《The Human Soul》Chapter 4: Setbacks
Advertisement
In one small corner of Hell. In an area designated for new entrants. The figure of a clearly over-weight, young black man can be seen leaning against the wall. The man was bleeding out with lasers piercing his body, slowly burning his flesh into nothing but ash.
Thabo: “Fuck…FUCK!! THIS IS SHIT!! Damn I hate this place!”.
All the work I put in is all gone now, and I mean ALL. This shit isn’t even funny; I can’t remember a thing. All those things I learnt are all gone now. I mean I remember learning all that I remember being in the damn lecture listening to everything paying close attention, but I can’t pinpoint anything specific. All the actual knowledge is gone. Plus, as a bonus I’m a fat fuck now.
Everything’s just been reset to the same as before, no actually much worst, I got no suit now. Yeah just picture this fat, black ass bleeding out here ‘Butt ass naked’. Shit even I’m disgusted. Know what that means? That now I’m hungry, constipated, cold, oddly sweaty, exhausted, like shit can I sleep forever now please, but this intense pain is keeping me awake. Yeah I know “continue running” but do you not see that that’s impossible now.
Man I’m sure this was the plan “Congratulations!” my ass this is where the real Hell starts. I’d bet money that they gave me the suit to help speed up my awakening and now they don’t give two shits bout what happens to me. The trials are going horribly. Everything I do feels like an uphill, no, vertical struggle. I’m still not allowed to sleep nor am I given any food, water or toilets and sanitary stuff. Funny how you don’t know what you got till it’s stolen from you huh?
Advertisement
Oh looks like I’m losing consciousness, thank goodness I can sleep now. If it’s going to be like this better to just kill myself quickly to get some sleep. Well, yeah, that’s all folks, thanks for watching but the shows over now, goodnight. *Thabo loses consciousness and eventually dies of blood loss*
Huh what’s this? I’m alive? My body’s healed up, so they saved me again? What the hell do you even want from me!? Oh no, on the wall, there’s a new message. So what is it now.
No peace in death
In the event that you should die or be crippled beyond any possible normal functioning, the auto-revival program will activate and return you to the beginning of your set of trials. However, a time limit has been set for you to break the next human limiter. Time is unknown. If in that time you have not completed the trial, you will be liable for all energy consume during your testing period and expenses for your trials and be demoted to a ‘resource citizen’. Good luck and please try again! Never give up humans!
OK wow that’s petty vicious, even for Hell. Like I can tell they don’t really care about telling me my sins or even looking at me for that matter but that’s just a little too deep for me to process right now. I’m guessing a ‘resource citizen’ is, as the name suggests, someone used as a natural resource in Hell. Like the ‘bottom of the pyramid’ type guys whose souls are used to generate magic energy for the whole of Hell. Wow they didn’t even try and hide it huh? Guess that explains where they’re getting the power to do all of this with no-one in sight.
This is a problem. Clearly they’ve forced some sort of unrealistic spartanian training on me as a type of loan. I’m guessing if I don’t pay up by passing they’ll just happily strap me into some human Power Station for the rest of my ‘who knows how long’ life. At this point I can be pretty sure that they’re serious. So no doubt it’s only a matter of time till I don’t even have the freedom to do what I want with my own soul, WOW who would’ve thought I’ve been enjoying Hell’s honeymoon period, like aint this supposed to be the best time of my new life down here? Like I thought this is still too deep.
Advertisement
I have only one thing going for me right now, understanding. Doesn’t sound like much but the fact that they would invest all this power to trap me must mean magic is a huge thing, and that there are still some sort of rules even here (twisted as they may be). So fuck taking all these tests the normal way. I know what’s important now and that’s magic. That’s all I’m going to be focused on for now.
Advertisement
- In Serial56 Chapters
Loiterous
The rewrite of a previously posted Loiterous with much more detail and much less wish-fulfillment.A shady young businessman, Jeremy Grand, decides to play the latest Virtual Reality MMO - Loiterous. Watch as he advances in the game and tries to keep both worlds and his often conflicting identities apart.You can find the older version of the chapters on my blog below.https://loiterous.wordpress.com/ Currently on HIATUS.
8 175 - In Serial25 Chapters
Just Because Goblins are Level 1 Mobs, Doesn’t Mean I Can’t Explore the World!
Fiffil, a young goblin girl in a world that runs on rules like that of a game, just wants to be free to explore the surface world. But, as a low level mob, she’d be killed the instant she stepped foot outside of the safety of the village. When a being from a higher plane offers her the power she needs, she takes it without question. Is he a God, a Devil, or something else? Unchained from her fate, what will happen to Fiffil the Goblin, and what role does she play in her otherworldly patron’s mysterious game? Cancelled/Hiatus unless I can somehow figure out how to fix the corner I wrote myself into.
8 131 - In Serial10 Chapters
A mean Demon Queen Kidnapped me!
“Should I buy it?” a question that every single one of us made at some point in our lives. Flint stumbled upon this dilemma as he watched the trailer for The Light Hero: A single player RPG experience. “Tsk, screw it!” He went ahead and bought it! But it was to be expected, RPGs were one of his many passions after all. There was no room for any regrets, game reviews spoke positively of the game. Besides... The price tag wasn't that high, this was definitively a good buy! I mean... What could go wrong... Even if the game turns out to be bad, it's not like a monster will come out of the screen and kidnap him, right?
8 263 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Martial Magician
*Spoilers for Chapter 1* Wyatt loves everything magic. He's constantly reading light novels set in the magic/fantasy setting; he can't get enough of them. He then finds himself in another world- maybe he'll finally be able to use magic! Unfortunately, that isn't the genre of this novel... [This novel is being published simultaneously on Royal Road and Wattpad]
8 89 - In Serial195 Chapters
[Cryoverse] The Last Precursor
One hundred million years ago, an unknown cataclysm rendered humanity extinct. After conquering seven galaxies and becoming a super-civilization, terrankind vanished from the cosmos. Time passed. Their animal descendants (Cats, dogs, and crocodiles, among others) all evolved and Uplifted themselves to become the new overlords of the Milky Way. But the newly Uplifted were not ignorant of the past. How could they be? Countless records lay scattered among the stars of the ancient Precursor civilization which came before them. Their ancient facilities and installations dotted countless worlds. Their superweapons fell into the hands of the Uplifted, and countless wars followed. Once the Uplifted established their empires, a tenuous peace followed. Finally, it seemed as if the old wounds had begun to heal, leaving only a cold war that stretched on for several centuries. But what they did not know was that one human had survived. One last Terran, a super-soldier employed by the most powerful military humanity had ever conceived. Jose Rodriguez awakens from stasis sleep to find himself alone, his entire species wiped from the universe. He is the last living Terran. He is the Last Precursor. Do you like Astartes? Do you like Deus Ex? Ever read Chrysalis? What about this music video? How about this one? If you enjoyed several or all of the above, you will enjoy The Last Precursor :)
8 196 - In Serial8 Chapters
THE DEVIL'S EYES (Michael Myers x (WEREWOLF) Reader)
you had been in many mental hospitals as a kid from a 'accident' , you traveled from town to town never staying in one place to long because people were on the look out for you until you come to a little town , Haddonfield Illinois were you meet a little girl with a strange passed , Jamie Lloyd and Halloween is coming ;3
8 189

