《Breaking Chains》Revised Prologue Part 3
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Prologue Part 3:
God of Bibles' Pov:
I was doing my normal activity of training and watching over the mortals who are part my religion when I sense a presence nearing my estate. I stop training and walk out my room in my estate and go outside. A man in white flies over to me and kneels on the ground. "My lord God of the Bible, the Titan Cronus has escaped from Tartarus with the help of Apophis. My master Zeus wants your lordship to come to Mount Olympus as soon as possible."
After hearing this news I immediately rushed to Mount Olympus knowing fully what harm Cronus and Apophis can do. When I arrived there I saw many other Gods with grim faces waiting.
Zeus notices me and his faces turns happy while he motions me towards a seat next to him. "Ah, my friend God of the Bible, sit down."
His face then turns grim and serious, "Hello everyone, thank you for coming today. I am pretty sure my messengers told you about what happened. I will tell you if they didn't, Cronus has escaped Tartarus with the help of Apophis. This by its self is already bad news, but they plan on awakening and using 666 to fight with the Apocalyptic Dragon. After destroying it, they want to absorb the Apocalyptic Dragons power to take control of the solar system."
Once I hear this news, my face turned bleak, knowing fully if 666 is awakened it can mean the destruction of the world, possibly the solar system. I have to warn the Apocalyptic Dragon; even though he is arrogant, he understands the threat of 666.
" So what do we know about their activities as of now." I ask.
"I discovered that evil gods banded together to create an association called the Dark Alliance. They plan to take control of this solar system and use the fear, pain and chaos of the mortals to increase their power. They want to use this power in galactic wars against other gods in other solar systems. I am pretty sure Cronus will join the Dark Alliance." replied the Sun God of Egyptian mythology, Ra, in a worried tone.
This causes nervousness in everyone present and plummets everyone's moods even further.
" Ya, I heard of the Dark Alliance as well. Don't worry I got some of my minions to monitor them and find out their plans so that we can prepare ahead to stop their plans." said the Egyptian Cat and Warfare God, Bastet.
When she said this, it lessened the heavy atmosphere a little and brought up everyone's mood.
" Make sure the spies are not seen as the evil Gods know you and will think your cats are spies." said Neptune, Roman God of freshwater and sea.
Bastet says " Don't worry, I didn't cats. I sent in some of believers. Where is Shiva?"
Zeus says " He is helping Yama as he created trouble for him again."
We all sigh at this as it always happens. (Shiva is the Hindu religions God of Destruction and Yama is a God of Death for many religions.)
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After everyone finished talking about information we have, we talked about what each god should do to stop them. I wanted to immediately start, so I tell Zeus to wrap up the meeting. " Ok guys, I think we understand what we must do. The God of the Bible will immediately warn the Apocalyptic Dragon and try to bring him over to our side. We will be called from now forth the Council of Salvation." (Author" Was tempted to call it Salvation Army, Hehe)
They all nod before going off into their own directions, starting on the tasks they were given. I go to the Bermuda Triangle were a titan of another solar system was sealed in, and also were the Apocalyptic Dragon likes to rest and stay. I arrived there in a few minutes. Shortly after arriving I spot the Apocalyptic Dragon and I go towards him. He was sleeping.
When I get near him, his eyes opened. " Who dares enter my domain!" He bellows as a mountain like pressure falls onto me.
Resisting the pressure as much as I can, I replied " It's me, the God of the Bible. I have come with some information which will interest you and also a preposition."
" Tell me weakling, don't waste my time" He says while resting his head again. The pressure disappears and I heave a sigh.
I land on the ground next to him and say " Cronus and the other evil Gods created an association called the Dark Alliance with the purpose of awakening 666 and stealing your power to destroying us. My came to ask whether you like to join the Council of Salvation."
" Me join you weaklings. Ha, there is more chance of an ant beating a human in a fight then that happening." he says.
I turn pale thinking of a way of convincing him without angering him. A idea pops into my head and I quickly say " You against 666 ,who is evenly matched against you, and other evil gods will surely lose. If you join us you can finally destroy 666 and become a living thing with no equal in this solar system."
He thinks for a few moments before saying " That is a interesting proposition, I but no. You guys won't be helping me, you will only get in my way. I can defeat 666 by myself."
My complexion turns even worse. That's when I remembered an event from long ago. "With your current power you can't defeat 666. That injury from long ago will hinder you."
He brings his head out in surprise, but he slowly turned angry and yelled "How do you know about it?"
A pressure falls on me, it was much stronger than the one from before. I quickly replied "I was there spectating the fight between you and the Sovereign. I can heal it, but you must join the Council of Salvation."
He once again becomes surprised. "How can you heal it?"
A orb appears in my hand, his eyes opened wide and his jaw dropped to the ground. He became speechless. After regaining his composure he says " Ok I will join your Council or whatever it is, but you have to promise to Void that you will give me that core of a immortal level Light Elemental."
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I say " I swear on Void that I will give the Apocalyptic Dragon the Core of a immortal level Light Elemental if he joins the Council of Salvation. If I don't give it to him, destroy my soul a thousand times."
After saying that he nods his head, I threw the core at him and sigh in relief of my plan working and say " Thank you!" before leaving to do other duties.
A few weeks later, I noticed suspicious activity from the Dark Alliance I didn't understand. I monitored the Dark Alliance and found nothing harmful being done so I started working on different activates. A few days later on the year 1313, 13th month, 13th day, 13th hour, 13th minute and finally the 13th second, the unluckiest day and time of the world, the Dark Alliance put a soul into a mortal. I noticed this abnormality and started to inspect the mortal trying to find out what was special about him. I found nothing special about him so I replayed the memory many times in my head. After a few times, I noticed he had a unique soul that absorbed all the energy in its vicinity before being put in the mortal. I thought that was weird since it's not impossible to find and not that useful for them. I observed the soul in more detail before finally finding its specialty. It was a soul created by a dimension keeper and had the choice of choosing it's karma path of good or bad. After choosing its path, it will send out energy ripples destroying the anyone of opposite karma path in the vicinity of a solar system to keep it safe. Though it won't destroy them if they are mortal. The soul will then change and experience growth, breaking out of its cocoon, revealing its true self and unlock its full potential, something 99% of souls don't have unlocked.
I then noticed a curse placed on the soul and I placed a blessing to counter-act it. Hopefully the soul will choose the path of good even with all the bad luck it will have as they curse was too strong to fully counter-act.
17 years later:
I observed the soul and found out its name, Kail Baker. Kail went down the good path like I wanted and even with all his bad luck, he never gave up. But today Cronus couldn't take all the good he was doing and killed him attempting to destroy his soul which I quickly and safely retrieved. I placed him in the void I created so that Cronus can't sense that he is still alive. I felt bad for him and gave him a chance at a new life, reincarnation. I explained his circumstances and chose a world for him by luck. I truly don't know if his luck is bad or good because of the world he got. It was the world my friend, a universe keeper, created as the strongest planet in his universe.
What shocked me the most was his soul's true form, a creature with the devour ability and affinity. I accidentally mumbled " Finally the first creature with the devour ability and affinity was born. The devour war might happen soon."Luckily judging by his appearance, and by reading his mind, I found out he didn't hear me.
I then thought back to his soul's true form. The almighty existence which owns the Xenotra (Void created the Xenotra), the place that contains the dimension, heaven plane and divine planes, (Author: Heaven plane and Divine planes are the levels after dimension. Heaven plane after dimension and Divine planes after Heaven.) said there will be few mighty creatures, all with different occupations ( gift, magic, qi, creature, etc) have one thing in common the devour ability. When all occupations have a person born with the devour ability, the devour wars will start. The people will fight till they devour all other devourers and take their ability becoming the strongest and reaching the level of creator of the Xenotra. Only one person with the devour ability can exist in that occupation. Only the person with the devour gift has to born, before the devour wars will start. After 20 years of last devourer is born, the Xenotra Keeper (calling the almighty existence that) will send a soul transmission to all the devourers telling them that the devour war will start and the rules of the war. Only the higher echelons of the Xenotra know about the devour war, I happened to stumble across the secret in a lucky encounter. This is was the process Void did to find the Xenotra Keeper, and which the Xenotra Keeper is doing now.
Another fact which surprised me was his talent. He had the most talent I ever seen before. I guessing it's because he is a devourer since he is the first devourer I ever seen. It could be considered his fortune and misfortune to be born in a major world like Magzeel, where you can practice all the occupations. After I calmed down from being surprised, I sent him to the world. I then contacted my friend saying "Ryo, I sent a person to your world Magzeel to be reincarnated. Be prepared to be shocked beyond words. The person I am sending over will shock the whole world and Xenotra."
Ryo replied " What is he, if he can do that.?"
I said " That's a surprise for you, but make sure he suffers hardships. If he lives a life with no hardships, he won't grow and waste his talent. Ryo don't kill his family though, he grew up with none so I want him to grow up with one now."
He replied saying " Ok, I will do as you say. I can't wait till the surprise you mention unfolds itself to me."
Author: The prologue is done. Kail's new life will start. Give tips, feedback and reviews. Hopefully the revisions are less confusing and adding more depth to the story. Keep reading the revisions because there will be some massive changes or information I will add in. Some of the chapter will be whole new ones as I want to talk more about his childhood (before becoming 6) and how he met his friends.
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