《The Gods Summons》The Ceremony
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Hello there , it's my first fan fiction there and i'm trying to learn so critisisme are welcome .
As you can already see english it's not my main language . So expect a lot of mistake , a proof reader will be great .
Just edited for a better version thanks to my PR : tony
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Unknown : (sigh)
I sighed again for the Nth time today , yep so many times that I actually lost count .
I'm currently at the Dolby theatre, where they are holding and giving the Academy Award (Oscar) to the winners of the respective categories.
I'm still wondering why I'm here , in the middle of a crowd of people which is composed of celebrities and their kids.
Unknown : "Hey fatty stop spacing out , raaah. Why the hell did mom tell me to take you with us."
Hearing these hurtful words from a familiar voice , which belonged to my sister Shella, I turned around to face her. Well I must say that she wasn't exactly lying , I'm Mark Sigfrid , 183cm (6ft) tall with 100kg’s (220 lbs) of fat with black hair and eyes like the majority of Asian people. You know if I really wanted to lose some weight I probably could have done it, but I'm just too lazy for that.
Yeah, that Bi..... lovely woman wanted me to go out of the house, where I spent all my time reading , playing and doing some man things . She even threatened me to break my computer . And she said it was for socialization , to see the outside world , I mean it's not like that I never got out it's just not often . I was never good with people , Mom says that my way of talking is too direct , I'm too shy with girls to get a girlfriend and I can't even make a decent joke .
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Following after my sister Shella , who’s 178cm (5ft10) tall and had long blonde hair with a pair of blue eyes , a beautiful pale skin ,with a face that will make you think that she's an angel which she isn't and has what we call an hourglass body , she was wearing a long black dress and a pair of high heels with one leg uncovered and showing some of her cleavage. She was an actress , a rising star as people would call it .
And now the question that everyone is dying to know , which one of us is adopted ? It's me .
I was adopted when I was 2 years old, as my biological parents died after a plane crash , Maria my step-mother was a close friend of them and was taking care of me when it happened , so she kindly and lovelily adopted me. She loved me and cared for me like I was her own flesh and blood, her son. Well mom is the only person I get along with , she always supported me no matter what decisions I made , like when I dropped high school because of all the bullies due to me being overweight and shy , let's just say she's the only reason I'm living right now.
Me and Shella were very close back when we were kids then puberty came. Now I'm 19 and she’s 20 , most of the time she's mocking me and I find myself ignoring her.
After a short walk we finally reached the main hall where the show is being held at, we were sitting at one of the back tables so nobody would notice us .
Shella : "Stay right here and don't move , I'm going to go get James."
James Blake was Shella’s boyfriend he's the typical tall, handsome , blond guy , an actor too . I saw some of his movies and.... he's bad , I mean REALLY BAD , this guy is not ready to receive any kind of award .
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James : Hey fatty how are you doing ? You know I always wanted to ask , how can you reach your dick with that much meat in your stomach ? hahahaha
A shitty joke coming from a shitty actor. I was tempted to reply and burn his ass but then I will have to go back home in a taxi and I currently don't have any money on me. So it’s better to keep my mouth shut and play mute.
After 20 minutes of shit talk from the shitty boyfriend , the ceremony was finally about to start. Then a shining light appeared in the middle of the stage , a man was standing in front of the microphone , short haired with a handsome face smiling with his lady-killer smile , we could hear some people gasp , he had a golden coat and pants with black shirt and boots that the likes of was never seen before , but the most disturbing thing was that he had purple eyes which were watching us like he could pierce and see the deepest part of our souls.
Unknown : "Hello everybody! I'm Loki !"
He was still smiling while saying that , what the hell is this ? Are they doing something new this year ?
Loki : "The Gods have spoken ! You all have been chosen to be summoned by the Gods !"
Lifting his hands to the air , a blinding light surrounded all the people in the hall . I got the feeling of being sucked through the light and slowly my conscious faded away .
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