《Ode to Freud》Extra Chapter 8 : Hot Bath Day (2)
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Disclaimer: This chapter has commentaries of genital nature with hints of sexual meaning regarding underage fictional characters. There isn’t any sex act, but more sensitive audiences should be warned.
Today is hot bath day. First of the year.
And we will go first again.
Me and Jacen, that is.
But today Alvin will join us as well.
Why should it be my responsibility to take care of bathing both of them?!
Well, no use complaining. It’s only because I do this that mother allows me to bath first.
Let’s go.
Sandals are ready.
The water is warm already, and the fire seems to have enough fuel.
“Okay, both of you can take your clothes off.”
Jacen strips his clothes in a few seconds only. Alvin is taking his time, but it doesn’t matter.
He probably has a stiff.
Jacen was like this in his age as well. But he wasn’t ashamed of it. He would even ask me to rub him when I was bathing him. Mother said it’s normal in kids this age. That they don’t know what they are doing and I should just ignore it.
There. He is ready to start. I take my own clothes off and take the towel.
I rub his back, armpits, arms, groin, butt and legs. He is also using sandals since the kitchen is bare ground, so I ask him to seat on the stool at once, so I can rub the soils of his feet. He himself takes care of rubbing his neck, face and ears.
“Can you wash it yourself?”
He nods and wash his manhood by himself. Meanwhile I take one of the buckets and splash some water in his hair. I scrub it with one hand while washing with the other, and get all the dirt out of it.
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It’s finally over with him.
“I will wash All now.”
He gets out of the stool and I look at All.
“Why haven’t you took your clothes out yet?”
All is still wearing his pants. He looks troubled.
“Take it off, common.”
He obediently starts to take his pants down.
So slow!
“Here, I will help you.”
I take his pants down and seat him in the stool.
He has a stiff, indeed. That must be why he is embarrassed. He always gets embarrassed when people notice that he has one.
Well, I will just finish quick and we can take our bath.
I take a towel and start rubbing him.
It’s no use giving him one, since he doesn’t know how to bathe.
So I rub him like I did with Jacen, except for two things.
First, I begin with his face, neck and ears.
Second, I wash his manhood myself.
Or I try to.
The moment I get close to it he closes his legs.
“Stop that All. I have to clean you.”
“Ah, onee-chan… that place… it’s no good..”
Onee-chan, onee-chan, always this weird thing he invented. Why doesn’t he call me “older sister” or “Ann” like everybody else?
I’m not anger at him, but it’s weird he hasn’t forgotten this weird word. He invented it when he was much younger and didn’t knew his words, so shouldn’t it have disappeared by now?
Whatever.
“What is what? Stop being silly. You have to wash everything, or you can get a disease. Mother told me so.”
“T-then I will do it myself.”
“Do you know how?”
I present him with the towel.
Why am I feeling a bit disappointed?
What a weird thing.
Forget it. Doesn’t matter.
“Ah.. onee-chan… I… shouldn’t but I… n-no.. I…”
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There, he opened his legs, finally. Not without some rubberish mumbling.
I take it between my fingers, pull down gently and rub it. And it’s done.
Why is he flinching? It’s cute seeing how red he is, but there shouldn’t be any reason for that.
… I want to tease him a little. But that’s stupid.
Next I take the bucket and wash his hair.
It’s my turn to wash now.
“Okay, both of you can get in the tub. I will wash myself.”
Jacen didn’t lose a moment. He jumps on the tub splashing water everywhere.
“Good heavens Jacen, didn’t I told you not to jump in the tub?! You are wasting water!”
Water I had to fetch for half a day!
At least All hasn’t jumped in a well.
… he isn’t there.
He is here still.
“All. You can go.”
“Ah.. no.. I… sis… can I help you wash?”
What is this?
Isn’t this brother of mine the cutest?
I can’t get mad at him.
And there comes Jacen.
“Ann! Me too!”
And now he is walking on the bare ground without his sandals.
The sole of his feet is all dirty, no doubt. I will have to scrub it again.
But still, I can’t get mad at them.
I take two towels and give one to each of them.
“Okay, you can rub my legs.”
So they start helping me wash. Jacen is just a mess, but All is doing it well.
… isn’t All reaching to some pretty weird places?
I guess he is curious, but I shouldn’t let he do it.
I don’t really mind if he touches… but mother is very strict with these things… she may forbid me to take bath first if I let this keep going.
“All.”
“W-what…”
“I will wash that myself. No need to help.”
“S..sorry.”
“Don’t worry”
Well, he is scrubbing my legs again.
All is good when it ends good.
Then, after washing Jacen’s feet again, we could finally enjoy the bath.
“Puaaah!”
“Puaaah!”
“…bllrrr..”
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