《Dungeon of Apples? (Completed)》Chapter 4. Mayu and the dungeon.
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Oi Innver. Are you sure this will work?
Innver: "Yeah! Just make a new room and imagine a forest in it! The rooms should be tall enough to hold a small forest!"
Ok... I'll make the experiment room behind the boss room. I don't want people finding out that I am making new traps and such and experimenting back here so they can prepeare.
Innver: "Good idea."
I focus on a room behind the boss room and it appears. Then I focus on making a forest in it and a forest pops up!
Innver. This is fun!
Innver: "Yes it is Tinvarr! Now... Imagine apples ontop of the tree mixed in with your monster apples. Makes it trickier to know which is not and which is an apple. This experiment room can also be... A garden I guess."
Yeah it can.
I focus on making the monster apples next to regular normal edible ones. It works and it looks really amazing. A full-blown forest in a dungeon room.
Innver: "Perfect! Oh! I pick up something entering! Let's go see what party it is this time!"
Yes!!! I go and look and I see a party of 11. 10 men and 1 woman. Weird... Only one woman? Well they will all reach the boss room and die anyways.
--- Mayu's POV ---
Today is the day I go into the dungeon! Damn that dungeon. Oh... There is already a party of 10 going in! Perfect! I'll join them.
Mayu: "Heeey! I want to come with you guys!"
What? One of them smirked and seemed like he was checking out my body... Hahahah! They all fall prey to my good looks.
Adventurer: "Sure. Come with us. We are going to clear the dungeon today. We won't kill it though."
Mayu: "Oh good! I want to see what is going on here anyways."
Me and the adventurer company head down and then... Traps. 3 of us fall into the pitfall. The guys who rushed ahead afraid of more pitfalls fell prey to slides? Apples came from the walls and ate 3 others. Only me and 4 others are left. Beginners! Upcourse a dungeon has traps! Wait... It didn't have traps before... This dungeon grew... Well no matter.
We clear all the other rooms carefully and reach the boss room. We have discovered that the apples are weak towards magic through... A few tests... Damn idiot mages thinking that the apples are edible.
Well when we get in... We see the bos- Wha...?
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Adventurer: "Hahaha. We can kill this boss ourselves and sell this little treat. Those men were truly useless. They will never be slavers like us right? Hahahaha!"
The 2 mages that were with us kill the boss quite quick. Then they start to slowly take off my clothes... I can't do anything because they knocked me unconcious and cut me in a nerve so it's really painful and I can't move... They... Are going to... No no no!
--- Tinvarr and Innver's POV ---
Tch... They got past all our traps and defeated the boss... But why did they attack the female... WAIT... They are undressing her... They are those kinds of guys... Innver. Shall we kill them? Can I save the woman somehow though?
Innver: "You can control the bosses yourself. Should be easy to kill them with a surprise attack."
I'll overkill them. I summon 4 bosses right behind them making the men who were undressing scream like women. My bosses EAT them alive. Swallow them hole. Only one of them is remaining and that is the woman I ordered them to save. Oi Innver. Can I somehow talk to the woman?
Innver: "Indeed you can. But she must first go into your dungeon heart to hear you. Do you want to show your dungeon heart to a naked woman?"
Hahaha! I saved her so she would not kill me! She would've been sold as a slave right? This world has slavery right?
Innver: "Yeah. Slavers are quite common here. But slavers who first deflower their slaves... Are quite rare. Usually flowered slaves catch quite a high price. Well no matter. They are dead now aren't they?"
Yeah! By the way... Won't it be difficult for people to defeat 4 bosses?
Innver: "You can have them as experimental bosses for new classes. Take them into the dungeon heart until you trust her."
Ok Innver. Oh it seems she realized finally that I am NOT going to hurt her.
I'll invite her inside.
--- Mayu's POV ---
What... I was about to be deflowered and suddenly... 4 bosses killed them? Wait.. FOUR.... I am so dead... Why did I come here and think I could beat this dungeon without any proper magic... I only know a weak fireball spell what does almost no damage to apple mobs. Wait... They aren't attacking me? Instead they are showing me a way to... A wall? I see a faint crack in the wall.. Is this the dungeon heart? I walk up to the wall and it opens. I see a glowing body of a human... Is that the dungeon core... Wait... I am still undressed! How can I show myself to my hero? WAIT... A DUNGEON SAVED ME! WHAT THE HELL!?
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Tinvarr: "Woman. Don't leave. Well it does not matter if you are undressed. As you can see I am undressed aswell in my human core. I am the dungeon you humans attack. Who are you?"
Mayu: "I am Mayu... What is your name?"
Tinvarr: "My name is Tinvarr. That is what you gave me right? I don't have a real name so I just took the one you call me."
Mayu: "Oh... I thought all dungeons have a real name what they never show."
Tinvarr: "I don't know about any other dungeons. I am... Different from them. I have a human soul. Why are you not attacking me Mayu? Don't you want to get rid of a dungeon who only kills and doesn't give?"
Mayu: "You gave me my life... I would've been sold as a slave... A fate worse than death."
Tinvarr: "Hahaha! Indeed I did. I didn't want to see a woman be taken into slavery right infront of me. Men I don't care about. They are pathetic. They all die to my apples! Me and Innver laugh every day at them!"
Mayu: "Thank you Tinnvar... I will serve you forever as a thank you for saving me... But who is Innver?"
Tinvarr: "Oh yeah... You don't know about the inner voices. Too bad... Innver is there a way for you to talk to her?"
Suddenly a new voice popped into my head.
Innver: "Yes there is Tinvarr. I can speak to people in the dungeon heart like you. Hello Mayu the human. I am Innver this dungeons Inner Voice."
--- Tinvarr's POV 5 minutes after meeting Mayu ---
This girl is funny! And interesting! She really serves me! Hahaha!
Innver: "Yeah! Interesting! Well what shall we do now? I am quite confused about Human culture. Dungeons usually eat humans and don't get friendly with them."
Why not make a room for her? And let her get her clothing... It seems she is quite embarrased about talking to me naked.
Innver: "Hmm... You did experiment with trees. You can give her a proper life and survival neccesities. I guess you can keep her here if she wants."
I'll ask her.
Tinvarr: "Mayu! Do you want to stay here or go back?"
Mayu: "I would like to stay here! You are much nicer than every human! But how will I survive here?"
Tinvarr: "No matter! I can grow normal apples and food. Just not new mobs... But I also have trees. I guess I can make you a bed aswell with some wood and leaves. I don't know how comfy it will be though."
Mayu: "If it is softer than a pure wooden bed with only a pillow then it is fine! I am glad to be with you Tinvarr! Can you move your human form though? It looks really uncomfortable..."
Tinvarr: "Not yet. I need to infuse a lot of mana into it Innver says."
Mayu: "Oh..."
She looks dissapointed... I wonder why... Well no matter.
I focus on the wall next to the dungeon heart what is not connected to anything and make a new room. I also make a bed out of the 2 materials I can create: Wood and leaves.
I made a shell of a bed from wood and filled it up with leaves tightly put together. It looks like a real bed.
She immediatly jumps on it and looks really happy. I also make her a chair and a table with a wooden plate. It doesn't cost me much mana because I took out 1-2 trees from my forest to gather up some mana. I also tested something. It seems now that I think of her as a... Servant/ally... She isn't being attacked by any mob. Not even those I don't directly control and it seems she doesn't trigger any traps. She will be safe here for now... Unless humans come and take her away... That I will not allow! She is mine now. I saved her so she is mine. Oh... She fell asleep.
She looks really happy and comfy sleeping... I almost just want to cuddle next to her. I figured something else out too... It seems I can talk to her freely from anywhere in the dungeon when she thinks of me as an ally and she thinks of me as one. Or i think of her as a servant and she thinks I am her master. Now that I look at her closely... She is cute... Really cute. Well no matter. I will consume the mana I got from the 10 idiots who came in with Mayu.
I start consuming the mana while looking over at my mobs who are respawning and then go back to looking at Mayu when she sleeps. I began saving up mana to move my human core around like a real body...
I want to move it around already... I want to feel like a human again.
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