Kieran's Point Of View

"temporal Shift" I said after charging at John, the space around us shattered and we were surrounded by pure nothingness, "Welcome to the darkest corner of time. I hope you enjoy your stay, it takes a quick hundred billion years to end, what is that to an immortal?" I asked with a grin as the copy cat tried to attack me. there is no quick way out of this place, I avoid all of Johns attacks and I counter with ease, he is trying to hit me like a wild animal, the fight was my win as soon as I came here, as only an anomaly can survive this place. after John attacking me for around a century he looked tired, after 5 centuries he was unable to move. a creature of the blue mist is unstable, with time they will die. even with my power. I only had to wait the thing out, of course I spent most the time kicking the shit out of it but that was not important, John was now dead and I had a lot of time to kill. I sat back on the nothingness floor? I looked up to the nothingness above. it was a strange feeling. all I could do was think, and my mind wandered. what was I still doing alive? why the hell couldn't I die? will I ever be allowed to die? all questions I knew the answer to. yet questions I hated all the same. born an immortal, die an immortal? to confusing.

"your back already?" I said as I got up and looked at the greedy John and I laughed slightly, he made it far for an embodiment of greed. "what does it take to kill you anyway?" asked and to my surprise I got an answer.

"the end of you" John said and he charged at me. oh. he answered it for me. I killed myself and he sure enough died. he was then just a few balls of green energy, moved around like a plasma. ha, don't take me for a fool. wait... this is the first floor and I just made it so I cant help on any of the harder floors... ok maybe take me as a fool with a pinch of salt. I waited around a bit more and finally exited the rift in time. I dashed out of the room as my protection burst the second I entered the rift in time.

"and with that I you damn bastard I win" I said readjusting to my normal personality, "sorry I spend a little longer then a day in that blue orb" I said to Zeo before running back to the academy. I took my usual sleeping position and fell asleep. I looked back and Zeo was finishing it off for me, the rest of the floors did not have a copy cat ability and thus were only as weak as John's sin was. I then realised just as they reached the sin of lust it would be harder as he is one of four people I know that have a Harem. surprisingly Zeo still one shot John, being an invincible super computer you can kinda guess. but then the path ahead to the next room revealed a monstrous aura I could feel from here. the Mana felt endless and I saw a explosion of fire in the distance that I didn't even need super vision for. I have seen that move used before, that is... when did John learn the strongest fire move around, and when did he get such a laughable pink frilly form that made him look like a girl?

John's Point Of View

[Blue Mist Resistance advanced has reached level 99 and has evolved into Greater Blue Mist Resistance]

I could suddenly see, I was looking at all the people in front of me, most scary thing was my title was no longer the MMO gamer. which made me able to share my ability it was now the RPG gamer. looking at the crater I was in I think my quest messed up.... why am I wearing such girly clothes... no, why did I activate this form?

KILL, MURDER, DESTROY, BREAK, SHATTER, END, KILL, MURDER

what? why am I attacking the ground? why am I just punching anything that moves? wait, I sense Kate and a few others near by, I also see an ungodly powerful monster protecting them so it should be aright.

"Get Back!!! he has lost control and looks go have an unending amount of Mana, run for your lives while I handle him" a small girl said and suddenly I felt a punch to my face? wrong, she punched my face but I did not even flinch, I could feel the hit but my HP recovered thanks to my healing magic, against my will I started hunting down my friends.

KILL!!!

with that I lost my sense of control and went on a rampage, I did nothing to this small girl I was attacking but she did nothing to me. this fight was getting us nowhere. when will this end?

[Blue Mist Control: through being exposed to Primal Mana for an extended period of time you can now control it slightly.]

I put all my effort in trying to exit the form that must not be entered to save dignity. I put all my might into it but nothing, I guess it does say slightly, I work on giving the mysterious person I am fighting as many openings as I could.

Kieran's Point Of View

I arrive back at the scene to find John fighting like a drunk and Zeo doing no damage... not what I expected but I noticed John was building a resistance, I also noticed he had a lot of pent up aggression, I had assumed the princess Isabel had fixed that a while ago. must be something else then. the aggression of his god/goddess that literally lets him have his body and mind? most likely. I may just take him on myself... wait, nope, I am not fighting anything that pink and frilly, that would just make me look bad.

"Zeo. Just hold out a little longer" I said and Zeo continued fighting. I just sat back and enjoyed the huge nuclear fire works. those damn monsters...

Zeo's Point Of View

so we are the monsters? SAYS THE IMMORTAL MONSTER? urg, sometimes he gets on my nerves, but he is right, John is regaining himself. It has been a while since I actually moved and all his punches and kicks are missing. I also note that his powerful form is becoming unstable. I using my power try and break him out of it, I do this with a huge laser cannon. he avoid the attack but by opening portal I put him back in front of the attack and his form is broken. I then see he flows a strange energy my data says is Chakra, before he does anything I break him down to 1 HP and he falls to the ground. that was the second hardest fight I have ever fought, the hardest was Kieran.

"so now you have done that, lets go, I am not waiting all day" Kieran said and I did so immediately.I have learned not to question his serious mode. John was unconscious but some stable Blue Mist was inside him, he could control it... he will become very powerful once Fate allows it. he may even be able to fight the gods themselves...

"ZEO. I wont wait all day" Kieran said prompting me to move faster. he is normally a bit touchy after using his Temporal Shift. *Sigh* I just wish he was more approachable and talkative. but he only has 2 objectives in life, his own death and fighting strong opponents...

"Kate. get over here" I said while handing John over to someone who would like to carry him. I had to fight him in his lust chamber, that should have been Kate's job. I felt strange in that room even with my immunity to blue mist.

"if that is all I shall be leaving" I said as I faded away......

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sorry this chapter was VERY late, I only recently got our of hospital and the chapters I had wrote were lost so I had a lot of writing to catch up on.

I am also going to be releasing a new fiction. it will be a bit more detailed and will have some idea of what a plot is, it will be based on the character Kieran The Immortal from this fiction and will be heavily story driven, if you don't want spoilers just forget any chapters that contain Kieran :D chapter releases may slow depending on my limited release schedule.

Chapter 70 - Primal Mana

John starts to control Primal Mana and learns its secrets. however he also learns a few other secrets along the way.