《Rise of Agze'sCanvas》Chapter 17: BATTLE!!!
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Excitement could be seen in Kalm's eye as it turns redder then usual, his mind was clear and most of all there was the absence fear. Unlikely how normal people would act in this situation, his was the opposite, the blood inside of him longs for battle as every inch of his body was prepping up for his first exchange with its foe.
Analyzing the beast...
Monster species: Forest charger
Evolution potential: low
STATUS PROFILE
strength:387
Vitality:301
agility:194
intelligence:29
Magical beast rank:E-
Monster tier:5th stage (mana condensation)
Elemental affinity:None
Skill: Headrush
Description: A large species of Boar found in mountainous and forested lands, known for their aggressiveness, it will charged at any target regardless. It is also mainly hunted for it's meat and hide which are known to be quite valuable.
Kalm: Nite, i wanna test out my strength against this opponent, so don't interfere unless it is necessary.
Nite: ''Shark... sha shar''(Ok.. but becareful)
It was moment later that the Forest charger broke free from the tree it was stuck in, swiftly it rotate its body around facing the duo only to find them there standing their ground and not running.
This causes the boar to become even more cautious as this was the first time that it's opponent had not run away after witnessing it's prowess.Proudly it swung it's tusk, brandishing its might as if to pacify the thought of those resisting against it.
However against all expectation, Kalm just stood there doing some a light warm up stretches right infront of the beast.
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This angered the beast as it rises up with his two front limb in the air and let out a mighty squeal before charging full force toward Kalm.
In front of the charging boar, Kalm did not attempt to dodge, only when the boar was about to crash into him did he make a last second sidestep toward the right side of the boar.
He then planted him left feet firmly into the ground before he lashed out a corkscrew with his right arm, putting all his bodyweight into the punch it slam into the rib of the still charging boar, Peng!!. The sound of hitting something metallic resounded clearly.
Unexpectedly Kalm took two step back as the recoil rebounded back onto his arm the boar however was most unfortunate as the punch causes a change in direction and it was sent charging toward a huge boulder.Unable to stop it's charge fully, it crashed into the rock with substantial force breaking one of it's tusk and leaving it dazed.
Kalm found out that the hide of the boar was actually unbelievably hard almost comparable to iron however so was his punches. After reaching the 1st stage of martial mana condensation, his body got stronger by a wide margin. This made his body three to four time stronger then an ordinary one, this was saying something as the 8 year old Kalm already have the strength to win against a normal 16 yr old male. And now he is four time more stronger.
Not wasting the opportunity he dash towards the dazed boar and with both his hand grabbed its side,''HAYAAA" he summon all the strength he could master from his small but well trained bodyframe and lifted up the huge body of the boar.
A loud ''Thump!!'' sounded as the boar was thrown on its side.Without leaving anytime for the boar to recover it's bearing, agonizing sound of squealing resonated throughout the forest as Kalm dished out a series of kicks and punches on the boar's belly.
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The assumption that the weakness was the belly worked out perfectly, the prideful charger from before has now been reduced to that being a pig for slaughter. Unable to stand up by itself using it's short limbs it could only watch as the assaulter one sidedly keep tormenting him.
Forest charger: Groin!!!!!! groiiii!!
Kalm:''This is easier then i thought, its about time to end this''
With his both his feet firmly placed on the ground, he let out a shout ''HAAAAAAAA'' as both his hand punched out simultaneously hitting the soft underbelly of the swine at exactly the same spot causing it;s entire body to shake before it eyes roll back white as it fainted in the mid of battle.
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