《Reincarnated with Narrator》A hero and a Cultivator
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In the outskirts of Reodol Empire, just on the other side of the evil forest where Leo's village situated on. A black haired with black eyes youth was flying to the evil forests. His face was pale and there's a stab wound near his heart.
Behind him, was a group of knights riding a pegasus chasing him.
"Just surrender now traitor Katakiuchi Hiiro!" (Knights Commander)
"FUCK YOU! AFTER I SAVE YOUR EMPIRE YOU'RE JUST GONNA KILL ME?! IN YOUR DAMN FUCKING DREAMS!!! I'LL FUCKING DESTROY YOUR COUNTRY!!!" (Katakiuchi Hiiro)
"Hmp! You are useless to us now. You are no longer a hero! Why would we keep you? You want to destroy our empire? In your dreams! Men! Heed my command! Kill that man with all you've got!!" (Knights Commander)
"Fireball!"
"Thunder!"
"Ice spear!"
"Wind blade!"
Different magic hurled towards Katakiuchi Hiiro. He manage to dodge some of this magic while he let others hit him in the back. He used the force of that magic to accelerate his speed and run towards the evil forest.
"Tsk! You won't be able to run forever Katakiuchi Hiiro! Just accept your fate and die peacefully!" (Knights Commander)
After gaining some distance, Katakiuchi Hiiro turned around and looked at the direction of the Knight's Commander. As if his eyes couldn't see him and was looking behind him.
Katakiuchi Hiiro said while gasping.
"Hah~ hah~ hah~ You thought you could kill me?! Hahaha! Remember this Reodel Empire! I will come back and will kill every last of you! I won't stop until I eliminate your country in this fucking world!!" (Katakiuchi Hiiro)
As if noticing something, the Knight's Commander shouted.
"Shit! He's going to teleport! Attack him! Thunder blaze spear!!" (Knight's Commander)
"Greater Teleportation!!!!" (Katakiuchi Hiiro)
Katakiuchi Hiiro activated his magic, but before it could completely envelope him, the Knight's Commander's magic spell hit his abdomen leaving a gaping hole in it. Then he got teleported away.
"You won't survive that attack. Hehehe. Men! Retreat!" (Knight's Commander)
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""Yes!""
"Oh. by the way. Spread the news that, the Hero from the other world was killed by the king of the beastmen. Hehehe" (Knight's Commander)
""Yes!""
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Inside of the evil forest, 50km away from the village Leo was in. Dark rumbling clouds suddenly appeared out of nowhere. This startled the nearby magical beasts. The magical beasts began running away from the area the dark clouds covered. They flee in full speed.
Numerous thunder and lightning pillars started descending on the dark clouds. Annihilating everything it hit. The dark clouds started to rotate and made a hole in its center. Its the eye of the storm.
After the eye of the storm appeared. The thunder and lightnings that continue to strike down randomly, started focusing its power in the eye.
After sometime, a purple light descended in the eye of the storm. The thunders and lightning became more powerful as if it want to destroy that purple light, but to no avail failed.
But not long after the purple light appeared, a human figure slowly decent in it. Following the purple light's path.
Suddenly the thunder and lightning became even more powerful after seeing this figure. As if became enrage, the bluish white colored thunder and lightning became red. It assaulted the figure inside the purple light.
The purple light could no longer block the attack of the thunder and lightning and began to colapse. As for the human figure inside it, it naturally became the focus of all the thunder and lightning in the vicinity wanting to kill it.
"Haaaaaaaaaa!!"
The figure started to shout and block all the thunders and lightning that attacking him while he was forcing himself to descend to the ground.
This scene continued for a whole day, before the dark clouds completely dissipated. The area that was covered by the dark coulds was now black and scorched. Not a single tree remain.
In its center, an old man who was scorched by lightning lying down in there. Gasping for breath.
"Who would have thought... Hah~ hah~ I, the great cultivator, Yue Feng, will meet his demise here. Hah~ hah~ damn you heavens! I thought the only tribulation I will only face... Hah~ hah~.. is the ascending tribulation. Why is there a tribulation upon entering this realm?! Damn it!" (Yue Feng)
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The old man, Yue Feng, who claim himself the great cultivator started to cry. He didn't expect that he will die just after ascending from his realm.
"Shit. *Sob* Damn it! *Sob* My dantian already shattered and my soul is slowly dissipating. I can only live for 5-7 years huh. Shit. I can't accept this." (Yue Feng)
For a cultivator, his dantian is the second most important thing in his life. This is where he built his foundation and his source of his strength. But that it already shattered, his cultivation is basically gone. Starting today, he will just an old man with great knowledge and great physical body.
"Damn it! Why am I crying?! If my enemies learned I'm crying like a little girl, they will mocked me to death! So what if I can't cultivate anymore?! Can't I just take a disciple and make him the strongest?!" (Yue Feng)
As a cultivator who lived for hundreds of years. His heart and will are strong, enough to accept the fact that he won't be able to cultivate anymore.
Yue Feng, having made is resolved, wanted to wipe his tears but couldn't move. He was still paralyzed by the thunder and lightning.
"I guess all I can do now is to wait till I could move and find a disciple who is fated with me." (Yue Feng)
Suddenly, as if the heavens answered his prayers. He heard a twig breaking not far away from him.
"Eh? Ah burned corpse? Did he got strucked by lightning? Thats fucking sucks."
He heard an 8 years old boy talking to himself. When Yue Feng heard this boy, his eyes lit up and called out this little boy.
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[Is there a storm? Yesterday weather is really wierd. Its clearly sunny but the sky suddenly got covered in dark clouds. And what the heck its that? There's no rain! Just thunders and lightning and it lasted whole day! Is this kind of weather is normal here in Evil Forest?]
Leo, who's already fully recovered after being unconscious for 1 whole month, was now strolling inside of the evil forest. The reason for him to entered the evil forest alone is to capture beast.
[Yep yep. I'm really slow, the reason 'me' still haven't practiced beast taming because I still can't! But now? I could do it now. I have a perfect control of my physical strength and mana inside me. I won't make the same mistake again when I was 1 year old! But where is the beasts though?]
Yesterday, full with enthusiasm, Leo entered the evil forest. He wanted to catch a powerful magical beast and make it the guard dog of his village. He already have a target in his mind of what kind of magic beast he wants.
But when he already saw a beast that entered his criteria. The clouds in the sky became dark near the area where he is yesterday, then it suddenly released a continuous powerful thunder and light strike. Even though he's far he could feel the power of the thunder and lightning that the dark clouds spout out. Of course, Leo saw it too that it's like targeting 'something'.
He decided to investigate it after it calm down. But what he didn't expect it will last a whole day without stopping.
[I'm really curious what is that thing that attracted the thunder and lightning yesterday. If I could get it I'm sure It would be useful to me.]
While deep in his thoughts. He arrived at the place where the thunder and lightning strike. There he saw a burned corpse. When Leo saw that, he blurted out,
"Eh? Ah burned corpse? Did he got strucked by lightning? Thats fucking sucks."
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