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So everyone, thank you for all the support but I think the current version of alot of the systems I was using are flawed and I'll be rewriting the current story so that it will be easier to make future chapters. I would like to ask if people think I should finish this last chapter for the current version so that you guys can see the issues the current system has or if I should cold turkey this whole thing and just start writing the new version?
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