《Righteous Bestowal: Emperor of All》4.Transition (Edited)
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After Elden’s body disappeared, his soul traveled through dimension, his body was instantly discarded, because the gods that threw Fenrir didn’t take any chances, the dimensions were too far apart, because Elden’s power was at this moment unstable, his consciousness entered a deep slumber.
Within Eldens body two powers fought for supremacy, his Devouring power was engaged in an intense struggle with Fenrir Origin power, yet Elden’s power had the upper hand, if this continued on, forget about the travel Elden’s soul will be complete shattered.
“Mmmm, just like this one tough, his body is far more special than he said, once there he must unravel its secrets” Fenrir voice resounded within Elden’s soul.
“But at this pace my power won’t last, seems like there is gonna be a change of plans, but if this one does it, this one probably won’t be able to follow him”
Fenrir was thinking of taking Elden’s soul to his world, giving him some of his memories and letting his consciousness sleep in his soul, so maybe in the future Elden will awaken him and help him reconstruct his body, but it seems because of Elden’s power the situation won’t go as predicted.
“Mmmm, well, seems like this one will have to trust him”
His voice seemed become, weaker and weaker with the pass of time.
Suddenly a massive power exploded out, a silver radiance wrapped the soul, pushing Elden’s soul inside a golden orb, after the soul was in the golden orb begun splitting.
Keh, what’s there to doubt, this one chose him himself, and he will surpass all its peers.
Fenrir proud voice resounded silver bulb, as the golden orb finished splitting, a part of it joined Fenrir’s power, stabilizing the soul, this was Fenrir’s soul essence, different from his powers of origin and creation, this was something close to a legacy, in the future Elden’s power will have a traces of Fenrir essence, the other part hid inside Elden’s soul, where it waited for its turn to shine.
While this took place, Fenrir’s memories begun to merge with Elden’s consciousness, he saw Fenrir’s world, his life and fights.
Born from the love of a Seraphim, servant of Igis, and the daughter of a Demon Beast tribe chief, because the tribe was of mixed races, their union was not unaccepted, but because their special elements, they never thought, they could actually give birth to a life, Fenrir mother was a white wolf type demon beast that could take human form, when Fenrir was born, they discovered that although his body was of a demon beast, he didn’t have the light magic weakness that affected all beings with demon blood, this caused his Grandfather to be extremely excited, after all they were a tribe of warriors.
When he was two years old his father was killed during a battle, as Fenrir was born during chaotic times this wasn’t rare, when he was ten his tribe was assaulted by enemy forces that could not accept his kind, his mother died in order to give him a chance to escape, that night Fenrir swore vengeance, after his tribe massacre, he went into one of the most deadly forest to train, at the age of seventeen after living seven years in solitude, he reached the Core Formation realm awakening into High Demon White Wolf, leaving the forest he traveled around the continent in order to look for the killers, raising his strength along the way, after a long time he was finally able to obtain revenge for his mother, yet he found out that this was just a tiny part of a faction, a faction created by the remnants of the gods that once invade the plane.
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After knowing this he understood that although his power was big, it was not enough, so he joined the Beast faction on war, at difference of the humans and demons, the beast didn’t have that much discrimination, most of it because in the end they we beasts, and thought strength as law.
With the pass of the time his talent started to show and his importance grew within the force, once he reached the mana seed realm, he became a Silver Demon Wolf, with this power up the force prepared, to attack a big enemy faction, because of his advantage of not being affected by light magic, he was treated with even more importance, as the time flew by, Fenrir was close to reach the peak of the mana seed realm, when a notice came by, they found out the remnants of the god faction that killed his father, not only that but the god was still alive but in a weakened state, Fenrir used his influence to mobilize forces with the permission of the faction, and attacked this god, even though the god was weakened he was still strong, thought he never tough he would meet his match, not by something but rather someone, Fenrir,
Because of his advantage of not being extremely hurt to light, he was able to fight the god, but his power was on a different level after all, and Fenrir was still receiving damage, his battle with god lasted three days and nights, until Fenrir was finally able to achieve victory by a small margin, extracting his god core, he returned to the base where after healing his injuries, he started to absorb the core, he entered an intense struggle because after all his body was not of a fairy, yet with his perseverance he was able to unite his power ascending into a Heavenly Demon Wolf, becoming the first one of his kind and the first Ascender.
That day the sky changed in seven colors, everyone knew a God was born, when this happen the heavens split, and three men could be seen on top of the sky, surrounded by what you could think as their servants, taking Fenrir away with them.
After ascending his life was practically the same, battle after battle, his fangs killed and killed, gods fell under his might, in the end the enemy forces started calling him as FENRIR THE FANGS THAT MURDER GODS, THE DESTROYER, they plotted against him more times that you could count, in the end after ten thousand years, they finally succeeded, with the help of a Primordial god, they banned him from the dimension into another one, where he was left to die and rot, yet Fenrir didn’t stay down, he tried many times to get back, making the other gods power put a barrier that didn’t let him pass, throwing him again and again into others dimensions, in the end he ended in Elden’s world, where his power could not recover, hurt and weak, until he meet Elden, he had already been there for over a thousand years.
As they memories finished, Elden consciousness started to come back, soon he was able to see where he was, he was currently in a long white tunnel, filled with lights of different colors that moved past Elden, fascinated by the sight, Elden focused into a faraway light that was getting closer to where his consciousness was, no it was not the light that was moving, it was Elden, he was the one moving at high speeds, soon when it was few meters from his location, he was able to see inside the light, many planets, sun and stars, It was only a second but he saw it all.
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What was that? Thought Elden, but before he could try again a voice resounded within his mind, Fenrir’s voice.
Ohhh, seems like you have woken up. (Fenrir)
Oh, yeah, some memories started to come to my mind. (Elden)
Of course, it was this one memories, yet this one is surprised this one thought it will take you some more time. (Fenrir)
Now that your situation is stabilized, and we are getting closer to our destination, this one must ask you.
Elden, do you trust this one?
Huh? (Elden)
Elden was prepared to answer right away, but hearing the tone of the question, he was taken aback; Fenrir’s tone was one of complete seriousness, compared to his usual fun personality, even though he couldn’t see him Elden could feel a penetrating gaze, this shock was only momentary because Elden immediately answered.
I do
Then, let this one take full control, Fenrir said.
Elden was shocked, taking full control meant losing the position as master of consciousness, meaning that when Elden gets a body on Fenrir’s world he won’t control it, and with Fenrir power it would not be hard to prevent Elden from taking the position back.
But even like that Elden still accepted, you could call it stupidity, but for some reason he trusted that Fenrir won’t do that, after all he already saved him once and now was giving him a chance.
He gave control to Fenrir.
HAHAHAHA, you did not even doubt this one, seems like this one made a good choice.
Listen to this one Elden.
This is not but a silver of my consciousness, before I thought, I could see your journey, yet now that won’t be possible.
Hearing his word, Elden felt his ethereal eyes become moist, he asked.
WHY?
Its fine child, don’t be sad, a man should not cry that easy. (Fenrir)
WHO’S CRYING?
Hahaha, let tell you something, the power inside your body, is more powerful than I tough, your constitution is called demise, It means disapprove creation, and it has a complete elemental advantage that is darkness, you absorb energy to create power, while in this one case, this one powers relies on creation, uses its energy to give birth to power.
You see complete opposites, yet your power still has the upper hand against this one, because this one’s body doesn’t have a complete elemental advantage.
So in order to stabilize your power, this one fused its own essence, making it part of your power, but that’s not enough if we go like this, the moment we recreate your body, the demise constitution will once more have upper hand, and will once more clash against my power, in result your new body will explode.
A little scared Elden asked. What should we do?
Kekeke, its fine this one already planned it all, we’ll take a complete light elemental advantage body, fusing it with my power and essence it will balance the body, and you will truly wield both powers.
Wow, that is awesome!! Said Elden excited, yet after a bit, Elden calmed himself and asked.
And where will we find one? They don’t grow in trees right?
Pffffft….
That’s why this one needed control, this one will hide its consciousness inside your soul, once we are close to the barrier that prevents me from entering this one will explode all its power.
Those old bastards will surely feel it and come, that’s where we will take it, during my last try this one hurt an idiot, really bad, it’s been just a thousand years, so he must not be completed recovered, once I kill him, I will take his body essence and use his god core as energy to create the body, we are gonna need a lot of power to do this, and his power will do just fine, this way the old rats won’t know you, they would think I took a body, just to come back and die, Fenrir explained.
Die? You will die? Elden asked.
Feeling his preoccupied tone, Fenrir answered
Yes child, this one will die.
Before Elden could complain a voice filled with dignity sounded.
DO NOT PITY THIS ONE!! A DEATH IN A BATTLE IS THE MOST HONORABLE WAY TO DIE FOR A WARRIOR, DO YOU KNOW THE HUMILIATION THIS ONE FELT WHEN HE WAS LEFT TO ROOT IN ANOTHER WORLD.
SO DON’T PITY ME CHILD, THIS ONE IS THE EMPEROR OF BEASTS, THE FANGS OF DESTRUCTION, AND IN THE END, A WARRIOR, BORN AS ONE AND IT WILL DIE AS ONE!!
Feeling his resolution, Elden nodded and stay silent.
We are already there! Fenrir said as he hid his consciousness on Elden soul.
Looking ahead Elden could see a big solar system, surrounded by a gold barrier filled with complex symbols, the moment his soul passed the barrier without problems, Elden could saw a few lights coming to where he was.
At this moment Fenrir’s voice sounded again on his consciousness.
Engrave this one last battle in your head young one, and remember this one words.
YOU DON'T GET TO CHOOSE HOW YOU'RE GOING TO DIE!
BUT ONLY YOU CAN CHOOSE HOW TO LIVE!
LIVE WITH DIGNITY!
DON’T LET ANYTHING STOP YOU!
As the words resounded on his head, power erupted from the soul, in an instant the power became a silver light that took the form of a winged wolf, the wolf body moved toward the lights.
Hey guys here is fourth edited chapter, like always comments always welcome, suggestions too, try to keep it nice. Credo out XD
Comment what you feel of the new edition
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