《Dungeon of Apples? (Completed)》Chapter 25. End.
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Author's Note - I fully know this is rushed because I am not blind. As I stated before. 'TEST DRIVE.' So please excuse my selfishness this Light Novel? I'll try to not be as selfish in the next one what I fully know how to do.
I am a beginner and don't know what the hell I can do and what the hell I can't do in Light Novels to make them pleasing to the readers. I promise that the next light novel I will do whatever I can to make pleasing. The next light novel comes out tomorrow so please give me names and such for characters! (Puts himself in dogeza to apologise for his insolence and also to apologise for the rushing and to ask for new names.)
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The Dungeon Kings dungeon. I'm finally here. And finally going to become the ruler of this world. I fall down infront of the entrance surprising everybody near me. I put down the girls. The dungeon kings dungeon actually has a really large town around it. This is in the demon lands is it not? Well no matter. I'll soon control everything.
Random Civilian: "It's a demon! Run!"
Guard: "How did it get past the barrier!"
I enter the dungeon ignoring the guards and civilians around me. I go down a path of stairs and notice a really long hallway...
I don't have time for this... I really don't... So I just hit the floor with my strength and make it collapse. I do this for 74 floors until I reach the 75'th. I need to do this quickly. I don't have much time. The maids and butlers could die at any second. The Dungeon King also might just barricade himself in a room what I can't enter if I take too long. I can't take those chances. I go into the boss room of floor 75. I want to see this infamous unbeatable boss myself. I enter and see a huge white minotaur with a huuuge axe. This is the thing what kept them from moving forward?
The boss runs towards me at full speed the moment I enter. I catch it by its horns and smash it into the ground. This thing is way bigger than me but it feels like I am throwing a feather around... A really really large feather. I snap off its horn and smash it into it skull. I start crushing floor after floor like this. I challenge the bosses only. All the bosses are weak... Was that dragon really that powerful? Did I only get by because I used my apples? I do not want to know what would've happened if I didn't use my apples... I shiver at the thought...
I reach floor 200 before I notice... There are no stairs down. Floor 200 is the end. A large door opens after I beat the boss. I walk in and see a huge titan sitting on a throne with a crown and the room has lots of pillars.
Titan: "I am the Dungeon King! Name yourself, dungeon!"
Quinn: "I am Quinn. Or by my dungeon name... Tinvarr."
Dungeon King: "Ah... That dungeon. I knew that you would be the one who would end me. But to come this soon? You really think you can beat me?"
Quinn: "I am certain. I must do this for Mayu. For the people who depend on me."
Dungeon King: "So you got familiar with humans?"
Quinn: "Yes. They crushed my core though.... Well no matter. I'll take full control of this world once I kill you."
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Dungeon King: "Hmm... And why do you think I haven't done that yet?"
Quinn: "I don't know... Why?"
Dungeon King: "I don't want to. The Gods will notice me. They will come and offer me godhood and such. Too much responsibility. If I just keep myself in this state I can gather mana and disperse it into the core of the world to make it stronger and live longer."
Quinn: "Well... I'll do that too after taking over the world."
Dungeon King: "Well the gods already notice your existence. Your horns tell all what I need to know. A troublesome entity in this world. The gods will either kill you or make you join their ranks to keep you on a leash, Quinn."
Quinn: "That is not what matters. As long as the women I care for get what they need... Then I am happy."
Dungeon King: "So you had a better love life than me huh? Well... We should get to fighting. I don't like talking much."
The huge titan gets off his throne and reveals... A really long beard and some ancient-looking armor. Also he picks up a really long sword what is just big enough for him.
Dungeon King: "Let us begin."
He charges at me while I charge at him.... It is like an Ant attacking an elephant. Let's see if this Ant can kill an Elephant. I jump up at his eyes and pull out an explosive apple. I throw it at his eyes like I did with the Dragon... But the apple explodes in thin air... I get attacked from behind... The king moved so fast I couldn't follow his movement. I take out a lot of apples and throw them in every way possible. Only five of them hit the King and begin eating him. But he is way more massive than the dragon. The entire room he is in is about 150 floors big. And 50 floors away from the dungeon itself. And 150 floors is about.... 500 kilometers? I didn't count.
He tries to get them off but they eat him faster.
Quinn: "You cannot get these apples off you."
Dungeon King: "So these apples actually did something? I always thought they were the most useless mob in the existence of the dimensions. If I knew they were this powerful I would've taken them myself."
I throw a magma one at his beard to burn it off. I just want to anger him so he makes foolish mistakes. And it really seems like he likes his beard. His beard is the most clean and most tidy part of his entire body. Most of the magma hits thin air but I notice that some of it got on his beard before he teleported. I grin and my masked self comes out. My speed, strength and thinking speed with reaction speed increases. It's time for a real fight.
I charge at him again while using small wind platforms to boost me. He slashes at me from below with his huge blade and I block it.
His blade snaps in half when it comes into contact with mine. The shockwave from the clash creates a huge earthquake. I luckily left the girls above ground.... This place is too dangerous because it seems on the verge of collapsing due to being unattended for too long.
Dungeon King: "Huh? Is that my lost sword? The sword inherited from Dungeon King to Dungeon King?"
Quinn: "Wait you lost the sword that dungeon kings inherit from each other?"
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Dungeon King: "Yeah... I fought the Demon Lord and it kind of flew away and I lost track of it."
I laugh at that remark and run up his sword and then hand. Even if he teleports I teleport with him now. I stab my sword into his arm and drag it along with me. Blood flies everywhere when I run up his arm. I reach his elbow by the time I get thrown off by his extensive amount of shaking. He teleports behind me and throws me into the ground. A sharp stone pierces my leg but I still get up. I can't give up yet. I jump towards him again and throw my combo. A normal apple with an explosive one right behind it. I also throw a ton of omniapples at him. Those seem to do the most damage. He notices the power in the omni apples and tries his best to dodge them but one of them hits his finger and blows three of his fingers and half of his hand clean off.
The elements are scary things... Especially if they are combined into one...
Dungeon King: "What are those things? They are immensly powerful."
Quinn: "Omniapples I call them."
Dungeon King: "Those things could scratch a god. Not hurt a god but scratch one. Even I can't hurt one probably."
We laugh a little and resume our battle. I throw as many omniapples as I possibly can. I use some nature magic to plant poisonous plants to the ground which pierce his leg when he steps on them. They actually work a lot. He sometimes screams in pain when one of them hits. He also got me a lot of times. My entire left arm is gone after one of his attacks. My left side of my head is basically skinned. My skin was torn off by the air pressure of his arm slashing my left arm off. My wings are completely useless right now... They are torn off. I lost track of their location a while ago.
Every time our hands hit each other a huge shockwave what ends up in an earthquake appears. I wonder what they are feeling up there... Snap out of it me! I need to focus! Oh... Too late... I see a huge hand approaching from my right side. I put my right leg infront to atleast minimize the damage.
With one hit my entire right leg is blown off but I wasn't hit luckily.
I throw an omni apple at his arm and blow it off. Now we both have lost atleast two limbs. His beard burnt off too.
Dungeon King: "You are persistant, kid. I'll give you that."
Quinn: "And you are one tough old man. A dragon died after taking one omni apple and about twenty explosive ones and three normal ones."
I notice that his left side of his chest is missing because of my apple. A dungeons secondary body is dead when it's core is dead or its mana pool cut off. I jump back in and throw an omni apple at his face and secretly one at his leg. He dodges the one I threw at his face but he doesn't notice the one I threw at his leg until it's too late. His left leg is no more. I take the chance to throw a lot of omni apples to blow him up. And that is what happened. He got completely obliterated by my omni apples... Now to find his core...
A huge core appears from the wall infront of the throne.
Dungeon King: "You beat me in combat so you won. Take my core as your prize. I've lived long enough anyways. Live long, kid."
I throw one of the bigger apples at his core to eat it. Once it's eaten I start to consume it.
I consume it for atleast two days and go through a process of making the mana completely mine and my body changing with it too for three days. I check his little treasury. He has all my damn core pieces! And I thought the adventurers had em! Well no matter... Atleast I got them back.
I consume them and put my core back together... Finally! I go back upground after I put my core in his cores place. I put a lot of my mana into it so it expands. I left Innver in charge of it. The girls are patiently waiting for me still. When I come up they all get up from the ground and jump towards me.
Mirikin: "You are back!!!"
Quinn: "Let us go back down."
I take their hands and jump down the 200 floors until we reach the bottom one. Upcourse I made sure they won't get hurt using my body as a cushion for the air speed and such.
Quinn: "Welcome to my new dungeon, girls."
I notice that Innver has made the bottom floor quite... Homey. It litteraly looks like a cottage. Thank you Innver!
Innver: "No problem. I'm surprised I can do this though."
Well... I did a little bit of this and that as my authority as Dungeon King. Well I just threw my mana around to change the laws of you, Innver. My mana pool is HUMONGOUS compared to before I fought the Dungeon King. Innver. Make a small room for me. I need to make Mayus body.
Innver: "Affirmative."
Mayu: "FInally! I haven't walked for such a long time!"
A small room with a stone table is made for me near the throne. I enter it and close the door behind me.
Innver. Make the girls cozy. I'll be in here for a while.
I take out a couple apples what still retain the materials of the Dryads body and the Dragons Body. I start trying to put the two together after taking apart and reconstructing the DNA of body bodies. I try to match them to eachother so the body won't... Break.
After one or two days of messing around I finally create the body. Now I just need Mayus soul to enter it. Innver... Do you know how?
Innver: "Well... Not really... But how about you try to do it like when you make a new apple? But this time focus on making Mayus soul enter the body?"
Well... Worth a shot. I focus on making Mayus soul go into the body and... It works. It actually works. I don't feel Mayus presence in my mind and the body is starting to wake up.
Mayu: "Did... It... Succeed?"
I hug the body the moment I heard that.
Quinn: "It did Mayu... It succeeded. It's time to show Mirikin and the others... Your body..."
I look at her body once again. It's like a mix of a dryads and a humanoid dragons. It has wings and claws. It has a human looking body with long hair. It's still small-chested though... Didn't have enough materials to go by. It has dragon-scaled twigs running through it.
She notices that I am looking at her and closes in... And kisses me. I blush a little and head out. What I see there is something else.
There are the four girls with one big woman... With a holy aura... Mayu comes too and notices the... Woman. She immediatly bows.
Mayu: "Goddess! It's you again!"
Goddess: "Mayu. It's fine. You don't need to bow."
She gets up.
Goddess: "Honestly Quinn... I'm surprised. I expected it to take twelve or so years to take over this world. You did it in eight. Well... Your legacy is over. But your sons legacy... Is far from over. Quinn. I have only one question for you."
Quinn: "What... Question?"
Goddess: "Do you want to help your future son?"
Quinn: "Who doesn't!?"
Goddess: "Even if it means giving half of your current mana pool to him?"
Quinn: "Yes! I want to help him! I want him to be powerful enough to protect people the moment he sees them in need!"
Goddess: "Well... I can only give your son power. I cannot guarantee what he will look like and what he will be like. There have been cases of the son being completely different from the parents."
Quinn: "But only one son?"
GOddess: "Indeed. Only one son. Only one descendant. Not like you need any more. You already know how to be immortal and how to make the other girls immortal too don't you?"
Quinn: "New bodies, old souls."
Goddess: "Correct."
Quinn: "Who is going to bear my son?"
She points at Kaylessa.
Quinn: "Kaylessa...?"
Goddess: "Yes. Your reproduction rate is very low but hers is high. That means she can have your child while the others cannot. Aphrodites didn't like you much... We gods talked about what you should be like and only me and a few other gods out of the hundreds who came took a liking to you. Your son however..."
Quinn: "You already talked about my son? But he isn't even born yet?"
Goddess: "We gods and goddesses can talk about something what will never be born for millions of years. We are gods and goddesses after all..."
Quinn: "True..."
Goddess: "Well I just came to tell you these things. I should get back now. You have your own problems to take care of don't you?"
Quinn: "That is true."
The goddess leaves.
Innver: "Quinn. I found the Maids and Butlers. They are on the continent of Euin. In keeps of castles."
Quinn: "Bring them here. You can do that right?"
Innver: "Well... I can set them to friendly. Also our area of control is currently three out of five continents. I am increasing it even more using your mana."
Quinn: "Ok. Good to know."
Kaylessa is blushing on the sofa and so are the others. I can understand it. Mirikin is furious though. And so is Mayu... Jenica and Kaylessa are just... Pure red. While Akuna is just pinkish. Well no matter...
I sit down and talk with them. I gain control of the world a few days later. I gain all the butlers and maids I know of back... Except Suzu. Suzus soul is somewhere else already. All the butlers and maids actually weren't harmed. They were just put into cells for supporting me.
I also made the leaders of the continents come to my place. It took them a year to get here though... In that year I solved all the problems in my dungeon. I also made all the dungeons listen to me and made them know of my new position as their leader. They actually didn't retaliate at all and just merged with my dungeon while still being their own entity. Funny how that works. When the leaders come here we discuss about politics and such. When I propose that we make one huge nation they call me out on non-sense. The only reason they came here is because they thought they are meeting the Dungeon King. When the Deani king told them I wasn't the real Dungeon King they got furious and called me a liar. Upcourse I shortly showed them that I am the dungeon king and they calmed down. We finally create one big nation what is made out of 6 leaders. Me as the Matriarch. The tip of the world. The kings retain their positions but they must listen to me. We also talk about the problems in the world. The talks go on for two weeks. We fix all the problems we could. I used a lot of my previous world knowledge to fix things.
The world is now under my complete control. I fixed the world...
In the one year the Kings were coming to my place I also made the child with Kaylessa. Well it's more like the Goddess forced us to. She put us in a room and didn't let us out until we did the act. Damn goddess... I wanted to take it slowly but she just forced us. I thought Goddesses weren't supposed to directly interfere! The Goddess offered me Godhood. I accepted. It was basically just all the gods coming together and meeting me and then they gave me some kind of holy aura and that was it... Just a glorified ceremony...
Now it is time to see how my Son does things. The Goddess said that he is completely different from me and has recieved a lot of blessings from gods. Mostly from gods of darkness and death for some reason... The gods of life decided to just look for now. I couldn't give my blessing to him because I am too weak...
At the end of the... Year..? I have one formal and four non-formal wives. I am younger than most of them though... I am just eight years old in my body but look like i am 18... Funny huh? Well now back to watching my son. We are watching my son from a huge screen in an arena-looking place. A lot of gods are coming or exiting to view this. My son is born in this world but the gods decided to send him into a really harsh world.
I don't know why but I couldn't say no. They threw him into a world that is about to destroy itself. It is way bigger than most of the worlds the gods say. Seems that world is really important to the gods.
This is the end of my legacy... And the start of my sons. Personally I say that my Son's legacy is way better than mine.
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Author - (Still in dogeza) Forgive meeee! I am such a selfish author who just wants to write things his own way! Forgive me! (Apologizing intensifies by him smashing the ground with his forehead)
Also... I need names for both my new Light Novel and the characters there... Pleaaase help this selfish insolent mess of an author out!
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