《Dungeon of Apples? (Completed)》Not a chapter. Authors ramblings.
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You can skip this if you want. This is just me (The Author) talking about some things.
First of all...
I won't re-write the earlier chapters.
They weren't meant to be rushed and bad but I'll keep em this way.
Under the pretext of: "Patience".
If you cannot wait out the bad part for the good part then you are not qualified to read the LN no?
Second.
I always listen to all of the suggestions you guys make. So make every suggestion what comes to mind here. Just post them here and i'll read through them. I've already taken some of your guys ideas and put them into the story if you have noticed.
Third.
If I have mistakes please point them out. I have no proofreader or anybody helping me with this LN so I am doing this all single-handedly while still being pestered by school and reality. So if you spot any mistakes just tell me and I'll fix them.
Fourth.
If you think there is no plot line... There will be. I already have a small idea in a notepad ready to be unleashed once our little hero takes over the world.
Patience is a Virtue.
Fifth.
I have taken into note that I mess up "what" and "that" a lot. Even if my English is good that doesn't mean I was born in England or the United States and that it is my first language. I actually come from a country what has very little similar words with english so I had to learn it myself. (I learned it before the school started teaching it infact.)
Sixth.
Bad habits are hard to fix aren't they? I have a bad habit of involving most of my ideas into my LN and shaping it in the way I want it. All of my LN's are just ideas I put together to make a story. So yeah... Sorry for the rushing parts of my LN.
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So overall...
I am truly sorry about my mistakes!
I try my best to fix them but.... I can't.
I am not a perfect being sadly... Even though I wish to grow into a writer what can please the majority of the people reading...
Also... If you post something about my mistakes what does not help me... Like: "The execution is horrible" then please tell me how! A human cannot see his mistakes until someone points them out and makes it clear. Even if you tell him where it is you must also tell him how to help fix it!
Sorry that this is not a real chapter. I just wanted to get these out of the way...
Oh and also! Should I include (ontop of every chapter) a little backstory about the world? Like small spots about the history of the world and the different elements and gods. Comment everything down below and I'll read them all until I am overflooding with unread messages.
I will continue making this because I know how to continue the story for atleast 20+ chapters.
- Sincerely,
The author,
Katsune.
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