only ignited the bullet...and created a huge explosion from inside of your body...As I swing it...the crimson edge went throught...but then his body exploded...and made him stark naked because of explosion...But he immediately stand up and tap his body lightly to clean dust on his body..This guy. Looks like he was really playing around
As he thought it was unworthy he immediately engulfed himself in flame and Censoring his vital part...
"Now prince ,Now prince !!!You earn my respect!!!!!We shall fight again!!!"(Suzaku)
As he said that...someone with hood appeared..
"Suzaku...Enough playing around."(????)
"Princess!!!"(Suzaku)
......Another enemy.huh?I noticed the hero already run with Riese. Pathetic..well as long Riese safe...
"Honey will you forgive this little kid?you see this little kid like playing around.Ah ,I apologize for not showing my face...Really I am failure as good wife and queen..."(Princess)
As she opened her hood,she smiled at me..
"Nice to meet you,my name is Helecia ,Helicia Heartfelt. Nice to meet you,Forvish-sama."(Helicia)
As I heard this,I created another bullet...Looks like I couldn't run away easily...
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