《Mana Odyssey》Chapter 181:Redeeming sin.
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3 Desember 2088
Finally Alice discharged ,lumiere was discharged yesterday ,so only her was left,for julius he was still in hospital..
"So Alice what would you do now?."(Forvish)
As i asked alice ,she only give me blatant look..
"What do you mean vish?"(Alice)
"I wouldn't return to that house again,Shiroyuki already decided that she would move into my house..i was just asking you what would you do now?Would you stay in that house again or Move to my place?Considering it was only 2 of you the house would be tight for a while..."(Forvish)
i had enough money for taking all of you and "renovating" the house.So now the house was already renovated...or i say remodelling i guess?i also bought the land for lumiere's mother and our house literally fused...so now my house was very big.well everythings thanks for akusei credit card i picked up...it was enough for us live around 10 years even after renovating the house.
"Why didn't you return?I knew they were wrong..but wouldn't you give them another chance?"(Alice)
"no,I couldn't trust them anymore,for people who abandoned without second though...there was no way i can trust them."(Forvish)
Not even shedding tears or try to find proof,just sitting like a duck.there was no way i am forgiving them.
"I see,Then i would also move..because i want to be with you."(Alice)
"Thanks for choosing me, aunt pleace help her."(Forvish)
"Leave it to me!!"(Alice's aunt)
well,alice aunt's i respect her a bit,she was too damn good in adaptation...i mean since i was betrayed her feeling to the other heroes change..she weren't even let them met with me.considering i thanks her because i don't want to meet them again if i could.after that they parted and left only Shiroyuki and me.Lumiere ,Luna ,noir and lumiere's mother was watching the house.well for Yume...he only talk inside me and didn't want to get out.same as lumiere thought.
"Shiroyuki let's go home."(Forvish)
"Yeah.""(Shiroyuki)
It was good though my house right now was near hospital.as we walked through the road.i stopped.
"Shiroyuki please go first...i had something to do.."(Forvish)
"What's wrong forvish?"(Shiroyuki)
"...there was no need."(Dad)
Dad immediately appeared from behind me..including mom and luna..
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"Forvish.."(Mom)
only luna keep silent while smiling..though i shivering..don't know why.
"I wanted to talk with you forvish."(Kyle)
Well,it was fine already beside there was some question i wanted to ask.
Mountain obsevartory .
In this place no one would hear us...it should be okay now.
"Dad...may i know the reason you coming here?"(Forvish)
As only us that go here,while i told the others to go home first...thought i had feeling i didn't want to return for time being.
"Forvish,did you know our family wasn't normal?I was picked up but it wasn't because kindness it because they plan to gain power to control...my father was someone thirst for power."(Kyle)
Our family,my names right now follow my mom.Forvish Laplace...,so that's why Dad didn't want to use his family names..
"So you come to warn me right?"(Forvish)
"....no,i want to train you...at least until you could protect yourself..that's why please bear with me."just until the situations were safe..(Kyle)
"Dad..before answering that.why do you want to kill me?."(Forvish)
".....I.....i couldn't told you...it just i want to protect Your mom.i didn't want she to die...that's why i plan to kill you.."(Kyle)
As expected.they knew about it so it wasn't their fault.it was missunderstanding...even though like that they still hesitate when it kills me,if not for their hesitation..maybe i would already end up that..beside it was already proof they hesitated if normal family they won't hesitate no..if they were normal there was no way they would let me alive.after all what i has in my body at that time was.
"it was because I had Demon king mana in me right?"(Forvish)
Arc enemy of human the Demon king..this world was nearly destroyed because of him...surely no one would choose 1 child life for the whole world.it was a child everyone would say that.the reason i had it because Lune and Noir ,They were demon king's daughter .thought there was no reason to make fuss of it and there was no need for them to know.
"So you knew,still i promise i wouldn't hurt you.that's why please let me train you !!it was my mistake just please let me be punished alone...just me..your mom didn't know about it..so please let me redeem my sin."(Kyle)
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Dad bowed to me...he was really sorry for me..for many times he had chance to kill me but he always hesitated and wants me to be live...his tears was real..that's why i..
"Dad,your way of redeeming sin was wrong."(Forvish)
"I would do anything!!as long it wasn't Mom's life or anything!!just please let me do it..after all i was failed as parent!"(Kyle)
There was no need for us to chain with hartred anymore...beside the memories of my kind childhood were real...it was because of me.not them.but they still called me their son not a monster.that's why i..
"Please with mom become my parents again and lived with me until the end of your life..that was the only way."(Forvish)
instead dying for it..you should redeem this way..but dad only shocked at my words..
"What?why you forgive us for the things we done to you."(Kyle)
"Who cares about it?So dad please be my parents once again."(Forvish)
"....but your childhood was destroyed because us!!"(Kyle)
Maybe my childhood wasn't like others but..
"I didn't care about the past,instead i should thanks them.thanks to them i learned if someone truly care me or not.Dad and mom you were included..even i was monster you still shed your tears for me unlike others..it was already proof you care for me."(Forvish)
Unlike heroes and the rest of girls..they only look away but they didn't even shed tears nor try to protect me...only sit and watch me dying..if there was a single genuine tear...i would forgive them.but they didn't...that's why they were not worth of my trust.they would only use me again and again.
"Sorry,i am sorry Forvish!!I I I I..."(Dad)
Dad was crying bitterly...
"...Dad..its okay....from now on please believe in me.we are family.."(Forvish)
Maybe some people wouldn't forgive them,but i would...because hatred would only binding people down..beside they were only family that tied by blood no one could replace them.
"Forvish....why you forgive us.."(Claire)
mom come outs from nearby trees..
"Mom....it was okay..that's why mom please let me hug you.."(Forvish)
Maybe i was childish..but i already longing for her..my real moms.Mom immediately hugs me while crying...so this was the warm of family...
after moms finished crying we immediately went back home....in front of the door suddenly i feel chill in my spine....
"What;s wrong ?Do you had a cold?"(Mom)
"no,i don't know but i feel chill on my spine."(Forvish)
Dad thought for a moment...then ..as his eyes rolled out..
"OH MY GOD!!!Forvish don't open the door!!"(Dad)
Hmm what?as i stopped immediately opened ,it was luna the one who opened the door.
"So finally you return huh...you damn playboy.."(Luna)
......?
"DAD!!! RUN!!!"(Lune,Noir)
Eh? From what?Suddenly i saw chainsaw at her hand....
"ehm?Were you planning to cut some woods?"(Forvish)
She shake her head while smiling,but i could see hannya mask behind her..as i step back slowly..
"Then do you plan to cut some grass?"(Forvish)
She shake her head again..don't tell me it was really me?
"Don't worry i would only cut the little 'tree' of yours.."(Luna)
......................She immediately turned on the chainsaw..
"WAIT WAIT!!!DIdn't you want his child!?If you cut that thing than there was no way you could had child!!!"(Dad)
"Dad,was right...but it was better than let him had 1000 thousand wife!!"(Luna)
So you were yandere!?Oh my god!!
"....Don't worry as long you ended as main wife it would be fine."(Mom)
"No Way!!IT wasn't his first time anymore!!!there was no way i could end up as his main wife after all that!!"(Luna)
"Don't worry,from his smell i know..that he didn't do any of that yet!trust me!!!His scent was the same as kyle!!"(Mom)
Immediately i and dad took step back.both of them similar in a way.
"Oh,Mom did you know?That dad go to carbaret.2 weeks ago.. ?"(Luna)
must because Leon.....dad must be meet leon..i mean dad truly afraid of mom..
"Luna would you help me?"(Mom)
....mom was pissed off too..shi t...
"Forvish...."(Dad)
"Yeah,dad."(Forvish)
RUN!!!!!!!!!!
but in the end we are captured...just what would happen to us after this?
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